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Because Your Love Heals Me

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Tác giả: Pryges

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Tóm tắt

Trapped by the demons of her past, Alex Michell is a young model and businesswoman who lives her life with only one goal: to get revenge on all the people who have made her life so miserable.
Eliott Jensen is one of the most famous and wealthiest bachelors in the country. Although he is known for being a cold and ruthless businessman, he is someone who can give up everything for the people he loves...

Deeply hurt in the past by her loved one, Alex lives with the aftermath of what happened to her in the past. A psychological scar that makes her body reject any male touch.
What will happen when she meets the one man who seems to make her breathe again? Will she be able to fight her fears and give herself a chance at love?

Read on to find out if Eliott's love would be strong enough to erase Alex's scars...!!!


**NO MAJOR MISUNDERSTANDING** 18+ scenes

The country in this story is fiction, the story will take mostly place at Florelia.
Author note:
This is a story I already tried to write with the title my Healing love but it was my first time so it was poorly written. So now I'm rewriting the story again after getting some writing tips here and there.

English is not my native language so there will be some mishaps, please fill free to correct me.

Cover by my little sister
Instagram: @nkmc_zone

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    SCARLETZEE

    The story is amazing! It is very well written. The character's design is so relevant. I'm so curious about the revenge. It's a good point to mention about that at the very first beginning. Just add this book into my collection. Can't wait to read more. Fighting, author nim!

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    3yr
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    Breno_Ranyere

    I liked the idea but I'm not sure I'm very fond of the execution. The actual story honestly has a fun and interesting plot, but the way it's being told feels a little clunky. There are times when things are being described as if it was a movie script instead of a book. Things like, Alexis opened the fridge. She saw a bottle of milk. Alexis grabbed the milk. She poured some into her cup. It just feels a tad too stiff when imo it could be a little more poetic. Alexis opened the fridge while the worries of her task weighted on her shoulders. She approached the bottle of milk after putting it under her gaze as she opted to rely on its taste to rid herself of her concerns. Things like that to just make the experience less robotic. There is also an absurd reliance on terms like "beutifull, handsome, pretty". Beuty is kinda of a subjective thing and just saying "that person is beutifull" all the time kinda doesn't help me grasp why that person is beutifull. Lastly, the constant praise for Alexis feels really tiresome and ends up having the opposite effect. Its one thing to say a character is successful, it's another to just make them a perfect God in human form loved by everyone and everything. It feels like this novel is constantly trying to tell me what I should think and feel instead of letting me reach the conclusions by myself. 3 chapters in and I feel like I barely know Alexis because most of the text is about describing her instead of showing what she's like when she interacts with people. I don't want to read a description of a character, I want to see a character in action and let myself decide how I feel about her.

    3yr
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    Mary_Algen_Guiang1

    What a great story to read! i love it! im addicted to the first chapters! absolutely recommend it and would love to read more! the story keeps getting better!

    3yr
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    Su_Jeong

    So this book is off to a good start...Alex is an interesting character. I'm not sure how to evaluate ML yet, but he sounds decent. I like the plot and the world background. There are a few grammatical errors here and there, but it doesn't detract from the story. Welldone

    1yr
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    Junni_MC

    First of all, although the novel seemed like a cliché, it is not. It is full of surprises. Totally different. Secondly, great writing. There are almost no grammatical errors. The creativity is excellent and the plot is unique and interesting.

    1yr
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    Akira_Monadelle

    The novel has a cliche storyline but this author managed to make it very unique and equally as interesting. For a non-native english speaker, the author wrote very well with little to no grammatical errors compared to some native english speakers lol. This fits in perfectly in the contemporary romance genre and has the potential to be great. [img=recommend]

    3yr
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    _Meggie_

    A wonderful contemporary Romance! The characters and deep, well-developed and very lovable. The beginning is a bit slow, but it's worth it to power through those first couple chapters, because the interactions between the FL and ML are wonderful! Keep up the good work author!

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    3yr
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    Oya_Dawish

    I loved the philosophy of the novel, as a girl I fully understand what it means to lose faith in love, and in the people you love, that crisis that is so difficult to overcome later. The simple, beautiful language most characterizes the novel. It goes in harmony, makes you simply focus on and relate to events. I strongly recommended the novel I like it.

    3yr
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    ClaisiceLouice

    This is a well-written story with an amazing plot. I love it! The synopsis did a great job starting the vibe of the story, while every chapter will keep you asking for more. It also has well-written characters and dialogues. I love it!

    3yr
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    Book_Pen

    Interesting Plot!! The writer keeps us hook with each chapter. As a suspense is revealed, another follows. Well Written!! The character design is done perfectly along with the environment details. Keep Going!!!

    3yr
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    Dvanzy6

    First of all, even though the novel looked cliched, it's not. It's full of surprises. Totally different. Secondly, great writing. There are close to no grammatical mistakes. Creativity is excellent and the plot is unique and interesting. The story development and it's pace is smooth. It hook's the readers interest instantly. Especially, the first chapter. All and all, the work has a great potential. Well done Author! Waiting for more chapters.

