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Dance with the Nightingale

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Tác giả: Kisara_Hiroto

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Tóm tắt

The Nightingale.

The beauty and the taboo existing together.

Unattainable and unacceptable.

An existence only to be admired from afar.

A hero of legends but a also a girl of tragedy.

Shining like a star in the sky, all alone, forever…

-But that’s too sad isn’t it?

*
Our MC, an ordinary middle aged man, is an author that wrote books and after pouring 2 years of hard work in a book, his hardwork finally bore fruit as his book got the second prize in the regional awards.
A fruit that he couldn't eat.
Why?
Because he along with hard work, he also poured his piss somewhere he shouldn't and died.
Exactly how?
Read the prologue, and you will find out~
But of course, that's only the start, as the next time he woke up...
He was in another world.
Follow the guy as he turns from a middle aged author to a Young Master in a magical world.
***
Hey guys author here…
It’s my first novel, but I will try to make this good.
Good luck me.

Vote this book with power stones, it really helps with your support.
Before giving up please read Prologue and 1st 10 chapters.

Also I have set up prologue to be a bit funny and ridiculous, so, don't mind next chapter won't be like that.

My discord server link: https://discord.gg/8dvVYW8QUn

P.S.: I don't own the cover art, whoever does can take credit for it.

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    Kisara_Hiroto

    Hey Guys, Author's Review here. This is a very good read, that much I would have said even if I was not the author here. So read it and give it a try. I give it 5/5 rating. Let's see...... Writing Quality: I am a newbie author, but even then I have a good grasp of Grammar so, don't expect Grammatically incorrect sentences, there can be sometimes a few typos of forgotten words but that's understandable I'm not a machine Story: Story is a slow pace at first which will evolve into normal pace around 15th chapter, 1st few chapters are basically slow to showcase the world. Character Design: Every character is important there won't be a single character who will speak like a bot and I have a lot of confidence to create good characters. Updates: Unless I have a real life crisis I will update according to what RR I have given. World background: A medival fantasy, with a lot of sci-fi elements, anything else would be a spoiler

    2yr
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    KisaraxD

    The last and final simp, must my classic the book is good, and it's not gonna suddenly be dropped. I am a new writer and, it's just been 2 weeks that I started, I never wrote anything before this, and in just in these 2 weeks I can feel myself growing as a writer. I hope I continue to grow and I hope people like my work, any complaints you have just post it in chapter comments or write a review

    2yr
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    kartik_agarwal

    Dropped after 5 chapters. My main reason for dropping is, too many unnecessary sentences, showing mental thought of mc. Unnecessarily increasing the word count by at least 4 times. All that stuff of 5 chapters could have been done in one chapter of same length.

    1yr
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    Ryukurou

    This novels is really nice and have good development. I also like how there are always some funny jokes in between every situation. Love the characters and books so far. Keep up the good work author. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

    2yr
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    Ray_ne

    This is an simp, just trying to rate the book and I think the book is a good read, also I am going to edit the first few chapters on Sunday, there will be the last chapter of week today or tomorrow but there will be no bonus chapter.

    2yr
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    Zetso
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    👍😍👍. . . . .. . . Bb. ... .

    2yr
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    L_i_t_c_h_694

    I really enjoyed it [img=update][img=update] [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

    2yr
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    KIRILLNIY

    ————————————————————-—-🔥🔥🔥Great book with very interesting plot and characters. Recommend everyone to give it a try. 👍👍👍 ——————————————————————

    2yr
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    WorthyAdversary

    One of my favorite novels on the site. I decided to read it on a whim due to its name and was pleasantly surprised. The writing quality is pretty good with only a few mistakes and such. The stability of updates is the only thing I'm stuck on, but that's just because I want to read more of the story. Story development is really amazing and its nice how they haven't revealed what happens in the end yet. Character design is also amazing and I love the chemistry between the characters. World building is also really amazing with many unique tropes instead of just using overused cliches. Overall, amazing novel, highly recommend.

