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I enjoyed reading this novel. It is a unique one on webnovel in the sense that it strays away from the usual plots. And the fl is actually an equal to the ml unlike others where the ml is always stronger. The plot progression was perfect. it wasn't too fast nor too slow. there were some errors here and there but it didn't make it difficult to read. overall it's a 9 out of 10 for me and a must read
I like this story. slightly different from other rebirth stories. great work, author 👏👏👏
Currently, at Chapter 50, 3/4 through the first volume. To the new readers, here is what to expect. This is a book that does a major degree in foreshadowing. Those who do not like it, be warned. At first, the foreshadowing is a bit meh, but later on you can see that the author is in their element, you will actually start thinking along with them and look forward to it. You will just have to wait the meh and uncertain part through, it is just the first 10 or so chapter, where it is uncertain, how the character's are coming to conclusions and where in the world they are, but the smoke starts settling down after 10 or so chapter. Then you get the Protagonist Heather, starting to see the world through a different and much more mature prespective. The book has an epic take on rebirth, and the consequences it has on a person and their psychology, it does not brush away the scars of the protagonist but shows how they are dealing with it. That is why on the scope of Character building it is OP. The story development thpugh slow is not boring. It is also slow, because it show an amzing characterstic of the protagonist, 'time bidding' her favourite hobby. Throughout, the slow pace, you get the clues to solve the greater mystery and see the final act coming together in bits and pieces. I will update more, after I have read further. But otherwise, the book is worth a read. Especially, for those who like a strong and sure FL, who is a toch dramatic and not altogether cold and dispassionate.
The story seems nice and it is perfectly readable, but the writing is just so awkward. like, instead of using debit card, the author says gives the definition instead. I'm trying to get used to the awkwardness, but to me it just might not be worth it. I will give it a few more chapters...
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The idea for the story is great. the characters seem to be thought out and the Worldbuilding is stable. But there are many grammar errors. the promise and what the fmc is trying to do is very very confusing. So much so that no matter what explaination is presented for her actions later on it will still be extremly confusing because vital information is being left out in conversations and the motivations are very unclear.
okay i gonna write review for this novel after i read it for a long time until the newest chapter, and i really loved it very much🥰🥰 cant describe anything for it, love how the story pacing, the character development especially for cyrus😍. and then some flashback about heather and cyrus relationship and i still curious about it needd to waitt more chapter to be revealed more. and everything's amazing. and love the cliffhanger even though i feel really fuming cannot waitt for the next chapter hahaha🤣😅
It is a good read. Lacking in some aspects but you can see how much the author had put into writing it. It has its own uniqueness as compared to the author's Vengeance to the Royal Ones. I recommend that you also give it a try, I am enjoying it with how it flows at the moment. 😊😊😊😊
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Isekai stories are widely available but this has been fun!! It really makes me want to meet truck kun and the everything is just! Looking forward!
So yeah, your author's here again, ready to give myself another review.... It is obviously a five star for me since I am doing my best on this... Enjoying myself... putting my all in thinking... coming up with different things... Everything is in it so I am shamelessly giving myself the best grade out there... ^_^... Please do enjoy reading though, because I assure you, this is a wonderful ride... ^_^
I love this story soooo much I have to thank the author for writing such a wonderful book. and I wish for the author to continue writing the and finishing it .you are a great writer for writing this book full of talent continue doing your great work.
This book is awesome, its trailing and the characters are great. The writing quality, story development is super The author of these novel is so great.
All of the stories na sinulat ni Ms.Llaellen ay magaganda. Kay support and I will keep on reading her works. lahat sila inspiring peace of like ba
I am so glad, that I found such a gem. The writing quality of the author is impressive. The Female lead is funny and smart, I find her way of thinking rather amusing. The world background is also rather stable. I love how the author wrote the charcter's backround info without making it seem boring, like some stories, they just give out facts about the character without putting much emotion into it, which is different to how the author potrayed the info. However
Your author here again.... I will tell you now what to expect... This has a very slow development at the beginning... You might get irritated at how slow it is but once the main plot started it will keep going and the flow will be faster... So I hope once you start you will stick to it until the end... ^_^ Thank you for reading...
