BIOLOGICAL SUPERCOMPUTER SYSTEM

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PilgrimJagger

Thanks Everyone for having given my book a shot. If possible leave a review :D[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Wylden_Bond

Writing quality: Top notch. Few if any errors that pull you out of the story. Story Development: Absolutely splendid read, you have a bullied kid, parental problems, PTSD/trauma, then coming across a "Opportunity" this leads to its own set of problems but incredible potential positives outcomes. To a solid bit of foreshadowing of something major occuring in the story early on and gradually picking up into a grand finale of sorts. Can't imagine what we will be getting to experience in this story few hundred chapters from now. Character Design: Solid work here across the board. Consistently expressing other characters and how the occurrences in the story in itself effected them. Showing growth in the main character early on and being consistent with it. Main character isn't broken op and still has enemies but clearly you can see what his growth rate will be like in the future. Updating stability: I want to see 14 chapters a week. I personally read extremely fast. So I'm generally picky here. And I like basically being able to get on every day and getting to read a solid 2 chapters from Novels I am really enjoying. Meh I'm needy/greedy when it comes to good literature can't help it. I just read most of the chapters in burst and caught up to the most recent chapter so I can't judge on this and so forth leaving it at 5 stars until further notice. World Background: Overall solid, the author gives good description of environments that the "present" story is taking place in from schools, training areas, bedrooms and more and has also included this in combat scenes in the use of weapons or defenses. The story has gone over some history but it's been here and there for me, this is probably not what most people will think, it's just what I personally would prefer a bit more in this one specific aspect. Can't help it I'm needy. More I have to read of this the better. Total: 5 out of 5 in each category until further notice. It's definitely caught my eye and I'm now paying attention to it's uploads. Very enjoyable read that makes me want more. To see what's coming next. Final Verdict will be given when the author reaches 1,000 chapters or the novel is otherwise abandoned.

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Bananasenpiiii

my problem with this novel is that the novel has 50% mc pov and 50% other unnecessary detailed story telling,it's just not good with the pacing,so many unnecessary pov killed the joy for me.Otherwise a pretty good story and new ideas.Just the story pacing is too slow for me.

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Peripheral

The authors book provides a great amount of context of the environment with plenty of information. However, his obsession to provide every character their own two page dialogue and Background really ruins the entertainment from the Main story. IDk why he bothers when the reader know's they're a dead Man, EX investigator, and the nightclub kid (Achim). However, this is an Author who Clearly loves to write. I hope to read more of his work as he Improves. P.S Author... you forgot to mention the brain crystal from Martin Hais in chapter 290. (MC Never absorbed it in future chapters)

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AYESHA_FAHIM

Fantastic book, amazing characters, and wonderful worldbuilding, like it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Triskelion

could have became my best novel . author could have not wasted that much chapters for some side story that i felt bored .after this beast horde part somehow make mc go to different country where he can grow fast atleast faster than in current country he lives in

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UrCaterpillar

let's get a general overview. the story is set in a futuristic world with flying cars, robots, and advanced technology. in this world, everyone has a brain crystal that gives them superpowers. our young protagonist, Erik is a bullied student with an F rank power who discovers a system that turns his life around. the world building is intricate to say the least. Pilgrim doesn't spare any effort when It comes to descriptions and paints a vivid image of the background in your head. his words flow together beautifully. the story starts out nice and slow, it doesn't rush the reader nor is it stressful on them. not much can be said about it as of now, it's still a bit early, but there are some rather exciting upcoming arcs which I'm looking forward to. updating stability is excellent too, a solid two chapters everyday. i would say Pilgrim's writing style could use a bit of work though, so could his character design. we'll certainly see improvements in the future. all in all a 10/10 for system lovers, if you're not reading, then i don't know what you're doing :3

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VaibhavMishra

My only problem is that, sometimes I forgot who is the mc here due to multiple pov. 😄😄😄

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Zavia_6318

the mc is too timid , mentally unstable , stupid , and a coward he claimed he had and too prideful and dark

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Damerion

Very good world building. But I am 100 chapter in and barely anything has happened. I have to drop it just cause of how slow paced it is. No one cares about all these side characters.

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Tuupkagtroth

It's good but I'm gon drop it, cuz it's too slow paced, and I don't have the patience to read it. Even if the pace will pick up, I don't want to wait...so yeah. But give it a try if you want.

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AntCGaming

Its a pretty good book its a lot like The bloodline system, however the MC isn't instantly over powered and doesn't revolve around space and space travel. This story has a nice pace to it is written well. The people around MC are not just empty NPCs they feel like people as well which isn't that easy. Anyway keep up the good work look forward to reading more.

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ClamLeader

the MC is pretty dense and nieve, but his background and age kind of explain this. feels like a flawed person who doesn't always make the right choices, not like the author had him make dumb decisions for the plot. the story overall is pretty good and original. The pacing just seems off, I think it may be due to how much the MCs travel is detailed or details about background characters when it's not clear if they are important to the story.

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Jerrysrich1

This novel has a great concept but why isn’t there more technological aspect? It’s called “Biological SUPER COMPUTER!” Meaning that it will deal with biology along with technology. But so far, there isn’t any forum of technology being used/created. It’s already 200 chapters in and the MC barely had any character advancement; still sorta rules by his emotion; severely lack intelligence; and far too naïve. A The MC believes he’s grow and smart to make sound decisions, but so far it’s as if he’s being led by Circumstances, always on the defensive. Hopefully this story will improve; but we will see! Author make sure you add more technology to this novel. There’s so much that could be done!

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Drifting_feathers

can anyone tell me what this ESIGMAD1 and other ranks like this means what is the proper order of these ranks

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Reece_McEvoy

I’m really liking this novel so far, the power system is quite good, and the supercomputer brain AI is a nice take, however the constant change of POV is the only downfall… the back and forth between MC and the military is really jarring, and I end up skipping most of the military chapters because there’s no incentive to care what’s happening to these irrelevant side characters. I’ll keep reading in hopes it gets better as I’m only on chapter 200

This novel is absolutely incredible and unique, unlike anything I have read before. The best part is that the novel just continues to get better and better as the story goes on. The author has taken the genres of the system, apocalypse, supernatural/ sci-fi, and the concepts of superpowers, AI, and advanced tech, and was able to blend them together creating his own unique take that is awesome to read. I recommend this novel to everyone

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VaibhavMishra

In my opinion, only problem in your novel is that it is very slow . if you solve this problem, then this story has very high potential . You should also focus more on Worldbuilding too .