    2yr
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    MacTosh
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    I really like the story. World built and story is great. Looking forward to coming back of the Author. I hope you come back.[img=update]

    2yr
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    leoreview1

    Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

    2yr
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    RayanArcadia

    Overall, this was a great read. The personalities of the characters have been perfectly meshed out in my opinion and the main cast are repeatedly shown, unlike some other novels where they just get forgotten or vanish for some time. The main character surprisingly has a brain which was a sharp contrast to the novels i have read till now. He doesn't hesitate to use his money, kill people, use his influence and relationships to his own benefit. I feel like the buildup of the first meeting of the mc and the fml is getting a bit dragged out but it's going to be resolved soon anyways. The world background is actually pretty good. I especially liked the unique magic system used in this novel which was pretty innovative as compared to the novels where the people simply have to imagine doing the magic or make some circles. The only problem I've had with the novel so far is the updating stability. The chapters are released at an extremely slow pace and there isn't even a fixed schedule for it. Only 2 chapters are released in a month which makes it look like it'll take years to even finally let Eva and Rayne meet. If the chapter release was even like 2 per week, I'd rate this a 10/5.

    2yr
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    aigotcha

    Just read it. Trust me, it’s a great novel. Just spend a few minutes reading, and if you like it, just drop some powerstones and leave a review!

    2yr
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    Samuel32

    I really love this story and it cool stories

    1yr
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    lerageuuu

    well a good novel with an intersting approach of fantasy powers the background of the mc is mind blowing i already read story with a similar problem for the mc but this one is introduced in a way that make the readers think that the mc might not survive for long overall a good story

    1yr
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    Daoist378512

    A great story, can't wait to read more!!

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    RobloxUsername

    Would normally give the story 4.5/5 but there's a lot of stories there are written 10x times worse and gets better scores than this one. I don't rly understand webnovel score system, but this story defnly deserves the 5 stars a lot more than a lot of other stories, so ig ill give it 5 stars. Very good story with good writing quality though there's some places with wrong grammar (it doesn't rly happen that often, so it doesn't rly matter in the end. sometimes things can be a lil vague, like with amy trying to seduce MC (know that I wasn't the only one who didn't get that) but overall its a solid story that ill keep reading.

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    kreto_D_Degenerate

    it is a great story with an unresponsive community ,it might be some people's might not be for others i got hooked on the second chapter read the first 10 chapters than decide whether it is worth continuing or not (p.s there might be grammatical mistakes which will break the immersion so if you find any mistake than post a para comment on it ,this author sees them and corrects them accordingly , if you hit the mark. so, don't worry about being ignored)

    2yr
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    BlackSnowAngel

    Very pleasant story. Enjoyed the pacing and character development. Looking forward to where this will be going. I suggest you to try it once. 😉

    2yr
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    Chapter 123: Chapter 118: Disagreements II 9 days ago

    Âm lượng 1 : From an author...to a Young Master!?

