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Excelente historia, el MC es bastante entretenido de leer y sabe como manejar a las personas. Adoro sus interacciones con Lin y como estafo a casi todos.
I do not recommend wasting your time on it. I regret that I wasted my time on this I do not recommend wasting your time on it. I regret that I wasted my time on this
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Pocas veces e visto historias tan buenas y complejas, por autores como tú es por lo que la gente sigue pidiendo mejores fanfics... Porque cuando lo comparan contigo veen la gran calidad de tus historias, aquí tienes mi 5 estrellas¡Sigue así!.
Muy buen fanfic me gustó 5 estrellas de excelente ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ si pudiera le daría 10, me hubiera gustado que hubiera post creditos o algo así. Y aunque a veces hay cortes de escena es digerible el protagonista está bien roto y no es algo que me moleste.
One of the best avatar fanfics, I have ever read. So wholesome and adventuresome, it had everything. Although it was rushed but really was a good novel.
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Una historia muy entretenida. Simple, corta y al grano, con un poco de cambio de caracter. No esta mal. ----------------------------------------------------------------
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Almost a perfect fanfic. The only issues are the grammatical errors but that’s it. The author should really remove the harem as the story is not a harem. I will admit the story does drop a little at the end, but it’s still a great story nonetheless. The relationship between Our mc, Asami, and Korra is a fun and interesting one. It’s not a harem, just a threesome. There should probably also be a Yuri tag considering Asami and Korra are still a thing. Love the story. Best legend of Korra fanfic I’ve read.
A truly enjoyable journey to read in commute. Was afraid of the harem, but the throuple ended up working well enough. I would definitely recommend to anyone looking for LOK fanfics.
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A very good fanfiction in Avatar Korra AU. I very much enjoyed reading this story since the plot was good all the way till the end. The grammar didn't have too much problems, which is something I consider a must when reading... And although the MC was a manipulative little ba*ta*d, he at least stayed true to himself till the end and wasn't a hypocrite at all. All in all, highly recommended to anyone who likes this gender.
I am the bone of my sword Steel is my body, Fire is my blood I have created over a thousand blades Unknown to death, nor known to life Have withstood pain to create many weapons Yet those hands will never hold anything So as I pray, Unlimited Blade Works!
Gracias es una de las mejores fan fic de Avatar La Leyenda De KORRA GRACIAS la historia es muy buena cuando la lees note aburre y no se vuelve aburrida Gracias
Sad to see it ends. •́ ‿ ,•̀ಥ‿ಥʕ´• ᴥ•̥`ʔ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ( ；∀；)(´；ω；｀)(･ัω･ั)(╯︵╰,)Ó╭╮Ò( ･ั﹏･ั)(｡ŏ﹏ŏ)(๑´•.̫ • `๑)(´ . .̫ . `)(｡•́︿•̀｡)(｡ﾉω＼｡)(๑´•.̫ • `๑)(ᗒᗩᗕ)( ≧Д≦)
best avatar korra fanfic, that actually finished, that I have ever read keep it up.
Finally a completely finish ff. This ff is great. It has a great story and good romance with asami and korra.Thakyou authour for finishing this ff.🐉🔥💪
even though the ending was so-so...this was the best avatar fanfic I've read so far and the second best was your other fanfic with the earth bender....I'll be waiting for your next fanfic because you have officially taken the top spot for my favorite fanfic author list. If you ever write an original story I'll support you and any of your other works
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Скатился, был фанфик по аватару а стал AU, какие к черту древние духи, ваату и рава по умолчанию сильнейшие, надуманое появление врагов гг, вообщем скатился в дно, первая половина ещё нормально
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This fanfic is amazing in its own way and while it's fast paced and have high speed gaining of power I don't mind that. the problem here as far as I can see is the stagnation of character development which was acquired by all characters due to the various hardships that they faced I feel they aren't as mature as they should and the story is becoming stale . The second major problem is the lack of innovation in the story I don't say change everything but at least try something unexpected every once in a while .
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🔥A magnificent piece of work. Thanks to the author!🔥👍 One of the few works with a normal ending.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥...................................................
