The India that could be

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maddymudda

Hi, the author here. please give a read and support the novel by giving your reviews. It will be a continuous updated story so support it. Thank You.

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Cain_101

there are almost no grammar mistakes if that isn't enough for you to read then there are almost no spelling mistakes if this also didn't make you curious about this novel then it's story line will most certainly; I won't lie and say that this novel is perfect it has it's own flaws but it has much more potential to become something much bigger I have read until chapter 32 and so far I am totally sold it's about a modern person somehow reincarnating in history and from there how it goes for him But you will say what's new about that then let's just say that the history is of india and let's be real there are not that many novel with India's history if at all, so if you are tired of those novel with everything repetitive but you like those idea then this is something refreshing take on those just read at least more then 10 chapter's and I can guarantee that you will be hooked 👍

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sam_dutt

I really liked it how the author started the story. It seems the store has great potential, so please regularly update the story, and don't drop the store in the middle. First time seeing a nice Indian story. Good luck....................

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ASURA_KING

After I read tyranny of steal I always wanted similar novel about Indian culture .

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Ductor_Storage

The best History fanfic I have read.I am a big fan of History and India's history so this is delight to read especially with the quality and no grammar mistakes.Just read it,i know you will enjoy.

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Khizar_Kazi

from Pakistan. my first idea steam engine and how it push the fast forward button to Europe industrial time as steam engine used in almost every thing including trains ships. second idea culinary utensils oven and various yummy foreign dishes salad 🥗 cheese production for making pizza lazania fried rice baking backry items etc 3rd ideas for diplomatic and trade relations to near civilizations like china and through navy development with help of pure steam engine or with old style hybrid ships to Japan and Arab Africa routes. bonus of providing safety of trade routes as inventer of first bulb and telephone crude primary one invention of first microscope and it's positive effects in development of medicine. creation intravenous injection or syringe production. first crude method of penicillin antibiotic from fungus. acquiring plants from which antimalarial drugs extracted and used

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_D_OMNINOMAD

i been looking for a fanfic or something related to indian history or mythology happy to finally find it

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KDS_6563

I liked the story mode .... and keep up the writing and good work. Nice seeing an indian book writer to write a good story . .. .love to read it further 💓💓💓☺️

Nice. Good abd fresh content for the indian readers by an indian author. Keep up the good work. Hope you continue to write and complete the story.

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Believers

Finally a book about our Great Bharat ...

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Chirashu_Jindal

Bro I think you should encourage sanskrit as the main language as it is the the source of all languages of India and will help create unity among diff states Hindus and also create awareness about the true meaning of relegious texts It is also considered most scientific appropriate language. English should only be used for trade purposes and for people who engage in contact with English nations. Now if you say all the world uses English as it will be global language you should know that Japan, china and Korea and many other nations do not have English language as their official language, still they are very successful. Also if English languish is spread, it will create more control of western society and media over Indian civilization . Like today where people speaking English are more respected and English people are always considered advance. Using sanskrit willl also help to bridge the gap be casted as people will become aware of the true meaning of varna system and teachings of gods. In today's time, very few hindupeople who engage in contact with English nations. Now if you say all the world uses English as it will be global language you should know that Japan, china and Korea and many other nations do not have English language as their official language, still they are very successful. Also if English languish is spread, it will create more control of western society and media over Indian civilization. Like today where people speaking English are more respected and English people are always considered advance. Using sanskrit willl also help to bridge the gap be casted as people will become aware of the true meaning of varna system and teachings of gods. In today's time, very few hindu peole understand their religious texts and teachings and so they are more likely to be exploited by other religion people and lose their faith. It will also hep challenge social evils such as sati as in none of our Vedic texts, it is is written to do sati. English should only be taught to some scholars or at high levels where translation of English knowledge can be translated for improving some things .

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TeraBaapHuMai

delete it if u r from peacefull community

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King_Ravan

I liked the story very much and the only problem for me is chapters are locked quite early ...............

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RCV

Love the stories direction, but just starting the story and may edit my review later on. Having said that, there are a couple of things that stand out to me: Writing quality: Seems to be well written but lacks flow. Good vocabulary though. Story development: So far so good. Character design: Suffers most from "telling and not showing". So far, instead of showing us through dialogue and character interactions, it just tells us. World background: Similar issues. All that said, love the premises and will keep reading to see how the author improves.

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EdgyTahomaru

Just don't drop this. You have my full support.

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Rajendra_Prasad_3537

the novel us written like narrative style I don't like it

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Karl0341

i would like to read this however i think it locks the chapters way to early so for now I won't

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iTz_Hades

It feels like I'm reading a summary more than anything else. There are no actual conversations, reactions, description or anything at all. It's all just written like a summary. It's no fun to read. The readers have said the same thing a lot of times but the Author doesn't care.

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Deva_Salaar

A fantastic ‘what if’ story on India set in the medieval era!