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Some plots are abandoned, useless or just doesn't make sense. Characters are 1 dimensional. MC doesn't have IQ. Almost no good points. Or in other words, a waste of time.
really good story, just read the first chapter and I amaze because the words are so beautiful, this is so nice to read, you really doing a great job Author, really ^^
Sigh... what am I doing with my life? How did I end up here? Anyway, the novel is quite good. I usually don't read BL novels, it's just not my thing. I am afraid of going deeper into the abyss that is the BL genre, and a lot of people would agree with me. Good for the author though. I am not reading this any time soon, since I stopped at chapter 3, but, even if it's BL, it is still a good novel. Most of the time, those that are in the BL genre tends to be quite good in terms of storytelling.
The first chapter already piqued my curiosity about his 'love interests'! The dialogues are seamless, and the flow of the story is good and straightforward. Keep up the good work, author! (´｡･v･｡｀)
D*mn isn't it hot in here? This novel get me hooked on BL books. The plot and characters are detailed and consistent. So don't sleep on this novel.
pensaba que sería una historia de amor que se desarrolla poco a poco pero no y la traducción es pesima que primo esto o esto todo es de primo no vale la pena
So i just download this book and i must say it’s getting interesting I love omegaverce I totally recommend this book , thanks author this is amazing
5/5 because this book deserves it. I don't usually read BL but for this, I made an exception. hehe, omg, why am I *kenekeleg* hahaha, great job author ♥️♥️ hue hue, fighting! If you are into this genre, I highly recommend this book. READ!
Okay... It's an amazing story! I'm usually not into fluffy stories, but this one's a good read. My gods! I can't wait to see the progress of their relationship! Keep it up Author-san!
Interesting read so far. Easy to get caught up in the story. I find Aiden's relations with others amicable. I'm looking forward to seeing how the story continues. Keep going author!
First, I would like to emphasize how this book's great synopsis had grabbed my attention, and I am sure that the readers will be hooked into the story! With a well-written book like this, it will surely be a big hit. The characters are certainly lovable, too! Keep updating, one day it will definitely make it to the top. Give it a try! it just might be your cup of tea.
OH MY GOD.. that's fantastic..I was so lost.. into the story.. looking forward for more a/n please update quickly.. I really enjoyed reading it
I find the first few chapters cute, and interesting, and there are a few flaws such as the use of verb but, still it's a five since all of those can be worked on... All in all, I like the book, expecting it to continue gorgeously 🥳
From the start, the book is filled with fluff and cuteness that will make your heart skip a few beats. The author excel in writing scenes that will get you hooked and now, I am hooked.
A worthy read. Dig in the book while it is still free. I love Aiden and the love interests, not to mention the naggy Cassy, the story will not be complete without her presence. The dialogues are nice to read. Characters gave out oozes of mystery that lures me to know them more. Aiden makes my heart throb by his adorable responses. Thank you for writing the story, Kudos and fighting Author-sama!
The fujoshi in me is practically yelling out loud here. this a definite read for all y'all who like yaois like me. I so wanna be aiden as I read this... but my gender throws me out 😂. anywhooo. READ THIS BOOK (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*.✧ Ciao.
The novel is adorable from the start. I like the shy and cute MC with a tsundere best friend. A fluffy good romance that can make every reader quiver with excitement. Well written by an author who has made great BL books. This will be another masterpiece!
I literally liked the boookk! Aiden is so luck to get the attention of two alpha's. SHIT!SHIT!SHIT The book is toooooooo ha***tt. Highly recommended to BL lovers
First, I would like to emphasize how this book's great synopsis had grabbed my attention, and I am sure that the readers will be hooked into the story! 🌷 With a well-written book like this, it will surely be a big hit 🌺 The characters are certainly lovable, too! 🌻 Keep updating, great author 🍀
Hey, guys! Author here! As shameless as I beg for stones, here is me shamelessly reviewing my own work. This is my very first BL series and I hope that you will love it as much as I do. I will keep it lighthearted with a little bit of angst on the side! Also, my reader and friends based server is open to everyone. https://discord.gg/3FRTfENrQQ
😂👍👍😭😭😍😍😉😍👍😭😢🥰😩😊🤔🥰🥰😩😊😡😭😝😀😀😭😭😡🥰🥰🤔😭😢😭🥰🥰🥰😩😊😭🥰😂😊😊😭😂😂😂😂😂😡😝😂😂😂😂😢😂😩😂🥰🥰🥰😩😂😒😝🤔🥰😂😂😂😂😩🥰😂😡🤔🥰😩😂😂🤔🥰🥰🤔🥰🤔😝🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😂😂😩🥰🤔🥰🥰🤔😂🤔😂😂🥰😝🥰🥰😒😒😝🥰🥰🥰😊😝😝😡🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😩🥰😡😡😝🥵🥵🥰🥰😭🥰🥰😂😂😢😢😡😝😔😋🤣😃🥰😒😊🤔🤔🥰🥰😝😝😡😭😢🥰😩🥰🤔😊🥰🥰😡😡😢😢😡😭😢🥰😡😀😡😢😢😩😩😢😡😡😀😡😡😀🥰🙄🥰😀🤔🤔🥺🥺😂😂☺️😂😀🥳😂😏😂😂🥰😀😭😝😊🤔😏😔😔😎😅😱😭😋😊😎 The introduction to any novel is very important. It gives how the story is going to go, what kind of personality the MC has, the building of the world, yet some how this author that can't even complete what children on wattpad could do. I would rather read that fan fic of diluc screwing a donut again if it means that this author will gain a brain cell. This will probably be deleted, but for those who read this, be prepared for a story that will make you want to gouge your eyes out and cry from how horrible it is. want to know why im giving a good review? because the author is such a coward She cant even take criticism. boo hoo im an author you cant say anything bad about my story~! Low rating~? on noes~! Delete. The beginning is already confusing, the description is bad. real review? 1, since all i can say is she has description here and there.
