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a forced romance, the need to read how he wrote the story, 0 punctuation. Every thing just put in one sentence. what dialogue what monologue, what narrative. sometimes i feel like the author is just some middle schooler
At first, i thought this would be an 'ok' story. But after reading up to chapter 10 it become obvious that the author is simply trying to increase the chapter count. I can summarise the first ten chapters under 10 lines. Some times it feels like the synopsis is bigger then the chapters. Also the concept of the story was pretty good but the characters are so one dimensional and the logic behind the actions taken makes almost no sense. MC's personality changes in every other chapter. It's like he isn't the same person. All together, if you read this with your brain turned off, it's a fairly decent read.
I personally hate these types of fanfics cause it feels like the guy is being played with. When you think about shadow monarch you think of someone op but then comes this shit where it feels like the guy is being manipulated and played with. Its disgusting.
I enjoy this story, I really do, but I want to say somethings if anyone’s just getting into the story. It’s really slow paced, like I mean really slow paced. In the first 131 chapters we’ve had like 3 slow arcs in total. There’s also tons of grammatical errors, none of them are huge and I’ve seen worse, but it can get pretty hard to read at times. It also uses an AU ending of Solo Leveling. Final comment, the system part is lost as Grayfia “fails”. She doesn’t actually, but it’s pretty much useless now and she disappears from the story and we she hasn’t returned yet. I’m not trying to spoil anything but it’s a major plot hole and my least favorite part of the story.
if you are looking for a overpower main character with the powers of Shadow monarch then this is the one
the story is interesting and with potential, but the implementation, although it is not so bad that you want to quit it from the first chapter, but after a couple dozen chapters, well, or in the middle, you want to, well, I wanted to for sure
can yall pls checkout my new story that I published im new and would like some advice u can be rude dont hold back PLSSSSSSSS
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No leí todavía pero el fanfic por la descripción me recuerda a lo de un dragón de oro en el que justamente grayfia también tenia que ganarse su corazon ...
Though this has a potential of becoming a pretty good fan fic if the author played the cards right but unfortunately, it got annoying after 30 chapters. Even though he already has a pre established excellent story and a huge information from fandoms and wiki, he is not using it at all, and he is trying making Hestia overly dumb, though she is a bit airhead still she is one of the most powerful goddess, she doesn't show it because she don't like flaunting her powers. And can you stop trying to fill the chapters with info dumb, every chapter after 30 th has half them containing useless information dumb. I know it my personal opinion as a webnovel reader having read hundreds of novels and fanfic, you have the potential you don't need to rush just one time read your own story, you find out yourself your weakness. thanks for the Fanfic
This I great and all, and I'm proud of your commitment, but my god can you tell when you had to cook on your own. The drop I'm quality made me question my own sexuality. gay/10 would not recommend for the weak.
What the heck did you do tour boy jin woo and the comanders what is with the nerf
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The theme is interesting, but the way it is executed leaves a lot to be desired, the chapters need editing. But more problematic than that, the MC's personality has nothing to do with Jinwoo, it seems that someone (generic) went into the body of the shadow monarch and now tries to live like him, and without intelligence too... Funny... I expected something similar to the DXD:Golden fanfic... and really if you include jinwoo it would make a very interesting finfic, I hope the author is successful in this endeavor hahaha
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Well, it's a childish power fantasy, the protagonist is an almighty god who is at the top of the universe, if it is universal power, he is cold to everyone except women, he is useless who only serves to be in a corner thinking about how strong he is
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Story wise, it's enjoyable for me. But man, the writing... The writing makes it a little hard to read. If you can, Author, please seek an editor. Let alone the grammar, even the punctuations make it hard to understand some paragraph. There are also some words missing. Also why you make our Sung Drip Woo a typical dense MC 😔
Well, I don't remember what I give to a golden peerage, something around 3 stars. Because Idea that this old all - powerful dude being a braindead simp, is extremely infuriating for me. Like come on, you have thousand of years to think about others, about yourself, but you was just too focused on sleeping and r#tatred, is that idea? Where do you find such clown? And lo and behold, exactly the same thing but with shadow monarch... Apparently, he was strangled in his lonesome life for a 700 year, having a great power and understanding, but couldn't come up with any way to find new planet for himself, or somehow seal himself to go back. Okay, fine... I could believe in that, he was a fighter, not a thinker. But somehow, he doesn't change much In character in this 70p years of his life, and start to simp in the first Lady that he found out on a realm... Sigh...Wow, as pathetic as richter(or whatever this dumb lizard was called) . Subarashi. And as author role model, it's too have a lot of weird errors about dxd world. Like author doesn't even try to read wiki, and just use whatever he remembered from other fanfics. Bruuuh. And it's written badly on top all of this... So yeah, original was trash, and now there is botleg copy of that. I don't know what to think...
