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Dimensional Overhaul

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What was the gods' best creation? Was it man? Could it be the stars that we all gaze upon? Planets that hold life? Or probably the various dimensions that hold all? The answer is simple, the universe! The same universe that comprises all these wonderful creations. The food we eat, the people we look up to, and the mountains which stretch beyond the clouds are all part of one universe.

And among the variety of races, one stood among them all. A race yielding the strongest type of magic, black magic. They were the Genois race. The fact that they were the strongest clouded their minds, why not unify the universe? They thought.

During their rein, they forcibly made other races kneel before them and those who resisted were killed. Upon a mountain of bloodshed, a single man rose to the task of defeating the Genois race. Some called him a 'reaper', others 'a savior' while others squandered his name calling him a murderer.

The single man possessed a special type of visual prowess known as Tsujigens. The five Tsujigens: Tsujigen of force, Tsujigen of space, Tsujigen of time, Tsujigen of power, and the Tsujigen illusion made him an unstoppable force.

With this power, he wiped out the Genois race leaving none. Blessing other races with freedom.

He was hailed as a god!

Mysterious as a ghost!
Yet still a lone man. Alas, not even his mortal body could handle his power causing him to erode. Before his death, he shared his Tsujigens for the next generation in hopes of his resurrection.

In the present, a boy awoke in an unfamiliar world, with no memories of the past, and is left with a symbolic tattoo on his arm which possesses odd powers.

In a universe where magic is the norm, Kevin travels to different worlds, unique in their way, to reclaim his lost memories.

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    MythicBunny

    This is an amazing book! It's almost impossible to find a book such as this, here in webnovel. The writing skills displayed by the author were also amazing, except for the occasional typos here and there. I encourage everyone to read this absolute masterpiece!

    2yr
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    Sunny_Shad0w

    Dimensional Overhaul is one of the few novels that I actually took my time to invest in and read. I found it in my recommendation below my novel, underneath the category "You may also like", and decided to give this novel a try. (The Synopsis was gripping.) From the start, the world automatically has this untameable grip on you, immediately pulling and tossing you into a relentless, harsh, and bitterly cold setting of snow-covered mountains after the vague explanation that was made in the Prologue. It is as if by reading, your emotions can connect to the character and their abrupt transport into this awe-gripping world from the start, showing you the flow of life and the ways of living of the characters. The words construed upon this piece are one to take note of, as in every sentence and description, you can vividly fabricate this image inside your head and follow it through; maybe reinforcing it by the descriptions the author shares to grant this overall immersive style. I for one take full inspiration of this, and hopefully I will be able to replicate it in my works. But that shouldn't be one of your worries. In Dimensional Overhaul, you can HEAR the world, you can SEE the world, listen to its characters, and most importantly, you can FEEL it. That is one of the best elements of writing I absolutely love. For the sake of not spoiling it, I won't elaborate and go into depth on too much of the novel within this review, because I want you to find it out yourself.  All I have to say about this gem of a novel I found among the forest of stories stored in this vista and atlas of narratives, is that this novel is one of the few that actually grip me into suspense, humor, and attention without granting me false and short-term promises like "some other novels." I again encourage and urge you to give Dimensional Overhaul a try. In anyway, you will NOT be disappointed.

    2yr
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    Soleil_Lynx

    Love the title! The storyline is great and the plot is unique. There are also no grammatical errors and it has great fluency in it. Hope to see more. Keep writing!

    3yr
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    dreamwatcher

    the reaper looks like had stolen Thanos's gauntlets and stones.

    2yr
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    Debbie_Asan

    I don't really read fantasy that much. But there is something so captivating about the writing that got me drawn to the story and I was scrolling through pages to read more. And oh my Kevin the protagonist is so likeable. I can't wait for his character growth to unravel as the story unfolds. This story is worth giving a shot

    2yr
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    onedaysomedayy

    This is a great read! The grammar is neat, fluent in details, and shows a variety in character development. It’s always a nice touch when there’s a sense of realism revolving around a character’s beginning of abstaining strength/power. The action-packed chapters are marvelous with crisp details that paint the scenes. It’s hard finding a story that depicts a battle, and the challenges a character faces without being rushed. This is splendid. 5/5

    2yr
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    Ink_Quanta

    Loved it actually...as far as I have read it...It's actually a nice concept...I guess everything seems to be awesome...I love cold and dark....I would say...so I like the way you mentioned it...and also the name Kevin is cool...I loved it

    2yr
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    FA3zy
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    The WritIng skills is superb, the plot twist and even the dimensional worlds are interesting. Please author please continue👍 and goodluck.