I enjoyed reading this novel. It is a unique one on webnovel in the sense that it strays away from the usual plots. And the fl is actually an equal to the ml unlike others where the ml is always stronger. The plot progression was perfect. it wasn't too fast nor too slow. there were some errors here and there but it didn't make it difficult to read. overall it's a 9 out of 10 for me and a must read
I like this story. slightly different from other rebirth stories. great work, author 👏👏👏
Currently, at Chapter 50, 3/4 through the first volume. To the new readers, here is what to expect. This is a book that does a major degree in foreshadowing. Those who do not like it, be warned. At first, the foreshadowing is a bit meh, but later on you can see that the author is in their element, you will actually start thinking along with them and look forward to it. You will just have to wait the meh and uncertain part through, it is just the first 10 or so chapter, where it is uncertain, how the character's are coming to conclusions and where in the world they are, but the smoke starts settling down after 10 or so chapter. Then you get the Protagonist Heather, starting to see the world through a different and much more mature prespective. The book has an epic take on rebirth, and the consequences it has on a person and their psychology, it does not brush away the scars of the protagonist but shows how they are dealing with it. That is why on the scope of Character building it is OP. The story development thpugh slow is not boring. It is also slow, because it show an amzing characterstic of the protagonist, 'time bidding' her favourite hobby. Throughout, the slow pace, you get the clues to solve the greater mystery and see the final act coming together in bits and pieces. I will update more, after I have read further. But otherwise, the book is worth a read. Especially, for those who like a strong and sure FL, who is a toch dramatic and not altogether cold and dispassionate.
The story seems nice and it is perfectly readable, but the writing is just so awkward. like, instead of using debit card, the author says gives the definition instead. I'm trying to get used to the awkwardness, but to me it just might not be worth it. I will give it a few more chapters...
wonderfull [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The idea for the story is great. the characters seem to be thought out and the Worldbuilding is stable. But there are many grammar errors. the promise and what the fmc is trying to do is very very confusing. So much so that no matter what explaination is presented for her actions later on it will still be extremly confusing because vital information is being left out in conversations and the motivations are very unclear.
okay i gonna write review for this novel after i read it for a long time until the newest chapter, and i really loved it very much🥰🥰 cant describe anything for it, love how the story pacing, the character development especially for cyrus😍. and then some flashback about heather and cyrus relationship and i still curious about it needd to waitt more chapter to be revealed more. and everything's amazing. and love the cliffhanger even though i feel really fuming cannot waitt for the next chapter hahaha🤣😅
It is a good read. Lacking in some aspects but you can see how much the author had put into writing it. It has its own uniqueness as compared to the author's Vengeance to the Royal Ones. I recommend that you also give it a try, I am enjoying it with how it flows at the moment. 😊😊😊😊
wowwwww a new cover ❤❤❤❤❤ looks so good❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤
Isekai stories are widely available but this has been fun!! It really makes me want to meet truck kun and the everything is just! Looking forward!
So yeah, your author's here again, ready to give myself another review.... It is obviously a five star for me since I am doing my best on this... Enjoying myself... putting my all in thinking... coming up with different things... Everything is in it so I am shamelessly giving myself the best grade out there... ^_^... Please do enjoy reading though, because I assure you, this is a wonderful ride... ^_^
I love this story soooo much I have to thank the author for writing such a wonderful book. and I wish for the author to continue writing the and finishing it .you are a great writer for writing this book full of talent continue doing your great work.
This book is awesome, its trailing and the characters are great. The writing quality, story development is super The author of these novel is so great.
All of the stories na sinulat ni Ms.Llaellen ay magaganda. Kay support and I will keep on reading her works. lahat sila inspiring peace of like ba
I am so glad, that I found such a gem. The writing quality of the author is impressive. The Female lead is funny and smart, I find her way of thinking rather amusing. The world background is also rather stable. I love how the author wrote the charcter's backround info without making it seem boring, like some stories, they just give out facts about the character without putting much emotion into it, which is different to how the author potrayed the info. However
Your author here again.... I will tell you now what to expect... This has a very slow development at the beginning... You might get irritated at how slow it is but once the main plot started it will keep going and the flow will be faster... So I hope once you start you will stick to it until the end... ^_^ Thank you for reading...