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2017-09-14 đã tham gia United States
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JefferyM
JefferyM
1 years ago
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Dishonorable she sold herself and now is looking to renege.

JefferyM
JefferyM
1 years ago
Commented

Is this suppose to be a western fantasy? Because, killing a whole noble family for a daughter's murder, would be inviting rebellion, collective responsibility... Even killing a noble daughter without a trial, would be courting rebellion. I know in the east it was somewhat different, but the western names.. Even taking away the families nobility for her crime would court rebellion.

JefferyM
JefferyM
1 years ago
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The story king is dead, long live the king. He would not be a prince, in most hereditary monarchies accession is automatic upon death of the monarch. Unless there is some form of electoral process your MC woke up as the emperor not a prince. but then again it is your fantasy novel, but you should come up with some backstory to explain this anomaly..

Now that the Emperor is dead, the next in line for the throne would be Alexander Romanoff, i.e. him.

Reincarnated as an Imperial Prince

Reincarnated as an Imperial Prince

History · SorryImJustDiamond

JefferyM
JefferyM
1 years ago
Commented

The wife of an emperor is an empress...

Alexander Romanoff was the only son of Emperor Nicholas III and Queen Alexandra. The only boy in the royal family and has four sisters.

Reincarnated as an Imperial Prince

Reincarnated as an Imperial Prince

History · SorryImJustDiamond

JefferyM
JefferyM
1 years ago
Posted

The story seems nice and it is perfectly readable, but the writing is just so awkward. like, instead of using debit card, the author says gives the definition instead. I'm trying to get used to the awkwardness, but to me it just might not be worth it. I will give it a few more chapters...

JefferyM
JefferyM
1 years ago
Commented

Is Morgan a girl or a boy?

JefferyM
JefferyM
1 years ago
Commented

Maybe her grandfather realized she was most likely raped, therefore not to be blamed... like any decent person.

JefferyM
JefferyM
1 years ago
Commented

The story seems nice, but the incoherence gives me a headache. I would definitely be willing to give this author another try if their English improves or they get a good editor.

JefferyM
JefferyM
1 years ago
Commented

Does China, really allow employers to punish employees for not allowing themselves to be sexually assaulted?

JefferyM
JefferyM
1 years ago
Commented

Her brother is a mega simp.