a brief history of a singular pokemon

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alesjandritos

enjoy 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Asriel_IsDreemurr

Why this story doesnt have enough rating? 🍇🍈🍉🍊🍋🍎🍌🥭🍍🍏🍑🍐🍒🍓🥝🍆🍅🥑🥥🥔🥕🥒🌽🌰🌰🥬🥜🥦🍄🍞🥯🥐🥨🥖🥩🥞🍗🧀🍖🌭🥓🍕🍔🍟🥪🌯🌮🥙🥚🍳🥗🥘🥣🍲🍿🧂🥫🍱🍘🍝🍙🍜🍚🍛🍠🍥🍢🍤🍣🥮🍡🥟🥠🥡🍪🍦🍩🍧🍨🎂🍫🍰🥧🧁🍼🍬🍯🍭🍮🥛🍾☕🍶🍵🍻🍷🍺🍸🍹🥂🍽🥃🥢🥤

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Delfreed

I like this fanfiction, but I'm starting to appreciate it less and less, although the story is very good, but it's not according to my tastes. Currently I consider the MC to be a naive who gets fooled by the greed of humans without even suspecting it a little, i am sure this is what you are looking for, a naive MC who may not trust humans anymore, but like I said before, it's not my cup of tea, I will continue a little more to see what happens next, but I think I'll stop this fanfiction. But even if I am going to stop this story, the fanfiction is very appreciable, I wish you a very good continuation and courage for the sequel. (sorry for Google Translate)

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DeadHawk

This story has some of the worst English I've ever seen. I don't think it could be any harder to understand with how many mistakes there are. The plot is alright but I feel like I'm missing out on a lot of it since it's hard to understand some parts. I just can't recommend this as it is and I can only hope someone edits it for the author eventually.

really nice story so close to meeting ash cant wait for the next chapter plz post soon and do not drop this fic it is really good i mean it am really surprised that it has not received more reviews

plz post soon cant wait for next chap wonder how meeting between mc and protagonist will be plz do not drop this it is too good to be dropped

this is a really good story cannot wait till the mc meets ash he does exist here right? weill if TR trio exist he should too hope you get more positive reviews in future

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Mesirve

I like the story .....................................................................................................................................

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itanaki05

overall quite interesting, grammar needs more work, entertaining story [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Samuel812753

really good novel but the mc is an airhead and an idiot. really hope he gets together with Meloetta. she's such a sweet pokemon and like there perfect for each other and keep up the good work