    2yr
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    PEARL_WANG

    the synopsis is great the storyline is amazing and the hard work is fantastic the story is worth a read......I liked the title too! Fighting writer.

    2yr
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    Theothegiant

    this is a great story I love it so far //also I know this is kind of shameless but can you guys give me books a read they are books of azalon and decryption//

    2yr
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    Jude_K_1656

    You have a good command of English for your creation and your detailed description I envy most as I'm not fond of long paragraphs of describing anything.

    2yr
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    Guyreth_Obeng

    I love this story. So much action, drama and amazing character building. Keep up the Good work author. I am looking forward to more amazing content by you. This is definitely going to the top

    3yr
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    Moses_Adevu

    I like even how the synopsis introduces you. I t gives you that taste and feel to read the book. Thanks to the author. May we get more of such books from this author. Let us also help him by posting and sharing it on our social media handles.

    3yr
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    Brian_Hanes_117

    The writing quality is superb, the updates are steady, the stop is well developed, the characters are amazing, and this is one of the best stories Webnovel has to offer. Almost a 5 out of 5 stars. The only thing I think it could use is a little more description of what the setting and characters look like.

    3yr
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    Joyon
    LV 2 Badge

    The beginning is a pretty good, A very well-written novel. Has great pacing, the complexity of the world background are amazing. Enjoyable reading. This is one of those books you don't want to miss. Keep it up.

    3yr
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    BrightBrain256

    Awesome art of work by author. Totally loved it. Keep going author 👌👌 Can't wait for more from you author. Definitely will make it to the top.

    3yr
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    Via_Pandalia

    A well action packed novel 😊 Review after reading the latest chapter 25 release. (Warning: Might contain spoilers. Though there is a spoiler tag, I don't want to use it since it removes the space of my review.) Writing Quality. The narratives flows smoothly and the action scenes were describe vividly. There are g-errors but from the author's note, he said that he would be starting fixing it. Other than that everything is written well where you could visualized the story well. Story Development. With the 25 chapters there is still not much reveal yet to the identity of Kevin and his forgotten past. Though you could still somewhat make presumptions on the prologue and synopsis that maybe he is one of those generations who got the power of that most powerful guy? or he could be that guy itself. I guess? Then to the flow of the story, it was quite nice. Since of his memory loss, and really don't have any idea of most things in his surroundings. The readers got to learn more about the world as when he learned something new. Making it really not sounding infodumps. A good use of the ml's situation I must say. Character Design. Alright, Kevin could be somewhat naive well probably because of his memory loss. Lilith, well she is a nice partner for Kevin I guess. Her haugtiness and sometimes snarky speech matched well with Kevin's attitude. The other characters as well are intriguing in their own ways. And I'm curious about the identity of Klein as well. Updating Stability. Though most readers wanted frequent updates but I must say to just take your time author on honing each chapter. Quality > Quantity. World Background. Though there are still many yet to discover but the settings set so far in the story were detailed. From the village, their traits and there were also mentions of other worlds that we would probably see as the story progressed. Overall if you enjoy action packed novels with a touch of superpowers then you will probably enjoy reading this. Keep it up, author!

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    3yr
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    AkuaSenpai

    Very interesting story, it starts with a fair bit of lore and exposition but it works! The writing gets progressively better with each chapter which is always good, there are a lot of updates and consistent chapters. I’m excited to see where this goes.

    3yr
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    Prince_nonchalant

    Firstly, not bad, I must say. The world-building is quite good and the issues are minimal. Loving the MC as well. Synopsis: Could have done a little better tbh. It's not bad but it's not all that captivating either. Could use some work to draw in more readers. Writing Quality: It's far from terrible but there are minor grammatical errors. There are capitalization issues, incorrect word usage, the incorrect form of words, etc. Some readers won't be bothered by this but others might find it quite bothersome so I would advise the author to fix these issues. Story Development: Quite nice honestly. As I've stated before, I like Kevin's character (excluding the weird way his memory loss is brought about). The introduction of his character and the diversity of magic was done well. Character Design: Not much said but this is a matter of preference. I always say this but some readers rather to imagine how their characters look rather than have them described for them. So it goes either way. Overall, not a bad story. It indeed has a lot of potential to become better. I urge you author to keep giving it your best. Great job so far!!