    1. 1
      Prologue: Chapter 1: Ridiculous 2 years ago
    2. 2
      Chapter 2: The opened eyes, the confusion, chasing the stars, Rowen, and the first person…. 2 years ago
    3. 3
      Chapter 3: The plan, using my first skill, drinking my first potion, and the maid’s rant.. 2 years ago
    4. 4
      Chapter 4: The talk, and new family... 2 years ago
    5. 5
      Chapter 5: Back in condition, the maid's hints, and my decision. 2 years ago
    6. 6
      Chapter 6: Difficult relationships, talk with maid, I found a mother? 2 years ago
    7. 7
      Chapter 7: The outcast of Magic Academy and her Mentor. 2 years ago
    8. 8
      Chapter 8: The fight, Her powers, and Accepting a Master 2 years ago
    9. 9
      Chapter 9: A Talk with the Earl... 2 years ago
    10. 10
      Chapter 10: The test and the solution... 2 years ago
    11. 11
      Chapter 11: A Dark Twist, part I 2 years ago
    12. 12
      Chapter 12: A Dark Twist, part II 2 years ago
    13. 13
      Chapter 13: The shock, my status, and the deadline. 2 years ago
    14. 14
      Chapter 14: The dinner, and Parent’s Side. 2 years ago
    15. 15
      Chapter 15: The Training Grounds, The Knight Commander and The purpose. 2 years ago
    16. 16
      Chapter 16: The preparation and A Magus in Action. 2 years ago
    17. 17
      Chapter 17: The talk and finally leaving. 2 years ago
    18. 18
      Chapter 18: Arriving at Ellesmere. 2 years ago
    19. 19
      Chapter 19: Amy, The Negotiator. 2 years ago
    20. 20
      Chapter 20: Marvin’s Side and a déjà vu. 2 years ago
    21. 21
      Chapter 21: Valen Rosemary. 2 years ago
    22. 22
      Chapter 22: Killing a Psycho then Downplaying it!? 2 years ago
    23. 23
      Chapter 23: Maid’s Trick and My punishment. 2 years ago
    24. 24
      Chapter 24: Last day of Probation. 2 years ago
    25. 25
      Chapter 25: A little stunt, and Spell testing. 2 years ago
    26. 26
      Chapter 26: Fixing the sword, and another Shock. 2 years ago
    27. 27
      Chapter 27: Mora’s Request 2 years ago
    28. 28
      Chapter 28: The unexpected Fight, part I 2 years ago
    29. 29
      Chapter 29: The unexpected Fight, part II 2 years ago
    30. 30
      Chapter 30: The unexpected Fight, III 2 years ago
    31. 31
      Chapter 31: The Finale. 2 years ago
    32. 32
      Chapter 32: Aftermath 2 years ago
    33. 33
      Chapter 33: A Lazy Day. 2 years ago
    34. 34
      Chapter 34: Night Attack! 2 years ago
    35. 35
      Side Story: The Disaster of Laraska I 2 years ago
    36. 36
      Chapter 35: Troubles 2 years ago
    37. 37
      Chapter 36: Setting up a Mental Avatar. 2 years ago
    38. 38
      Chapter 37: Start of the banquet. 2 years ago
    39. 39
      Chapter 38: The Official Ceremony. 2 years ago
    40. 40
      Chapter 39: The Factions and the Dance. 2 years ago
    41. 41
      Chapter 40: Greetings 2 years ago
    42. 42
      Chapter 41: The Deal 2 years ago
    43. 43
      Chapter 42: Tussle with the pikes. 2 years ago
    44. 44
      Chapter 43: Declaration! 2 years ago
    45. 45
      Chapter 44: Fight with the Tiger. 2 years ago
    46. 46
      Chapter 45: The End of the Banquet. 2 years ago
    47. 47
      Chapter 46: Moving on... 2 years ago
    48. 48
      Chapter 47: Introductions 2 years ago
    49. 49
      Chapter 48: The New Goal 2 years ago
    50. 50
      Chapter 49: Bonding with mother...? 2 years ago
    51. 51
      Chapter 50: Forging my sword and finally leaving. 2 years ago
    52. 52
      Chapter 51: Eva’s Side (1) 2 years ago
    53. 53
      Chapter 52: Valen Rosemary (2) 2 years ago
    54. 54
      Chapter 53: The Trio Thoughts 2 years ago
    55. 55
      Chapter 54: Eva’s Side (2) 2 years ago

    Âm lượng 2 : The Young Master sets off on a Journey...

