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In Marvel as Lor-Zod
3.74 (39 số lượng người đọc)
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Normally It's a ROB that Isekai or Tensei you but for me, it was none other than Pickle Rick and he gave me 3 wishes in exchange for me to do him a favor.
"...Hey Kid, I need you to do me a favor.”
“Ok, I’ll do it,” I said with almost no hesitation much to his surprise. “Y-You didn’t even let me finish on what I wanted you to do.” I smile and say, “You’re a rick, correct?”
“Yeah, so?” he responded. “So… Less sass I give, or question, you the more chance I have to make it at the end without being screwed over.” He smiled at my reason and said, “if only Morty had this train of thought our adventures would be 28% less troublesome.”
Felt a like writing this not dropping anything but I just felt it and wrote this
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WARNING !!!! mc gets ntr'ed by Scott. And when he discovers this he doesn't even do anything to Scott or Jean . ...........................................
MC is ntrd but I can understand cause he looks like this llllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
Sorry bruh this is god awful. I tried I really did. It seems fate always laughs at me for wanted a well written superman/super strong character in marvel. They either are written by idiots, or never go past 30k words. Such a letdown it is.
I liked the story when until mc got ntr'd. 😡😭🤬😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😡😭😭😭🤬😭😭😭😭😭
why, did u do that Jean part they could have just broken up, and why does MC try shouldering the weight of the world, this fic is not nice
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NTR trash NTR trash NTR trash , cuck boi cuck boi, don't read if you don't like NTR trash .NTR trash NTR trash NTR trash , cuck boi cuck boi, don't read if you don't like NTR trash .NTR trash NTR trash NTR trash , cuck boi cuck boi, don't read if you don't like NTR trash
I like the story overall, but author your going way too fast, such as describing, entire fight scenes in one sentence + Jean should never have been a choice ororo would have been better, you also skipped loads of stuff. you should try to make the story less fast-paced as that takes away the interest of many readers.
Pretty good, mc is relatable, not a murder hobo or superman. NTR warning. Deals with it like you should irl... I hope he gets a stable relationship even if its just a friendship soon as its getting a bit depressing.
This a heretic's work, do not take a step further if you haven't read it! i would burn the author at the stake if the times were still like back in the day.
Dispite the NTR the story is still good and for anyone who has not read comics NTR happens a lot great book everything from charecters to plot has been great so far can’t wait for the next update
NTR RUN!!!!!!!!!! NTR RUN NTR RUN NTR RUN!!!!!!!!! ........................................................................................
man this is the best marvel story on this site. this is so good. even through the ntr almost made me drop it im glad it didnt. i just hope lor finds a wife thats faithful and through her he finally gets his dream of a family.
It’s a good realistic look at transmigration. I like that some relationships don’t workout. Although I was hoping for no romance. the author thinks before he writes.
I dont like ntr chapter, but all other was very good, it could be one of the Best Marvel fanfic on webnovel, but civil war arc is too long Hdhdgdgdvdvdvvdhdhdhdhdhdhdbbxbxbdhhdydhdhdbbdbdbdbdbbdbdbdbdbdbdbdbbdbdbd
Slowly and with good handwriting¹. This is how I would describe this story if it were like that, it only has good lyrics, really. Well at least the first 9 chapters to be honest. The story seems to move quickly in the first few chapters, but oddly enough, the more you read, it doesn't seem to. Although it is true that after chapter 9 it could be said that the story, now, goes slowly and with good lyrics. The plot is captivating but loose in some places the first 9 chapters, even so, then it completely caught me, really. There's a huge overall improvement to the story, which leaves me wanting more to be honest. In short, it is one of the few FanFiction that I recommend reading and having in your library. That is, doing something slowly/calmly and neatly/orderly results in a better quality product.¹ Atte, by magic.
Factível com a realidade! Gostei..........................................................................................................................
Âm lượng 1
- 1 Chapter 1: Killed not by a ROB but by a Rick 2 years ago
- 2 Chapter 2: Power over the years 2 years ago
- 3 Chapter 3: The Worldo 2 years ago
- 4 Chapter 4: It's coming slowly but surely 2 years ago
- 5 Chapter 5: The mission is approching 2 years ago
- 6 Chapter 6: Says what... 2 years ago
- 7 Chapter 7: The domino effect 2 years ago
- 8 Chapter 8: Rebound 2 years ago
- 9 Chapter 9: The first domino fall 2 years ago
- 10 Chapter 10: Meet Captain Marvel. 2 years ago
- 11 Chapter 11: Ronan the five star tour guide! 2 years ago
- 12 Chapter 12: What if I could be free? 2 years ago
- 13 Chapter 13: Acting 101 2 years ago
- 14 Chapter 14: And so it starts! 2 years ago
- 15 Chapter 15: Heavy hitter 2 years ago
- 16 Chapter 16: Welcome back in advance! 2 years ago
- 17 Chapter 17: Got K.Oed!!! 2 years ago
- 18 Chapter 18: Time travel's a bitch! 2 years ago
- 19 Chapter 19: Ennemy within! 2 years ago
- 20 Chapter 20: Birth 2 years ago
I will join the campaign against NTR writers .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................