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Viết đánh giáA decent ff but there are so many grammar mistakes that makes the FF worse than it should be. Maybe proofread it or something or use Grammary. But anyway, hope it improves
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If I could give it 10 stars I would give it to this Fic. Amazing Fic, hurts that cuts the interesting scenes, but still, a genius.[img=actualizar]
One of the best "Legend of Korra" fanfictions out their especially in webnovel. I really hope the author complete the novel. The MC has a decent ability while still not being over powered.
Is the idea bad? no. it's quite good actually I never saw any avatar: legend of korra fanfiction before so that's cool to see, but the problem is that the pacing is just too fast. I remember I read this at chapter 5 and everything seemed okay but it's just that I feel like the MC is getting way too powerful way too quickly for it to be a week to strong (30chps is too short IMO). I know persons might not see it as a problem but I do. Also, the relationships seem forced because the fall in love way too quickly and there was not enough time to see how they fell in love. What it seems to me is that the author had a well thought out love story and then he chopped out some pieces to be able to put out more chapters faster. Now it feels more like "hey there's a hot guy, wow our chemistry is perfect even though it's our first time meeting. let's have s*x", you know? I know there hasn't been any lemon scenes yet but I'm just saying it feels like ever since the MC met his two team mates, it went down hill. Maybe because it's a harem but yeah, the author let me down.
El mejor fan fic de avatar Korra me gusta que no cambies la personalidad del mc como quien hacer muchos autores que sea fiel a sus creencias y la forma en que desarrollaste la historia es muy entretenida la forma en que fuiste uniendo pequeños detalles como que debía a la mafia Lugo tuvo que destruirlos y al final de sirvió tanto para incorporarse a la trama como su relación con su suegro
Very entertaining and good character development. [img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
Can you pass the link in the comments? I can't copy it like that. I really like your story by the way, even if we don't speak the same language
Tiết lộ SpoilerРебят не знаете как на русском читать? Вебновелла блокирует другие части А в приложении только на английском 😭 ...........................
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The writing is a lot better than his previous fic while the author also has stable updates. My only issue with the novel has to do with how often and fast the mc becomes a grandmaster. Hes not even been there for a year but he goes from a well known gambler with a huge debt and trash bending skills to the best lighting bender to ever exist within 15 chapters. At least have him transmigrate a year earlier with a time skip or something. It just doesn’t make a whole lotta sense progression wise since there’s a lotta content in legend of korra and hes already almost at what should be max level. It just makes fights less intresting and increadibly predictable. And you’ll notice this in chapter 30 when he fights Amon and his brother along with all the chi blocker. He knocks out chi blockers and then runs to Amon only to get bloodbended on just to make his blood bending useless by using chi to throw out something called heavenly blast? bomb? Something crazy. Then they run away. End of fight. And that’s the most content you’ll ever get out of a fight. What could have been 3 chapters worth of content became 1 because the mc is just that over powered. Other than that I dont think that a herem makes a lotta sense in legend of korra but thats authors choice and the fanfic has been pretty good so far. Also it’s been a while since I’ve read the first 10 chapters since i basically binged this from chapter 10 (where I left off) but Im pretty sure mc said he would kill unalaq. As a recommendation dont, I just don’t see why the mc would even care. If anything, from what I’ve read he would take advantage of the chaos and open a spirit bending school, or investing in technology with the spirit vines as material. Seeing as the weapons with spirit vines were able to be used to make powerful lazers capable of mass destruction. I don’t see why they cant be used as a new energy sorce since the electrical grid was messed up when the spirit world merged. Character design and world background is alright. I haven’t noticed any major flaws. So I can say with confidence its worth the read. Its especially nice to see how much the author has improved since his last work. For me the last fic was borderline unreadable while this one only has minor issues that can easily be read through. Thank for your hard work author and I recommend giving the novel a try.
The best fanfic of Korra I have ever seen! The author has a solid character build that goes along well with the plot. He has other wonderful books too .