    1. 56
      Chapter 55: Farewells and New Start. 2 years ago
    2. 57
      Chapter 56: Stay in Rabhat. 2 years ago
    3. 58
      Chapter 57: Battle in the forest (I) 2 years ago
    4. 59
      Chapter 58: Battle in the Forest (II) 2 years ago
    5. 60
      Chapter 59: Battle in the forest (III) 2 years ago
    6. 61
      Chapter 60: First Glance: Demonic Cult. 2 years ago
    7. 62
      Chapter 61: First Glance: Demonic Cult (II) 2 years ago
    8. 63
      Chapter 62: His fight. 2 years ago
    9. 64
      Chapter 63: First kill, and a mistake. 2 years ago
    10. 65
      Chapter 64: The Rolling Wheels and the Magus’ test. 2 years ago
    11. 66
      Chapter 65: The Kids Meet. 2 years ago
    12. 67
      Chapter 66: The city of Lueurre. 2 years ago
    13. 68
      Chapter 67: Night Scouring. 2 years ago
    14. 69
      Chapter 68: Spying 2 years ago
    15. 70
      Chapter 69: Saying Hello? 2 years ago
    16. 71
      Chapter 70: Talking with Mark 2 years ago
    17. 72
      Chapter 71: The Duo’s side. 2 years ago
    18. 73
      Chapter 72: Over the two days. 2 years ago
    19. 74
      Chapter 73: Upheaval I 2 years ago
    20. 75
      Chapter 74: Upheaval II 2 years ago
    21. 76
      Chapter 75: The Real Scheme. 2 years ago
    22. 77
      Chapter 76: The Mana Eater 2 years ago
    23. 78
      Side Story: The Disaster of Laraska II 2 years ago
    24. 79
      Side Story: The Disaster of Laraska III 2 years ago
    25. 80
      Side Story: The Disaster of Laraska IV 1 years ago
    26. 81
      Side Story: The Disaster of Laraska V, (final part) 1 years ago
    27. 82
      Chapter 77: Infiltration I 1 years ago
    28. 83
      Chapter 78: The Aftermath..? 1 years ago
    29. 84
      Chapter 79: Infiltration II 1 years ago
    30. 85
      Chapter 80: The Atlas's Blessing. 1 years ago
    31. 86
      Chapter 81: The Mission Accomplished in Secrecy 1 years ago
    32. 87
      Chapter 82: Aftermath 1 years ago
    33. 88
      Chapter 83: A Clue 1 years ago
    34. 89
      Chapter 84: Embarrassed Elista and Doomed Aneles. 1 years ago
    35. 90
      Chapter 85: Gathering Pieces 1 years ago
    36. 91
      Chapter 86: Finally, One 1 years ago
    37. 92
      Chapter 87: Meeting with the Tree Girl 1 years ago
    38. 93
      Chapter 88: The Misty Root Forest 1 years ago
    39. 94
      Chapter 89: Mommy’s here? 1 years ago
    40. 95
      Chapter 90: Scheleth’s Peril 1 years ago
    41. 96
      Chapter 91: Developments 1 years ago
    42. 97
      Chapter 92: A Charade 1 years ago
    43. 98
      Chapter 93: Rescuing Elista I 1 years ago
    44. 99
      Chapter 94: Rescuing Elista II 1 years ago
    45. 100
      Chapter 95: Rescuing Elista III 1 years ago
    46. 101
      Chapter 96: Nadol v/s Claire 1 years ago
    47. 102
      Chapter 97: A Mighty Foe. 1 years ago
    48. 103
      Chapter 98: A Snippet of Normalcy 1 years ago
    49. 104
      Chapter 99: The Night Before the Chase 11 months ago
    50. 105
      Chapter 100: The Night Before the Chase II 3 months ago
    51. 106
      Chapter 101: Dawn 3 months ago
    52. 107
      Chapter 102: The Elf’s Background 3 months ago
    53. 108
      Chapter 103: Hell on Earth 3 months ago
    54. 109
      Chapter 104: Separated 3 months ago
    55. 110
      Chapter 105: Encounter 3 months ago
    56. 111
      Chapter 106: Ray Vs Varkain I 2 months ago
    57. 112
      Chapter 107: Ray Vs Varkain II 2 months ago
    58. 113
      Chapter 108: Ray Vs Varkain III 2 months ago
    59. 114
      Chapter 109: Ray Vs Varkain III 2 months ago
    60. 115
      Chapter 110: Ray Vs Varkain IV 2 months ago
    61. 116
      Chapter 111: After Victory 2 months ago
    62. 117
      Chapter 112: The Tree of Light 2 months ago
    63. 118
      Chapter 113: Devouring the light. 1 months ago
    64. 119
      Chapter 114: Aftermath I 1 months ago
    65. 120
      Chapter 115: Aftermath II 1 months ago
    66. 121
      Chapter 116: Leaving 22 days ago
    67. 122
      Chapter 117: Disagreements 17 days ago
    68. 123
      Chapter 118: Disagreements II 9 days ago

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