great story please complete this i believe it has potential and i have high expectations for this story love reading this.have been looking for sung jin woo fanfin for a while
Garbage, when I read the title I thought it was going to be a great novel, but it's not, it's a clear copy of the golden nobility, also who is the protagonist? I thought it was Su Jin Woo,Also in the novel he says the gods are afraid of him and that he is too powerful, blah, blah, blah, if we talk about the scale of power at a general level, there are many beings that can kill Su Jin Woo With a single movement, there is a reason why these beings are called gods, they can create lives, destroy and recreate the world, and I don't see the point of them fearing Su Jin Woo.
In the 64 chapters that this fanfic has, there is not one in which it is shown that this story really had any progress, a supposed protagonist who did not appear in much of the story and when he did he was very irrelevant [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
for those who want to start reading this... just skip the whole 40 chapter, it's useless and meaningless to waste your time to read those chapters
Typical beginner's problem, makes the protagonist stupidly powerful, the guy can destroy the universe and has all the gods like scared children. But its existence is completely irrelevant and useless, not very logical in its attitude since the fanaticism of the author and the cold and all-powerful personality of its protagonist collide.
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a forced romance, the need to read how he wrote the story, 0 punctuation. Every thing just put in one sentence. what dialogue what monologue, what narrative. sometimes i feel like the author is just some middle schooler
At first, i thought this would be an 'ok' story. But after reading up to chapter 10 it become obvious that the author is simply trying to increase the chapter count. I can summarise the first ten chapters under 10 lines. Some times it feels like the synopsis is bigger then the chapters. Also the concept of the story was pretty good but the characters are so one dimensional and the logic behind the actions taken makes almost no sense. MC's personality changes in every other chapter. It's like he isn't the same person. All together, if you read this with your brain turned off, it's a fairly decent read.
I personally hate these types of fanfics cause it feels like the guy is being played with. When you think about shadow monarch you think of someone op but then comes this shit where it feels like the guy is being manipulated and played with. Its disgusting.
I enjoy this story, I really do, but I want to say somethings if anyone’s just getting into the story. It’s really slow paced, like I mean really slow paced. In the first 131 chapters we’ve had like 3 slow arcs in total. There’s also tons of grammatical errors, none of them are huge and I’ve seen worse, but it can get pretty hard to read at times. It also uses an AU ending of Solo Leveling. Final comment, the system part is lost as Grayfia “fails”. She doesn’t actually, but it’s pretty much useless now and she disappears from the story and we she hasn’t returned yet. I’m not trying to spoil anything but it’s a major plot hole and my least favorite part of the story.
if you are looking for a overpower main character with the powers of Shadow monarch then this is the one
the story is interesting and with potential, but the implementation, although it is not so bad that you want to quit it from the first chapter, but after a couple dozen chapters, well, or in the middle, you want to, well, I wanted to for sure
can yall pls checkout my new story that I published im new and would like some advice u can be rude dont hold back PLSSSSSSSS
Mc femboy. Mc hace face and body female. [img=disgusted] Mc chinese gai. [img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]
No leí todavía pero el fanfic por la descripción me recuerda a lo de un dragón de oro en el que justamente grayfia también tenia que ganarse su corazon ...
