Lust System in the Murim World

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XxErnestoxX

funny how the Moment it Turns Premium the Story gets worse and dragged. Also its way to early for the Premium Chaps. If you dont Like mind control used on harem Girls dont read.

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DaoistH7599X

Shounen derived pathetic mc, the plot is nonexistant, while the character was a little believable at first then he completely turns into some dumb self justifier, half the chapters become him cheering and hyping himself the other is him pouring his insecurities to be left alone, you might call it character development but he is an adult what is there to develop? he turned into a pathetic loner, now that he has something that could completely dominate the world he gains motivation to do something?, that observe analize act bullsh it during the fights were especially cringy, every heard of mike tyson? everyone has a plan till they are met with a punch in the face. I guess you didn't receive any.

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DaoisthuLXiM

Looks like i found hiden gema👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Comment as episode 50. Worth reading. There are some beautiful places but some places are very arrogant. There are very silly fighting parts, especially in that part, it is very shallow to make nonsense review. Also, the dialogue is very wrong, sometimes there is an ambiguous place between the two conversations, it is not clear whether person A or person B is speaking. chapters are also slow. a novel with potential I hope its potential is shown