    3yr
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    Chapter 98: Jeff's conviction 2 years ago

    Âm lượng 1 : Dimensional tournament

    1. 1
      Prologue 3 years ago
    2. 2
      Beginning of the journey 3 years ago
    3. 3
      survival of the fittest 3 years ago
    4. 4
      Magic? 3 years ago
    5. 5
      My Power! 3 years ago
    6. 6
      Lilith 3 years ago
    7. 7
      Kirby 3 years ago
    8. 8
      The concept of magic 3 years ago
    9. 9
      Sparring match 3 years ago
    10. 10
      Haku festival 3 years ago
    11. 11
      Norm 3 years ago
    12. 12
      Lilith vs Norm 3 years ago
    13. 13
      The Yemen 3 years ago
    14. 14
      Above my level 3 years ago
    15. 15
      The man wearing the black mask 3 years ago
    16. 16
      Klein 3 years ago
    17. 17
      Test of strength 3 years ago
    18. 18
      Training 3 years ago
    19. 19
      Training 2 3 years ago
    20. 20
      Bandit hunt 3 years ago
    21. 21
      Facing him directly 3 years ago
    22. 22
      Lilith's plan? 3 years ago
    23. 23
      Leach 3 years ago
    24. 24
      A job well done 3 years ago
    25. 25
      The fight has begun 3 years ago
    26. 26
      Asura 3 years ago
    27. 27
      To the top 3 years ago
    28. 28
      The awaited fight 3 years ago
    29. 29
      Lilith vs Norm rematch 3 years ago
    30. 30
      Lilith vs Norm rematch part 2 3 years ago
    31. 31
      Tag team 3 years ago
    32. 32
      The fourth conduit 3 years ago
    33. 33
      Aiken 3 years ago
    34. 34
      An unbeatable force 3 years ago
    35. 35
      Norm's past 3 years ago
    36. 36
      Norm's past part 2 3 years ago
    37. 37
      Norm's past part 3 3 years ago
    38. 38
      Norm's past part 4 3 years ago
    39. 39
      Partners 3 years ago
    40. 40
      Larry Tein 2 years ago
    41. 41
      Doku village 2 years ago
    42. 42
      Marcus 2 years ago
    43. 43
      The injured man 2 years ago
    44. 44
      Electromagnetism 2 years ago
    45. 45
      Anami 2 years ago
    46. 46
      Scrypto? 2 years ago
    47. 47
      Creatures of fire 2 years ago
    48. 48
      Black lightning 2 years ago
    49. 49
      Black and white creature 2 years ago
    50. 50
      The masked swordsman 2 years ago
    51. 51
      Bounty. 2 years ago
    52. 52
      Scarlet 2 years ago
    53. 53
      Madness 2 years ago
    54. 54
      Festival of liberty 2 years ago
    55. 55
      The club 2 years ago
    56. 56
      Yasura 2 years ago
    57. 57
      Let the games begin! 2 years ago
    58. 58
      Shelly. 2 years ago
    59. 59
      Education is key. 2 years ago
    60. 60
      E.s 2 years ago
    61. 61
      Struggle to win 2 years ago
    62. 62
      Battle Royale 2 years ago
    63. 63
      The twins 2 years ago
    64. 64
      Monsters 2 years ago
    65. 65
      Three vs One 2 years ago
    66. 66
      Making friends 2 years ago
    67. 67
      The pinnacle of masculinity 2 years ago
    68. 68
      A disaster 2 years ago
    69. 69
      Camping 2 years ago
    70. 70
      The executioner 2 years ago
    71. 71
      Display of strength 2 years ago
    72. 72
      Display of strength 2 2 years ago
    73. 73
      End of battle royale 2 years ago
    74. 74
      Partying our hearts out 2 years ago
    75. 75
      Abnormality 2 years ago
    76. 76
      The dark truth 2 years ago
    77. 77
      Promise 2 years ago
    78. 78
      Training fire 2 years ago
    79. 79
      Mando 2 years ago
    80. 80
      Hellish training 2 years ago
    81. 81
      Fanservice 2 years ago
    82. 82
      Fan service 2 2 years ago
    83. 83
      Girls fight 2 years ago
    84. 84
      Caged beasts 2 years ago
    85. 85
      Start of the official tournament 2 years ago
    86. 86
      Weak 2 years ago
    87. 87
      Rebecca vs Lilith 2 years ago
    88. 88
      Effects of wonder drug 2 years ago
    89. 89
      (Skip this chapter. There was an error !) 2 years ago
    90. 90
      A losing battle 2 years ago
    91. 91
      (Sorry but skip this chapter as well) 2 years ago
    92. 92
      Coby versus Krutz 2 years ago
    93. 93
      Breaking in. 2 years ago
    94. 94
      Far stronger 2 years ago
    95. 95
      Gustav 2 years ago
    96. 96
      Kevin versus Gustav 2 years ago
    97. 97
      Ending the rivalry 2 years ago
    98. 98
      Jeff's conviction 2 years ago

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