Some plots are abandoned, useless or just doesn't make sense. Characters are 1 dimensional. MC doesn't have IQ. Almost no good points. Or in other words, a waste of time.
really good story, just read the first chapter and I amaze because the words are so beautiful, this is so nice to read, you really doing a great job Author, really ^^
Sigh... what am I doing with my life? How did I end up here? Anyway, the novel is quite good. I usually don't read BL novels, it's just not my thing. I am afraid of going deeper into the abyss that is the BL genre, and a lot of people would agree with me. Good for the author though. I am not reading this any time soon, since I stopped at chapter 3, but, even if it's BL, it is still a good novel. Most of the time, those that are in the BL genre tends to be quite good in terms of storytelling.
The first chapter already piqued my curiosity about his 'love interests'! The dialogues are seamless, and the flow of the story is good and straightforward. Keep up the good work, author! (´｡･v･｡｀)
D*mn isn't it hot in here? This novel get me hooked on BL books. The plot and characters are detailed and consistent. So don't sleep on this novel.
pensaba que sería una historia de amor que se desarrolla poco a poco pero no y la traducción es pesima que primo esto o esto todo es de primo no vale la pena
So i just download this book and i must say it’s getting interesting I love omegaverce I totally recommend this book , thanks author this is amazing
5/5 because this book deserves it. I don't usually read BL but for this, I made an exception. hehe, omg, why am I *kenekeleg* hahaha, great job author ♥️♥️ hue hue, fighting! If you are into this genre, I highly recommend this book. READ!
Okay... It's an amazing story! I'm usually not into fluffy stories, but this one's a good read. My gods! I can't wait to see the progress of their relationship! Keep it up Author-san!
Interesting read so far. Easy to get caught up in the story. I find Aiden's relations with others amicable. I'm looking forward to seeing how the story continues. Keep going author!
First, I would like to emphasize how this book's great synopsis had grabbed my attention, and I am sure that the readers will be hooked into the story! With a well-written book like this, it will surely be a big hit. The characters are certainly lovable, too! Keep updating, one day it will definitely make it to the top. Give it a try! it just might be your cup of tea.
OH MY GOD.. that's fantastic..I was so lost.. into the story.. looking forward for more a/n please update quickly.. I really enjoyed reading it
I find the first few chapters cute, and interesting, and there are a few flaws such as the use of verb but, still it's a five since all of those can be worked on... All in all, I like the book, expecting it to continue gorgeously 🥳
From the start, the book is filled with fluff and cuteness that will make your heart skip a few beats. The author excel in writing scenes that will get you hooked and now, I am hooked.
A worthy read. Dig in the book while it is still free. I love Aiden and the love interests, not to mention the naggy Cassy, the story will not be complete without her presence. The dialogues are nice to read. Characters gave out oozes of mystery that lures me to know them more. Aiden makes my heart throb by his adorable responses. Thank you for writing the story, Kudos and fighting Author-sama!
The fujoshi in me is practically yelling out loud here. this a definite read for all y'all who like yaois like me. I so wanna be aiden as I read this... but my gender throws me out 😂. anywhooo. READ THIS BOOK (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*.✧ Ciao.
The novel is adorable from the start. I like the shy and cute MC with a tsundere best friend. A fluffy good romance that can make every reader quiver with excitement. Well written by an author who has made great BL books. This will be another masterpiece!
I literally liked the boookk! Aiden is so luck to get the attention of two alpha's. SHIT!SHIT!SHIT The book is toooooooo ha***tt. Highly recommended to BL lovers
First, I would like to emphasize how this book's great synopsis had grabbed my attention, and I am sure that the readers will be hooked into the story! 🌷 With a well-written book like this, it will surely be a big hit 🌺 The characters are certainly lovable, too! 🌻 Keep updating, great author 🍀
Hey, guys! Author here! As shameless as I beg for stones, here is me shamelessly reviewing my own work. This is my very first BL series and I hope that you will love it as much as I do. I will keep it lighthearted with a little bit of angst on the side! Also, my reader and friends based server is open to everyone. https://discord.gg/3FRTfENrQQ