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The grammar is terrible. It is hard to follow, The mc is a guy who asks to be a girl with a retractable Slong, the gods feel extremely weird.
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this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards. so please keep up the good work
need more chapters so please please please please start writing more. really really really really really like the story. [img=update][img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp]
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Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
The grammar is terrible. It is hard to follow, The mc is a guy who asks to be a girl with a retractable Slong, the gods feel extremely weird.
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this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards. so please keep up the good work
need more chapters so please please please please start writing more. really really really really really like the story. [img=update][img=recommend][img=exp][img=fp]