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Tiết lộ SpoilerGreat fanfic of Avatar LoK i would rate it at the same level as Playing as a Bender based on Avatar the last airbender though a bit similar but also different at the same time in that both of the mcs character design and backstory are different and both don’t have the same motivations to do what they do so you get a change of perspective
J'ai beaucoup aimé. Il est dommage qu'on est pas la même unité monétaire. C'est la première fan foc qui m'a pleinement satisfait. Bon travail.
Tiết lộ SpoilerPro Plenty of original content, not just another summary of the show with superficial elements added to it. Con Mc is genuinely unlikeable
It's so hard to find a good Legend of Korra fanfic nowadays. I have really enjoyed the story so far and really hope you don't drop it. Thanks for an awesome fanfic!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I'll do a proper review along with my other acc once it reaches a 100 chapters, I hope you would let MC have his way on Korra and Asami, preferably letting both acknowledge their feelings with each other while being on a relationship with MC, Kinda hot tbh and it would be beneficial cause less of the drama in the harem. Do it canon style 🤣 Nonetheless, it's a selfish whims of mine hoping for this outcome.
What can I say? It's Blazuki. Harem, power, characters, good plot and etc. Good ff yet again. ( ´◡‿ゝ◡`)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(✯ᴗ✯)( ꈍᴗꈍ)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(✯ᴗ✯)( ꈍᴗꈍ)(◠‿◕)( ꈍᴗꈍ)
High expectation to this fanfic very good so far love the leveling system decent grammar .................................................................................................................
not many of this avatar ff... so please dont dropped this... iits good story so far. from weak to strong and the mc feels alive cuz of reality of his life and overall this is one of the best avatar ff... keep going
Tiết lộ Spoilerthanks for providing another amazing ff author. Hats Off To You!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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A decent ff but there are so many grammar mistakes that makes the FF worse than it should be. Maybe proofread it or something or use Grammary. But anyway, hope it improves
Lemon??? +18??? Lolis??? ..................................................................................................................................
Gooooooooooooooooóoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
If I could give it 10 stars I would give it to this Fic. Amazing Fic, hurts that cuts the interesting scenes, but still, a genius.[img=actualizar]
One of the best "Legend of Korra" fanfictions out their especially in webnovel. I really hope the author complete the novel. The MC has a decent ability while still not being over powered.
Is the idea bad? no. it's quite good actually I never saw any avatar: legend of korra fanfiction before so that's cool to see, but the problem is that the pacing is just too fast. I remember I read this at chapter 5 and everything seemed okay but it's just that I feel like the MC is getting way too powerful way too quickly for it to be a week to strong (30chps is too short IMO). I know persons might not see it as a problem but I do. Also, the relationships seem forced because the fall in love way too quickly and there was not enough time to see how they fell in love. What it seems to me is that the author had a well thought out love story and then he chopped out some pieces to be able to put out more chapters faster. Now it feels more like "hey there's a hot guy, wow our chemistry is perfect even though it's our first time meeting. let's have s*x", you know? I know there hasn't been any lemon scenes yet but I'm just saying it feels like ever since the MC met his two team mates, it went down hill. Maybe because it's a harem but yeah, the author let me down.
El mejor fan fic de avatar Korra me gusta que no cambies la personalidad del mc como quien hacer muchos autores que sea fiel a sus creencias y la forma en que desarrollaste la historia es muy entretenida la forma en que fuiste uniendo pequeños detalles como que debía a la mafia Lugo tuvo que destruirlos y al final de sirvió tanto para incorporarse a la trama como su relación con su suegro
Very entertaining and good character development. [img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]
Can you pass the link in the comments? I can't copy it like that. I really like your story by the way, even if we don't speak the same language
Tiết lộ SpoilerРебят не знаете как на русском читать? Вебновелла блокирует другие части А в приложении только на английском 😭 ...........................
webnovel is forcing readers to use their app so author post your story on another page so we can continue reading your story please. webnovel is forcing readers to use their app so author post your story on another page so we can continue reading your story please.