Excelente historia, el MC es bastante entretenido de leer y sabe como manejar a las personas. Adoro sus interacciones con Lin y como estafo a casi todos.
I do not recommend wasting your time on it. I regret that I wasted my time on this I do not recommend wasting your time on it. I regret that I wasted my time on this
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Pocas veces e visto historias tan buenas y complejas, por autores como tú es por lo que la gente sigue pidiendo mejores fanfics... Porque cuando lo comparan contigo veen la gran calidad de tus historias, aquí tienes mi 5 estrellas¡Sigue así!.
Muy buen fanfic me gustó 5 estrellas de excelente ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ si pudiera le daría 10, me hubiera gustado que hubiera post creditos o algo así. Y aunque a veces hay cortes de escena es digerible el protagonista está bien roto y no es algo que me moleste.
One of the best avatar fanfics, I have ever read. So wholesome and adventuresome, it had everything. Although it was rushed but really was a good novel.
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Una historia muy entretenida. Simple, corta y al grano, con un poco de cambio de caracter. No esta mal. ----------------------------------------------------------------
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Almost a perfect fanfic. The only issues are the grammatical errors but that’s it. The author should really remove the harem as the story is not a harem. I will admit the story does drop a little at the end, but it’s still a great story nonetheless. The relationship between Our mc, Asami, and Korra is a fun and interesting one. It’s not a harem, just a threesome. There should probably also be a Yuri tag considering Asami and Korra are still a thing. Love the story. Best legend of Korra fanfic I’ve read.
A truly enjoyable journey to read in commute. Was afraid of the harem, but the throuple ended up working well enough. I would definitely recommend to anyone looking for LOK fanfics.
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A very good fanfiction in Avatar Korra AU. I very much enjoyed reading this story since the plot was good all the way till the end. The grammar didn't have too much problems, which is something I consider a must when reading... And although the MC was a manipulative little ba*ta*d, he at least stayed true to himself till the end and wasn't a hypocrite at all. All in all, highly recommended to anyone who likes this gender.
I am the bone of my sword Steel is my body, Fire is my blood I have created over a thousand blades Unknown to death, nor known to life Have withstood pain to create many weapons Yet those hands will never hold anything So as I pray, Unlimited Blade Works!
Gracias es una de las mejores fan fic de Avatar La Leyenda De KORRA GRACIAS la historia es muy buena cuando la lees note aburre y no se vuelve aburrida Gracias
Sad to see it ends. •́ ‿ ,•̀ಥ‿ಥʕ´• ᴥ•̥`ʔ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ( ；∀；)(´；ω；｀)(･ัω･ั)(╯︵╰,)Ó╭╮Ò( ･ั﹏･ั)(｡ŏ﹏ŏ)(๑´•.̫ • `๑)(´ . .̫ . `)(｡•́︿•̀｡)(｡ﾉω＼｡)(๑´•.̫ • `๑)(ᗒᗩᗕ)( ≧Д≦)
best avatar korra fanfic, that actually finished, that I have ever read keep it up.
Finally a completely finish ff. This ff is great. It has a great story and good romance with asami and korra.Thakyou authour for finishing this ff.🐉🔥💪
even though the ending was so-so...this was the best avatar fanfic I've read so far and the second best was your other fanfic with the earth bender....I'll be waiting for your next fanfic because you have officially taken the top spot for my favorite fanfic author list. If you ever write an original story I'll support you and any of your other works
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Скатился, был фанфик по аватару а стал AU, какие к черту древние духи, ваату и рава по умолчанию сильнейшие, надуманое появление врагов гг, вообщем скатился в дно, первая половина ещё нормально
Tiết lộ Spoiler This fanfic is amazing in its own way and while it's fast paced and have high speed gaining of power I don't mind that. the problem here as far as I can see is the stagnation of character development which was acquired by all characters due to the various hardships that they faced I feel they aren't as mature as they should and the story is becoming stale . The second major problem is the lack of innovation in the story I don't say change everything but at least try something unexpected every once in a while .
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🔥A magnificent piece of work. Thanks to the author!🔥👍 One of the few works with a normal ending.🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥...................................................