Though this has a potential of becoming a pretty good fan fic if the author played the cards right but unfortunately, it got annoying after 30 chapters. Even though he already has a pre established excellent story and a huge information from fandoms and wiki, he is not using it at all, and he is trying making Hestia overly dumb, though she is a bit airhead still she is one of the most powerful goddess, she doesn't show it because she don't like flaunting her powers. And can you stop trying to fill the chapters with info dumb, every chapter after 30 th has half them containing useless information dumb. I know it my personal opinion as a webnovel reader having read hundreds of novels and fanfic, you have the potential you don't need to rush just one time read your own story, you find out yourself your weakness. thanks for the Fanfic
This I great and all, and I'm proud of your commitment, but my god can you tell when you had to cook on your own. The drop I'm quality made me question my own sexuality. gay/10 would not recommend for the weak.
What the heck did you do tour boy jin woo and the comanders what is with the nerf
thank for chapter[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The theme is interesting, but the way it is executed leaves a lot to be desired, the chapters need editing. But more problematic than that, the MC's personality has nothing to do with Jinwoo, it seems that someone (generic) went into the body of the shadow monarch and now tries to live like him, and without intelligence too... Funny... I expected something similar to the DXD:Golden fanfic... and really if you include jinwoo it would make a very interesting finfic, I hope the author is successful in this endeavor hahaha
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Well, it's a childish power fantasy, the protagonist is an almighty god who is at the top of the universe, if it is universal power, he is cold to everyone except women, he is useless who only serves to be in a corner thinking about how strong he is
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Story wise, it's enjoyable for me. But man, the writing... The writing makes it a little hard to read. If you can, Author, please seek an editor. Let alone the grammar, even the punctuations make it hard to understand some paragraph. There are also some words missing. Also why you make our Sung Drip Woo a typical dense MC 😔
Well, I don't remember what I give to a golden peerage, something around 3 stars. Because Idea that this old all - powerful dude being a braindead simp, is extremely infuriating for me. Like come on, you have thousand of years to think about others, about yourself, but you was just too focused on sleeping and r#tatred, is that idea? Where do you find such clown? And lo and behold, exactly the same thing but with shadow monarch... Apparently, he was strangled in his lonesome life for a 700 year, having a great power and understanding, but couldn't come up with any way to find new planet for himself, or somehow seal himself to go back. Okay, fine... I could believe in that, he was a fighter, not a thinker. But somehow, he doesn't change much In character in this 70p years of his life, and start to simp in the first Lady that he found out on a realm... Sigh...Wow, as pathetic as richter(or whatever this dumb lizard was called) . Subarashi. And as author role model, it's too have a lot of weird errors about dxd world. Like author doesn't even try to read wiki, and just use whatever he remembered from other fanfics. Bruuuh. And it's written badly on top all of this... So yeah, original was trash, and now there is botleg copy of that. I don't know what to think...
great story please complete this i believe it has potential and i have high expectations for this story love reading this.have been looking for sung jin woo fanfin for a while
Garbage, when I read the title I thought it was going to be a great novel, but it's not, it's a clear copy of the golden nobility, also who is the protagonist? I thought it was Su Jin Woo,Also in the novel he says the gods are afraid of him and that he is too powerful, blah, blah, blah, if we talk about the scale of power at a general level, there are many beings that can kill Su Jin Woo With a single movement, there is a reason why these beings are called gods, they can create lives, destroy and recreate the world, and I don't see the point of them fearing Su Jin Woo.
In the 64 chapters that this fanfic has, there is not one in which it is shown that this story really had any progress, a supposed protagonist who did not appear in much of the story and when he did he was very irrelevant [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
for those who want to start reading this... just skip the whole 40 chapter, it's useless and meaningless to waste your time to read those chapters
Typical beginner's problem, makes the protagonist stupidly powerful, the guy can destroy the universe and has all the gods like scared children. But its existence is completely irrelevant and useless, not very logical in its attitude since the fanaticism of the author and the cold and all-powerful personality of its protagonist collide.
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this hurts to read. all wrong nothing is accurate about this 🤕