Shameless author reviewing his own story. Hope to enjoy the novel!!
I liked the premise. But there were some things I could pick on. Still, the premise so far, has developed in a wonderful manner. I liked the Main character. Keep up the good work!
There's an opening quotation mark, no closing one. "Apprentice, you made a mistake, do you know what you should have done?" The martial.............
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Fantasy · Ultimatedaywriter
Has potential. Although only 2 chapters have been released, I found the pacing and narration quite nice. Keep up the good work!
Only 4 chapters, so far, thus cannot say much. But the story developed till now, is well presented. I found chapter 2, the most exciting out of the chapters so, far. Looking forward to seeing where the story goes in the future.
Actually, no. I did not keep any tags about romance as the novel's primary focus would never be romance. It has more to do with the protagonist's personality. So, it would be more of a survival, mystery, and fantasy novel.
Seeing the upload schedule the author seems to have motivation issues, but nevertheless, the story is great and has tremendous potential. So, please......for the love of God, maintain a stable release schedule
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Action · IAmNotVoid