Not a bad story at all. great development and a good pace. Its still in the beginning stages but that's fine. There is a lot of potential to the story.
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Very pleasant story to read, something worth taking a moment and checking out. If you are bored and have some time. The chapters are quick pace and smooth. It isnt too long at all. keep it up.
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the story have a nice flow to it. it is easy to read, fun, enjoyable to pass time. peronsally, the first chapter was a bit slow for me, but when you get past that, its gets much more enjoyable. I recommend this story if you are interested in gaming type of story.
A gaming type of story. I enjoyed it. Even though its only a few chapters, i can see the potential in the story. There are a few grammar mistakes but those can be fixed. I like how quick and easy the story is to read and not to heavy. its a great start. keep it up
What i like about this story was how sweet and conise the story moved. It did not have too many stumbling blocks but it was pleasanr overall. I do would like to see a bit more showing at certain times when he feels, other than that its a nice reincarnation story. its only just started but the possibilities is endless.
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original Drezo Regalia
Yami Hikari company had created a new game gear called the Embyro that are split into two different gears: the first is the deep dive gear called ‘Sense’ and the second is high tech glasses called ‘Alive.’ One is made to transport the players mind to a virtual world, while the other is the next generation new technology that incorporates the reality with the game. A game where it test the limits of technology and human boundaries. What is real? What is fake? Who is right or wrong? What is the Seed? Is life just a game? Three different people’s destinies are intertwined: One is on a mission, One wants change in life, and One wants to be left alone. Their story converges in a Virtual Reality MMO game called Growth. This is a story of Zero, Agnis, and BlackStar. Welcome to the Beginning of the End is a Beginning. Let the Song of Infinity ring again. ---------------------------- Hi! This is the very first story I have ever created. I hope you guys like it. ------ Instagram: @songofyamihikari weblink: www.yamihikari.com discord: https://discord.gg/v4FsrEzPyW twitter: https://twitter.com/yamihikarisong ticktock: @songofyamihikari Youtube: Yami Hikari Entertainment286 Chs 44 sưu tầm
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Mind Linker
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Demons are prowling the city floor, and Alexus had never believed that demons existed until now. Luckily, he was resurrected back from his heart attack in the hospital, bringing with him a unique ability. He can see energy as if it was the back of his hand and see beyond the thick veil of the paranormal. What's even crazier is that he is now called an Ouroboros, a being that is not entirely human anymore but something more. He fights to survive in a world where Demons possess the human body, and the demons attempt to kill every last Ouroboros they can find. Still, in a world where Ouroboros are just beginning to bloom, would he be able to make a future for himself or die like every other Ouroboros out there who couldn't make it to Seventh Sanctum. A place where either it's his salvation or his doom. A place where even more dark secrets lie. Is Ouroboros a hero or a villain? Or are they the bringer of destruction to the world? Updated every Wednesday and Sunday ------ Instagram: @songofyamihikari weblink: www.yamihikari.com discord: https://discord.gg/v4FsrEzPyW twitter: https://twitter.com/yamihikarisong ticktock: @songofyamihikari Youtube: Yami Hikari Entertainment81 Chs 120 sưu tầm
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Song of Creation- The Legacy
Aurelius Obscurus Lux. The first species of Obscurus Lux to be ever created in the entirety of the universe. He is alone in the universe, a clean slate, the only existence without a pair. But even still, he pushes forward, trying to find a meaning to his lonely life, especially the meaning of his name. Half the world hates him, while the other half finds him a curiosity that has never been seen before. His life goes into an unexpected turn of events, when Symphonia gives him a sacred task, a task that no being has ever been given. To travel the universe, collect the divine energy, and bring it all back to her. The question is, why him? Why not someone else who is more qualified, mainly because the danger behind such a grandiose task could lead to his death, and where evil thrives in the darkest reaches of the universe. Follow his adventure as he grows up and blooms into adulthood. ----------------------------------------------------- The first 2 volumes are already out on amazon. My personal website is www.yamihikari.com instagram: @songofyamihikari discord:https://discord.gg/v4FsrEzPyW10 Chs 7 sưu tầm
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BlackMoon
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I’m rich! Gahahahaha! Wait.... Noooooooo. I’m eating it? Someone stop me, for once in my life I am considered a billionaire but now I have to resort to eating gold for dessert or my scales will become dull and weak. Sigh....The woes of being a dragon. Especially when I can’t just leisurely spend it on my own whims anymore. Sob. Sob. Wait a moment, what is this? My life is entwined with a demon lord? Why? I want to live a peaceful but fun life. Not resort to having only three choices where it will lead me all down to my own death. This is not fair! Being brought to a new world where monsters, heroes, and even magic resides. Dear god of fortune if you are there please please please stop making gold taste like sweet candy. Instead make it taste like apples. I want some apples right now, sigh. I do not sound like a dragon at all. Also please zap this damn demon lord out of my life! ------------------ Instagram: @songofyamihikari weblink: www.yamihikari.com discord: https://discord.gg/v4FsrEzPyW twitter: https://twitter.com/yamihikarisong ticktock: @songofyamihikari Youtube: Yami Hikari Entertainment - YouTube202 Chs 79 sưu tầm
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Angel's Song: Requiem of the Dreams
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Snow never thought she would ever have an Alien Invasion ever happening to her in her lifetime. It didn’t make sense, until she learned that they were more than just an Alien invader. When the Gods called in help from a different world called Earth, they brought in Alien’s called Earthlings, who were dubbed the “Players” to combat against the dark forces that appeared upon her homeland. As a receptionist for a hunter community, Snow must deal with the ever growing bickering of the Hunters and now the Players in her daily life as she balances out her own. Can she do it? Of course, she just needs to calmly welcome them in with a warm smile and beautiful bow. Snap. Crackle. Pop. Get back in line, damn Players and Hunters! https://linktr.ee/songofyamihikari300 Chs 77 sưu tầm
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"Hold your damn horses, I'm working on it," Jones grumbled under his breath, saying a couple of words in a foreign language that sounded close to Jamaican. He glared at Timothy for rushing him.
Mind Linker
Fantasy · BlackSnowAngel