    3yr
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    Erivva

    I'm not a really great fan of modern life stories but when I read this story it felt different. The character is bold and strong and she doesn't hesitate to do the things that fell right to her, I'm looking forward to such a great story.

    3yr
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    foxyash

    character Very well defined and loved the characters Alex, Ethan And very curious bout Elliot. Storyline Awesome and fantabolous....loved it I was very hooked n read the whole chapters....waiting for updates now. Author love u and hats off

    3yr
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    KayLillyt_1

    Great story. pushed forward and made more interesting by the motivation of the lead. Keeps the readers on their toes in anticipation of what would happen next while loving what she has already done. Again, great story.

    3yr
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    enoyann
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    Curiosity is the best weapon to lure a prey and the author seemed to have done just that. First of all, everything that involves revenge is certainly intriguing. The story is good that it got reading nonstop to the point that I didn't even noticed that I was already at the last chapter. Now, I am very curious as how she would execute her plot of revenge to perfection. There are some problems with the grammars, punctuations and how it is written but those are problems that could be polish as the story goes. Other than that I enjoyed reading this novel, especially during bed time with only lampshade to light me and a cup hot chocolate milk to accompany me. Good work author-san!

    3yr
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    JoJ
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    Revenge is always an interesting topic to write about. But there is always a tragic story behind it... The plot is intriguing, Alex is an interesting character. With pleasure, I will accompany her on her way to get the justice (added to the library). Well done!

    3yr
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    Chase_Xavier_123

    Great story author. It is a revenge story about our girl Alex who is a independent model and business woman. The story not only shows her revenge but also highlights the truma she has from her past. How it sometimes affect her? Let's see her journey to overcome her truma and get her revenge. In this journey she isn't alone her bestie manger fifi is with her along with a handsome actor name ethan. Not to forget our ml. Writing Quality - It's great bit author can decrease the amount of dialogue slightly. Story development - It's not fast pace but I can guarantee you it's not gonna be a 2000 chapter long book that is slow as turtle 🐢. It gives a steady feel. character design - We have some great charcters here. Alex isn't perfect she has her flaws and she knows it. Fifi is the cheerful bestie who loves handsome guy but she doesn't shy away from alex when alex is at her lowest. Updating stability - A weekly update is coming. World background - It's modern fantasy romance, it doesn't need to much world building. It gives me vibes of 'The villain's wife' (I might be wrong but only author can tell properly). Will I recommend this? Yeah, I really like revenge genre the story has potential to it. I will suggest author to brace herself as most readers like to read completed story so don't get demotivated, easily. Keep up great work author.

    3yr
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    dinoriii

    Overall : I would recommend this story to others as this is a good book to read and it was also a intriguing story that catches my attention!! I love the story very much! Writing quality : it was good and simple to understand but it would be great if the non dialogue sentances were separated into shorter paragraphs as it would be better! Updating : it is consistent and it would be great if there were more chapters to it!! Characters : Somehow the synopsis states that the male name is Eliott but the written name was Ethan- but i suppose the name is supoosed to be Ethan. Anyways, the characters were well written by the author and they were interesting. Even the descriptions of each character were well described out, which makes it even better! World background : The world background was great and it was nice to see that it was described well, about the country and all. My thoughts : I personally love this kind of stories and it made me read from the start to the end without me noticing. I really do hope there will be more chapters to come as i want to see what will happen to Ethan and Alex, they should like just get together already hahah~ This book has a great potential to be out there! Good job author and hope to see more from you!! ☺️

    3yr
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    Chapter 110: The truth : part 2 10 months ago

