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Tales of the Rebirth Apocalypse Emperor (First draft)
4.85 (19 số lượng người đọc)
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After living in the Gondola universe for fifty years, Chen Murong dies under the claw of Lucifer, one of the emperor rank demons from the undead race. However, at the moment of his last breath, he activates one of his time magic spells with his most precious space gemstone. Through the spell, he wakes up alive, back in his homeworld, and returns to the year before the apocalypse period began…
Note: This book is the first draft of my first novel that I plan to write. The purpose is to get quick feedback from fellow writers and readers on how the story should develop. If you find the short draft version interesting to you, please find the full version of the novel under the name of "Tales of the Rebirth Apocalypse Emporer".
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The work speaks of its efforts. You really did great. I love synopsis and plot. The characters and the backgroung are really hooking me. Hope it would be a mass hit in the future
It is a really wonderful novel, I hope that it would be updated more often. I'm already waiting for further developments in the story. 😁💯💯💯
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I rarely rea apocalypse genre but i had to review so i gave it a try. Not bad so far. Good storyline and the characters are well written. But i feel something missing here.
BRUH THIS IS GREAT :'D Well, first, the writing itself is great, and I really love how the author portrays things. It felt like I could visualize it :D AND THENNN THE PLOT IS SO GOOD LIKEE I FELT SO EMOTIONAL READING IT :'D Man I love the characters and the sadness :') Great work, author! Thank you for this! <3
I rarely read apoclypse and scifi story but this one is pretty good! The imagination, the world, the systems, all of them are very creative, interesting, and amazing! Highly recommended 💕💕 I can't wait for the next chapter 😁
This is a good story. I didn't often read novels about apocalypse but this one is interesting and so is the main character and how will he save his planet. It only needs proofreading in some chapters then it will turn to a more improved version of the story. This is still new and I think the author will still improve with this one. Good luck author!
wow this piece of work is truly so intriguing! This novel just had me kept reading but I needed to review it (◠‿◕) so here goes- A intricately tailored plotline with enticing concept, well designed characters consisting individual personalities, plot thickens with every chapters and occasionally leaves the readers wondering whats next?, the novel has mystery, humour, action, adventure, thrill,fun and furthermore the instances of an apocalypse are described well keeping the readers attention hooked!
aw, my favorite genre but why there is BL, 4 is my highest skor for the apocalypse and game element so it skor don't drop by much, but sorry i'm not gonna look into it good luck with your novel tough
Hmm. The first chapter has an intriguing and good start. World Background, Great! Though there are literally lots of world here but the author greatly explain each. Characters is well around and I knew they would develop more. Overall this is already a great read. I'll look forward for more updates! Great work author!
This is a beautiful story and I loved reading it. The chapters are really moving, especially the bond in MC's family. It's so cute and adorable. The author has a great imagination and a nice story line. Really waiting for more chapters to be updated.
I think most of us have read enough apocalypse and revenge novels already but this novel is simply mind-blowing! In my opinion, this is the most beautiful and interesting apocalyptic novel so far. This story has a lot more potential and positive content. I'm glad that I found this. I think I definitely stumbled upon a rare gem here. Not only we have romance during the apocalyptic world, but there are also game abilities and kingdom building involved! Yes! You didn't read it wrong. They are all in this novel! There were also some scenes that I cried a lot and there were some scenes that I felt really happy. Most reborn novels have just only narrated the MC's past life experiences but here it was portrayed beautifully through the MC's perspective. I even got emotional at some points when I read it. I highly recommend this novel. It is so worth it !!! The only thing that I wish the author to fix is to release a longer chapter and more frequent. The author, please keep writing this book!
Oh my god! This book is simply awesome. What an unexpected lovely story inside an apocalypse novel. I was glad that I've found this novel! I highly recommend this novel to everyone who likes rebirth, apocalypse, mystery, and romance. I know it doesn't sound like it should come together but it does! Though a synopsis isn't that good but gives it a try for the first five chapters, then after that, I guarantee this will be one of your favorites!
OH I absolutely love the plot and the synopsis is good too . It would be great if the story had constant updates !!!! But , anyway All the best !!! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
Thai is a review for an outstanding work of the author! Good job! Having read the synopsis, it made me become automatically interested. Making me hooked by it. I can say the author was imaginative and has creative mind in his self. Making his creation to be splendid! A wonderful take on its genre! BTW, I am from review swap thread. Do check out mine too!
I really love reading this story! I quickly grew passionately addicted to it and can't wait for the next update. The way the author tells the story is not what I expected from a typical rebirth in the apocalypse genre. I won't spoil it. You have to read it yourself! In my opinion, this is the novel that makes me got chills when I read it from time to time. I realize it is just the beginning but I hope the trend continues. I hope the author will continue writing and don't drop it like other apocalypse novels!
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beautiful ❤️ nd love to read more chapters. plz bring us more....nd stable update... hope... We will also every day vote this novel.... love u
I shamelessly give a review to myself. :) I plan to divide the story into two main stages. 1) Apocalypse in MC original world. 2) Calamity in Gondola dimension. Synopsis: After living on Gondola for fifty years, Chen Murong dies under the craw of Lucifer, one of emperor rank demons from the undead race. However, at the moment of his last breath, he activates one of his time magic spells with his most precious space gemstone. Through the spell, he wakes up alive, back in his hometown, and returns to the year before the apocalypse period began. Writing Quality: It is at least better than I thought it would be. I do fight for improvement. Please help me edit it if you have some ideas. :) Stability of Updates: I have both full-time and part-time jobs. I will try to update as frequently as possible. Story Development: The events in the past life of MC will continuously reveal little by little throughout the story. Character Design: I promise that there will be several key characters in the story. World Background: Mixing between modern and fantasy.