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The idea is not bad, but had to give up. The dialogues are way too confusing (different dialogue format instead in quotations), in need of editing and grammatical fixing.
Above all else, the biggest problem is writing quality. It's definitely among the worse ones in this platform. The author wants to write in English but uses the Brazilian format, this is simply annoying and makes the reading experience go down a notch. Overall, the writing needs to improve ASAP, as it's truly the biggest sin of this fanfic.
It's really good Review: The story talks about someone who transmigrated in naruto world as danzo's and inherented his memories.. In my opinion the best thing about this novel is it's fighting scenes. Well I RECOMMEND IT FOR WHO WANTS TO TRY SOMETHING NEW (not completely new but yeah )
Bad grammar and bad execution on the author’s part here. The 5-star bots are everywhere so don’t listen to them…………..best I can give you is a 2-3
Что ж, сама история вполне хорошая. Это ж, нихера себе, страну молнии отжали. Хотя, реакция Мито, какая-то ёбнутая, слишком идиалестический взгляд. Что касаемо гг, помимо Хигане будут ещё девушки? Если да, то сколько? Не будет, с Хигане трагедия? А то, бывало, берут ноумнеймовую девушку, делают любовь, все дела, а потом БАЦ, и нету. Убили её, а ГГ либо получает POWER или мотивацию, к воскрешению возлюбленной. Единственный минус, это то, что главы маленькие, сюжет медленно идёт. А так хорошее произведение.
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26 Chaps down, and I can say this one is the kind of refreshment in Naruto ff. For me, I can read your writing no problem. How the interaction going on sometime confuse me with - or " , but I can make it work. There's an indication of romance, but I don't see any indication of Harem. Please don't make it on this kind of ff. Bunch of kids will do, atleast that's my opinion. Story development so far seems like a wish fulfillment, and I'm cool with that. Please continue with your own twist. I haven't got my conclusion on how the power level work on this one, so far it's your weak to strong with author's wish fulfillment. But I'll just give it a try. May author continue the update.[img=update]
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this fanfic is good. good job author-san! this fanfic is good. good job author-san! this fanfic is good. good job author-san! this fanfic is good. good job author-san!
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The guy entered Danzo's body and didn't have any golden fingers. Furthermore, he chose to follow the canonical plot, being the root and refusing the Hokage title. It doesn't seem to me something new or interesting.
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Good fanfic afafafaffafafafafafaffafafafafaffafafafafaffafafafafafaffafafafafafaffafafafafafaffafafafafaffafafafafaffafafafaffafafaffaghhshehshshhshshdhdhdhhdhdhdhdhhdhdhdhhd
I like it very much, please release more chapter's. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🐷
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shitty MTL.. I read until chapter 19 after deciding to drop. met a girl and have a like 5 sentence dialog, girl come hugging and crying can't live without him.
The idea is not bad, but had to give up. The dialogues are way too confusing (different dialogue format instead in quotations), in need of editing and grammatical fixing.
Above all else, the biggest problem is writing quality. It's definitely among the worse ones in this platform. The author wants to write in English but uses the Brazilian format, this is simply annoying and makes the reading experience go down a notch. Overall, the writing needs to improve ASAP, as it's truly the biggest sin of this fanfic.
It's really good Review: The story talks about someone who transmigrated in naruto world as danzo's and inherented his memories.. In my opinion the best thing about this novel is it's fighting scenes. Well I RECOMMEND IT FOR WHO WANTS TO TRY SOMETHING NEW (not completely new but yeah )
Bad grammar and bad execution on the author’s part here. The 5-star bots are everywhere so don’t listen to them…………..best I can give you is a 2-3
Что ж, сама история вполне хорошая. Это ж, нихера себе, страну молнии отжали. Хотя, реакция Мито, какая-то ёбнутая, слишком идиалестический взгляд. Что касаемо гг, помимо Хигане будут ещё девушки? Если да, то сколько? Не будет, с Хигане трагедия? А то, бывало, берут ноумнеймовую девушку, делают любовь, все дела, а потом БАЦ, и нету. Убили её, а ГГ либо получает POWER или мотивацию, к воскрешению возлюбленной. Единственный минус, это то, что главы маленькие, сюжет медленно идёт. А так хорошее произведение.
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26 Chaps down, and I can say this one is the kind of refreshment in Naruto ff. For me, I can read your writing no problem. How the interaction going on sometime confuse me with - or " , but I can make it work. There's an indication of romance, but I don't see any indication of Harem. Please don't make it on this kind of ff. Bunch of kids will do, atleast that's my opinion. Story development so far seems like a wish fulfillment, and I'm cool with that. Please continue with your own twist. I haven't got my conclusion on how the power level work on this one, so far it's your weak to strong with author's wish fulfillment. But I'll just give it a try. May author continue the update.[img=update]
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this fanfic is good. good job author-san! this fanfic is good. good job author-san! this fanfic is good. good job author-san! this fanfic is good. good job author-san!
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The guy entered Danzo's body and didn't have any golden fingers. Furthermore, he chose to follow the canonical plot, being the root and refusing the Hokage title. It doesn't seem to me something new or interesting.
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I like it very much, please release more chapter's. 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🐷
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shitty MTL.. I read until chapter 19 after deciding to drop. met a girl and have a like 5 sentence dialog, girl come hugging and crying can't live without him.