New Beginning In The Magical World

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baoxiashun19

I'll be shameless to rate my own story but I know that I work hard for it trust me it might not look that good at the beginning but you will eventually that see everything have improve. The story line is quite slow but I have a big plan for everything.

LV 1

Cin_derella

A great plot and a book with excellent potential, though the grammatical errors are in the way sometimes, it doesn't degrade the book at all. The first chapter and how the MC woke up in a different place brought curiosity in me. I love this book, looking forward to upcoming chapters. Kudos Author!

LV 4

BLANKENDRK

It's a great novel . the plot is great ...keep it up. And please don't drop.

LV 1

Ironiap00

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LV 14

Z_Ril

this is my personal thought about this story. so don't be mad. the plot is good. but there's not really any wow factor to the mc that makes me as a reader wants to discover. Aside from the mc is reincarnated or transmigrated, whatever you want to called it, there's nothing that made me want to wait from the mc. like sudden boost, exciting fact( something that made him special aside being transmigrated ) or anything really. for example, goku which seemingly had no limits, naruto history, bloodline and weird thought process that made him special, Luffy willpower, and dreams, ichigo bloodline etc etc. this is what made a story excellent, in my opinion at least. this story is more focused to the world development other than anything else. you may like it, but it's not forte so to say.

LV 1

RazorReptile

Wow, what can I say, this is amazing I loved the merging and how fluidly the world background was described I'll definitely be reading the next chapters. Cool characters!

LV 2

BlackSnowAngel

What i like about this story is that it had drops of life lessons in the beginning chapters, it was different and i like it. Other thing about the story is that the writing quality gets better and better. You can definitely see the improvement. Keep it up!

LV 2

ImmortalFang

The story is good and worth reading although there are a few minor grammar mistakes but it didn't destroy the immersion of the whole story so keep it up.