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After transmigrating, Tselmeg found out that he was reincarnated into Harry Potter world.
The issue is that he become the grand-nephew of the great wizard of all time except Merlin himself, Albus Dumbledore.
English is my third language. And just comment about this book. It would motivate me and effect to how far the story goes on.
Minimum 5 chapter a week /Mostly on Saturday and Sunday/
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I can say its the best fanfic this month on HP category, and I hope author will at least publish at least 200 chaps before dissapearing in the tides of time. ALL HAIL GOD EMPEROR
I like how the mc is trying to go his own way taking the lead in doing stuff. Just took a bit off because there's room for improvement basing on how I think the author is going for a slytherin version of the golden trio. Looking forward to more chapters and hope the author finishes the story. A bit of tip tho... For readers, if there's something that is not canonically accurate, do remember that you're reading a fanfic. So basically it is automatically an AU (Alternate Universe). For the author, no matter how good you do it, someone would still hate it so just try taking everything as a suggestion that you could use to improve your story or treat them as literally just comments about the work you're doing. You do you. Just try your best to make it at least kinda logical. You can pretty much do anything with the story, I just hope there's some explanations and weaving it naturally to your world. Looking forward on how you set up the stuff about voldy ^^v
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I don't understand how this story hasn't been rated yet, it's perfect, I love their friendship, I'm curious how you'll handle the plot, still with Harry vs Voldemort, keep up the good work
sadly it's dropped and I only found out at the moment I got so far they ahah all the good ones are dropped sadly
The idea is neat but the development of the story makes no sense. Details to streamline the different scenes into a whole chapter are missing which makes the writing seem poorly planned. In chapter 1, the only well-thought out part is the reasoning behind the MC's appearance. I understand wanting to introduce the MC to other important characters but, story-wise it makes no sense. For example, why would the Head of the DMLE be interogating the MC who at that time is 1. ignorant of the existance of Magic & 2. an child ? After the MC is send to St. Mungo's - still ignorant of Magic in the eyes of the npc's and receives his Hogwart's Letter whereafter he meets Albus Dumbledore, I stopped reading. I recommand the author to rewrite some parts, so it at least makes some sense...
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Dude I really hope this novel is not stopping now, from many Harry Potter Fanfic this is one of the most unique one I have read. this novel have big potential to develop the story and I Hope you will continue writing.
Tem algumas partes que parecem ter sido escritas por outras pessoas. O rumo estava bom até desandar alguns capítulos antes da pedra filósofal
MC is Harry's dog 🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕 MC is Harry's dog 🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕🐕
After transmigrating, Tselmeg found out that he was reincarnated into Harry Potter world. The issue is that he become the grand-nephew of the great wizard of all time except Merlin himself, Albus Dumbledore. English is my third language. And just comment about this book. It would motivate me and effect to how far the story goes on. Minimum 5 chapter a week /Mostly on Saturday and Sunday/
The story is overall gr8. This is one few HP fanfics that I actually enjoy reading. Hopefully the author can complete novel,unliks other fanfics which are dropped or are on indeginite Hiataus
How is this still not rated, The interaction between characters is good but there is still room for improvement, overall this is a decent reading.
Definitely should be rated already 👀 🔖📖📖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖📖📖📖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖🔖🔖📖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖📖📖🔖📖🔖🔖📖🔖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖📖🔖🔖📖🔖
Âm lượng 1 : Hogwarts First year
- 1 Reborn 3 years ago
- 2 Magical world here I come 3 years ago
- 3 Albus Dumbledore my great-granduncle? 3 years ago
- 4 Diagon Alley, here I come 3 years ago
- 5 Nagini's bloodline. 3 years ago
- 6 Randolph Spudmore 3 years ago
- 7 Hogwarts express 3 years ago
- 8 The Sorting ceremony. 3 years ago
- 9 Potions class 3 years ago
- 10 The art of Potions, the idea of beverage 3 years ago
- 11 Daphne Greengrass! 3 years ago
- 12 Ron's bad days. 3 years ago
- 13 Destiny is destiny after all 3 years ago
- 14 Destiny is destiny after all - 2 3 years ago
- 15 The Basilisk 3 years ago
- 16 The Firebolt, launch day! 3 years ago
- 17 The invisibility potion 3 years ago
- 18 Three headed dog 3 years ago
- 19 Halloween 3 years ago
- 20 Meeting Dumbledore Again 3 years ago
- 21 Rita Skeeter 3 years ago
- 22 Slytherin vs Gryffindor 3 years ago
- 23 Salazar Slytherin and his collection 3 years ago
- 24 Before the trial 3 years ago
- 25 The trial 3 years ago
- 26 MI5 JTAC 3 years ago
- 27 Christmas preperation 3 years ago
- 28 The christmas 3 years ago
- 29 Meeting Lockhart 3 years ago
- 30 Hogwarts again 3 years ago
- 31 Announcement 3 years ago
- 32 Philosopher's stone 3 years ago
- 33 Aftermath 3 years ago
- 34 Amelia Bones' interrogation 3 years ago
- 35 Meeting Lockhart again 3 years ago
- 36 John Dawlish 3 years ago
- 37 Firebolt Group formation 3 years ago
- 38 Magical Guardian 3 years ago
- 39 Meeting Nagini 3 years ago
Finally the kind of harry potter fanfiction I'll love.The interactions and the way the story goes are nice so far.I hope you're not a soft hearted person and don't spoil this beautiful fan fic. Note:You have a small plot hole. Where is Tracey Davis? She and Daphne were best friends.