    Âm lượng 1

    1. 1
      Going back 3 years ago
    2. 2
      Florelia here we go 3 years ago
    3. 3
      The meeting 3 years ago
    4. 4
      The encounter 3 years ago
    5. 5
      May be he is your cure 3 years ago
    6. 6
      First date 3 years ago
    7. 7
      Who is Ethan date? 3 years ago
    8. 8
      Remembering the past 3 years ago
    9. 9
      Sisters encounter 3 years ago
    10. 10
      A little humiliation 3 years ago
    11. 11
      Night out: Mysterious neighbour 3 years ago
    12. 12
      Night out 2: A little conversation 3 years ago
    13. 13
      Fidelia's seduction 3 years ago
    14. 14
      The new movie 3 years ago
    15. 15
      The Porter sibling 3 years ago
    16. 16
      I don't date trash 3 years ago
    17. 17
      Who said I don’t love you? 3 years ago
    18. 18
      He is mine 3 years ago
    19. 19
      A little kiss 3 years ago
    20. 20
      Man to man conversation 3 years ago
    21. 21
      The start of something new  3 years ago
    22. 22
      Not single anymore 3 years ago
    23. 23
      Alex is back 3 years ago
    24. 24
      You saved her that day 3 years ago
    25. 25
      My name is Eliott Tan Jensen 3 years ago
    26. 26
      Who am I dating? 3 years ago
    27. 27
      The audition day 3 years ago
    28. 28
      Aria little scheme 3 years ago
    29. 29
      Don't you think she is going to be in trouble? 3 years ago
    30. 30
      [Bonus chapter]She own CANDIDE 3 years ago
    31. 31
      As mother as daughter! 3 years ago
    32. 32
      I don’t mind getting your money 3 years ago
    33. 33
      Settle it yourself 3 years ago
    34. 34
      [Bonus chapter]My jealousy mislead me 3 years ago
    35. 35
      We ended her contract 3 years ago
    36. 36
      What do you think about mariage? 3 years ago
    37. 37
      Hello, I'm Alex Michell 3 years ago
    38. 38
      Welcome party 3 years ago
    39. 39
      [Bonus chapter]Welcome party 2 3 years ago
    40. 40
      Welcome party 3 3 years ago
    41. 41
      Where is Alex? 3 years ago
    42. 42
      You even dare to touch my wife? 3 years ago
    43. 43
      Sorry, I couldn't protect you 3 years ago
    44. 44
      The Allen lose everything 3 years ago
    45. 45
      She is my daughter in law 3 years ago
    46. 46
      Do not ask me to forgive you, ask Alex!!!! 3 years ago
    47. 47
      I don't want them to go to jail for now! 3 years ago
    48. 48
      Fidelia's teasing 3 years ago
    49. 49
      A little kiss as a bribe 3 years ago
    50. 50
      We are engaged 3 years ago
    51. 51
      One bus for everyone 3 years ago
    52. 52
      One bus for everyone 2 3 years ago
    53. 53
      TV Show 3 years ago
    54. 54
      Stop with your boring questions 3 years ago
    55. 55
      Showing her talent/ Kylie downfall 3 years ago
    56. 56
      Doom at Kylie's door 3 years ago
    57. 57
      The Jensen and Porter meeting 3 years ago
    58. 58
      Lydia on acting mode 3 years ago
    59. 59
      A stupid plan/ Porter in the gutter 3 years ago
    60. 60
      You should let go of your fears 3 years ago
    61. 61
      Do you love me? 3 years ago
    62. 62
      Meeting in laws 3 years ago
    63. 63
      Do you miss me? 3 years ago
    64. 64
      Alan porter's phone call 3 years ago
    65. 65
      Priceless had big issues 3 years ago
    66. 66
      Father and daughter meeting 3 years ago
    67. 67
      I want you to marry someone 3 years ago
    68. 68
      Give me back what rightfully mine! 3 years ago
    69. 69
      We need to talk 3 years ago
    70. 70
      I know you still love me 3 years ago
    71. 71
      It's delicious 3 years ago
    72. 72
      Lose Priceless to someone else 3 years ago
    73. 73
      An important question 3 years ago
    74. 74
      The sweet answer 3 years ago
    75. 75
      Alan Porter in action 3 years ago
    76. 76
      Girls night out 3 years ago
    77. 77
      A beautiful night (R18) 3 years ago
    78. 78
      A good show is to come!! 3 years ago
    79. 79
      Meeting in laws 3 years ago
    80. 80
      The truth 3 years ago
    81. 81
      Alan true colors exposed 3 years ago
    82. 82
      Memories 3 years ago
    83. 83
      Alan's anger 3 years ago
    84. 84
      Alex VS Alan 2 years ago
    85. 85
      Alex VS Alan 2 2 years ago
    86. 86
      Alex VS Alan 3 2 years ago
    87. 87
      Alex VS Alan 4 2 years ago
    88. 88
      Eliott Vs Alan 2 years ago
    89. 89
      Hot night (R18) 2 years ago
    90. 90
      Hot night (R18++) part 2 2 years ago
    91. 91
      Yet another scandal 2 years ago
    92. 92
      Friend you can't trust 2 years ago
    93. 93
      A friendship that never exist 2 years ago
    94. 94
      Press conference 2 years ago
    95. 95
      I only love him! 2 years ago
    96. 96
      Sweet punishment 2 years ago
    97. 97
      Let's start filming 2 years ago
    98. 98
      Alex as Alysha (a glimpse into the filming producion) 2 years ago
    99. 99
      Threats 1 years ago
    100. 100
      Threats 2 1 years ago
    101. 101
      [Bonus chapter]Threats 3 1 years ago
    102. 102
      Hidden fear of the past 1 years ago
    103. 103
      I'm sorry (Feeling guilty) 1 years ago
    104. 104
      A shitty plan 1 years ago
    105. 105
      To destroy Eliott's life 1 years ago
    106. 106
      A plan for revenge ? 1 years ago
    107. 107
      Call in the press 1 years ago
    108. 108
      call in the press 2 11 months ago
    109. 109
      The truth : part 1 11 months ago
    110. 110
      The truth : part 2 10 months ago

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