Triskelion

i would say story is good its a clan building with many good twist and turns probllems they face and solutions are believable . but here is the problem author gives lot of unnecessary details like he is explaining how much a particular person is powerful its a full chapter long just explaining try us to imagine but i don't like that

this story is painful lot of things happening in just 2-3 chapters too fast paced. a good potential book ruined i would say

did he even find hanna his cousin till now in eastern continent or even rob

i think when the story ends then its only 3-4 months

this story is like good and bad at same time it wastes its small chapters in introduction of a card that is not mc's or his female friends and come on a whole chapter for only introduction of a card and too slow paced not as a story but as time taken to that many changes literally its 1.7k chapter and its only been what 20 days

overall a good novel read but title doesn't suit the novel i have read till ch 230 i would say its power system more than technology but well good read and good background i hope author complete the book not leave it hanging

a good novel the spend time its funny, intense, emotional overall a good read.but i don't know why after around 800 chapter it got a bit boring and during witches arc it got worse so all i can say i enjoyed this novel it could have been my best but i still rate it high.i will start this authors second book i hope i laugh as much as this book did.

raw name plz ************** . zzx*******

i think this one is correct

this novel has around 30-40% of initial concept of 'paragon of sin' but execution of this novel is very bad i read till 60 chapters and its only R-18 if only author had balanced R-18 with some good story writing it would have became one of my top reads sadly i see good potential of a story going to waste.