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Viết đánh giáThis is just tip me over. My story nuclear fusion cultivator is about revenge, the effects of new techniques, and a alternate earth with cultivation and it.
This narrative is well-told. Doing justice to its characters, setting the churning tone of the story from the very first line, its language is superb. Keep up the good work, author.
The story has a great flow and it is described in a really skilled way. It is a story that you can't get up from without finishing! Good job, author! Hope to see more of the good work!
Narration is decent enough for me to read. Precise and concise. A perk of a native speaker and a fluent writer. I can only saw some of the confusing lines where I can see that it was mistyped. But still, the story potential is high. Character development is splendid and character design is decent. I can pity the MC but he was on the quest to redeem himself. Making the story much anticipated. Here is a five stars to brighten up your mood. ✨
Story concept is good enough to make you want to read what happened next. There are only little grammer mistakes which can be fixed. Well keep up the good work its good start.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I liked the premise. But there were some things I could pick on. Still, the premise so far, has developed in a wonderful manner. I liked the Main character. Keep up the good work!
The synopsis basically explains everything. The hero has a sad childhood. The way the author narrates the story is just amazing! The story is creative and keeps up the great work, author!
I read the first few chapters and I really liked the plot and the main character. I read it very well and I will definitely continue reading it. Keep it up.
Amazing, I found myself in a story rich in development and with a narration so deep that it feels like I am living in that moment, I will be here to see the next chapter.
This is just tip me over. My story nuclear fusion cultivator is about revenge, the effects of new techniques, and a alternate earth with cultivation and it.
This narrative is well-told. Doing justice to its characters, setting the churning tone of the story from the very first line, its language is superb. Keep up the good work, author.
The story has a great flow and it is described in a really skilled way. It is a story that you can't get up from without finishing! Good job, author! Hope to see more of the good work!
Narration is decent enough for me to read. Precise and concise. A perk of a native speaker and a fluent writer. I can only saw some of the confusing lines where I can see that it was mistyped. But still, the story potential is high. Character development is splendid and character design is decent. I can pity the MC but he was on the quest to redeem himself. Making the story much anticipated. Here is a five stars to brighten up your mood. ✨
Story concept is good enough to make you want to read what happened next. There are only little grammer mistakes which can be fixed. Well keep up the good work its good start.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Outstanding magic of writing It was definitely appetizing at first and then it just leaves you wanting for more after reading it. didn't expected it to be greatly crafted this book definitely sells and rocks I recommend it to everyone to read [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I liked the premise. But there were some things I could pick on. Still, the premise so far, has developed in a wonderful manner. I liked the Main character. Keep up the good work!
The synopsis basically explains everything. The hero has a sad childhood. The way the author narrates the story is just amazing! The story is creative and keeps up the great work, author!
I read the first few chapters and I really liked the plot and the main character. I read it very well and I will definitely continue reading it. Keep it up.
Amazing, I found myself in a story rich in development and with a narration so deep that it feels like I am living in that moment, I will be here to see the next chapter.