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The writing is a lot better than his previous fic while the author also has stable updates. My only issue with the novel has to do with how often and fast the mc becomes a grandmaster. Hes not even been there for a year but he goes from a well known gambler with a huge debt and trash bending skills to the best lighting bender to ever exist within 15 chapters. At least have him transmigrate a year earlier with a time skip or something. It just doesn’t make a whole lotta sense progression wise since there’s a lotta content in legend of korra and hes already almost at what should be max level. It just makes fights less intresting and increadibly predictable. And you’ll notice this in chapter 30 when he fights Amon and his brother along with all the chi blocker. He knocks out chi blockers and then runs to Amon only to get bloodbended on just to make his blood bending useless by using chi to throw out something called heavenly blast? bomb? Something crazy. Then they run away. End of fight. And that’s the most content you’ll ever get out of a fight. What could have been 3 chapters worth of content became 1 because the mc is just that over powered. Other than that I dont think that a herem makes a lotta sense in legend of korra but thats authors choice and the fanfic has been pretty good so far. Also it’s been a while since I’ve read the first 10 chapters since i basically binged this from chapter 10 (where I left off) but Im pretty sure mc said he would kill unalaq. As a recommendation dont, I just don’t see why the mc would even care. If anything, from what I’ve read he would take advantage of the chaos and open a spirit bending school, or investing in technology with the spirit vines as material. Seeing as the weapons with spirit vines were able to be used to make powerful lazers capable of mass destruction. I don’t see why they cant be used as a new energy sorce since the electrical grid was messed up when the spirit world merged. Character design and world background is alright. I haven’t noticed any major flaws. So I can say with confidence its worth the read. Its especially nice to see how much the author has improved since his last work. For me the last fic was borderline unreadable while this one only has minor issues that can easily be read through. Thank for your hard work author and I recommend giving the novel a try.
The best fanfic of Korra I have ever seen! The author has a solid character build that goes along well with the plot. He has other wonderful books too .
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Tiết lộ SpoilerGreat fanfic of Avatar LoK i would rate it at the same level as Playing as a Bender based on Avatar the last airbender though a bit similar but also different at the same time in that both of the mcs character design and backstory are different and both don’t have the same motivations to do what they do so you get a change of perspective
J'ai beaucoup aimé. Il est dommage qu'on est pas la même unité monétaire. C'est la première fan foc qui m'a pleinement satisfait. Bon travail.
Tiết lộ SpoilerPro Plenty of original content, not just another summary of the show with superficial elements added to it. Con Mc is genuinely unlikeable
It's so hard to find a good Legend of Korra fanfic nowadays. I have really enjoyed the story so far and really hope you don't drop it. Thanks for an awesome fanfic!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I'll do a proper review along with my other acc once it reaches a 100 chapters, I hope you would let MC have his way on Korra and Asami, preferably letting both acknowledge their feelings with each other while being on a relationship with MC, Kinda hot tbh and it would be beneficial cause less of the drama in the harem. Do it canon style 🤣 Nonetheless, it's a selfish whims of mine hoping for this outcome.
What can I say? It's Blazuki. Harem, power, characters, good plot and etc. Good ff yet again. ( ´◡‿ゝ◡`)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(✯ᴗ✯)( ꈍᴗꈍ)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(✯ᴗ✯)( ꈍᴗꈍ)(◠‿◕)( ꈍᴗꈍ)
High expectation to this fanfic very good so far love the leveling system decent grammar .................................................................................................................
not many of this avatar ff... so please dont dropped this... iits good story so far. from weak to strong and the mc feels alive cuz of reality of his life and overall this is one of the best avatar ff... keep going
Tiết lộ Spoilerthanks for providing another amazing ff author. Hats Off To You!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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