/ Sci-fi / Conquering Space With My Licking System
4.15 (13 số lượng người đọc)
Tóm tắt
[Mature Content!]
Theodore Black, a normal person in an abnormal world where genetic superiority is everything, and when I say everything I mean everything from the smallest amoeba to the gigantic RI pterodactyl, had a dream.
Being normal is like a blessing but not in this case. The world is so advanced that a normal person is worse than an automated coffee table.
Due to his normality, Theodore has a very not-so-happy life. He doesn't have a job, like who would even hire a normal wannabe like him for any task? His parents and peers thought he was a lost cause, maybe he was.
Until...
One day the deputy head of the international space association came to visit him. He first thought it was a prank or perhaps some sort of mistake but soon reality hit him. He was asked to do his dream job, going to space. But there was a catch.
.... a few weeks later he found himself stranded on an unknown planet with not-so-friendly races.
To take cover he crawled into a cave and got attacked by a woman, not in an aggressive way but a romantic way. She kissed her for what seemed like a thousand years and...
And then...
Romance, Yandere, System are the main tags.
Warning! Mc starts out as a very weak protagonist. But he eventually goes through stuff and then comes character development. I'd appreciate it if I didn't receive comments like, "Why's he so wimpy?" "Why does he just keep on depending on others?" and such. There are reasons and they'll be explained.
PS. Do follow me on insta: Nr_Yet1208
or join my discord server:https://discord.gg/xwYrHNDzRv
Thẻ
Bạn cũng có thể thích
4.15
Chia sẻ suy nghĩ của bạn với người khác
Viết đánh giáCurrently I have read about 144 chapters. My brain may be like Swiss cheese but I can still explain why I love this story. The writing is unique, kind of like a poem at times and consistent. The story develops in many directions with one goal in the end. While one thing happens, there are others happening at the same time. And things don't happen like what you would expect- First, there is this girl that gives him (MC) his power. It's absolutely not the end of the story, it's the beginning. The story itself isn't just based on licking or giving in to human desires, it's more than that. The MC grows with his friends by his side, gets to know more people and then he also grows in strength. He isn't the only main character of this story though, since there is a girl named Rin. Maybe I'm stupid but I'm still confused on how important she will be or why she is that important. Rin changes, just like the MC, but they all have those kind of values that they stick with. MC is sometimes stupid and insecure, but gets more confident as time passes. Rin is emotionally instable and continues to be so, but also gets acknowledged by many people, or how to say it? The best buddy of the year, John, stays like he his (really fits his character) but some things change even for him (And for the girl that likes him if you get what I mean). My favourite character right now is Skullmandathor! That grandpa is really funny even if the main character exploits the poor guy. I mean they are friends, but Skully really should start thinking about his friend-choices. The updating stability is so stable I am now cured from any imbalance I had. World Background should be in plural, there are many worlds and when a new world is introduced, it's explained enough to understand everything I wanted to know. History - like the overtaking of intelligent robots first or how this planet has some gods that they imprisoned for reasons and even more - gets mentioned from time to time. It fills gaps but still leaves you curious for more. Overall, I see no reason to not read this. I wasn't that interested in this story at first because I'm somewhat afraid of possible futures, even if they are just fiction. What first catched my attention was the title- but I can't be the only one right? :D
Tiết lộ Spoilerit's good don't drop also I fell like it's obvious but is there romance. I don't know what else to say except yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere yandere [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Write this review around the latest four chapters so far. Review Proper (Might contain spoilers ahead!!!) Writing Quality. Well, I'm still learning a lot about writing grammar myself so other than the basic grammar stuff, I can't say much. However, the author really did well in writing the narratives for this story. The structure of each scene and grammar are on par with the top novels here at WN. Stability of Updates: So far the author has stable updates, and mentioned in the synopsis that it will be around Saturday and Sunday. Good thing, since the readers will not be anxious each day wondering when there will be updates. Story Development. The opening chapter started with a bang! It's very interesting. Then it smoothly transitioned to the protagonist's life. Theodore was vividly described as someone normal and as a normal person as well, I can relate well. I looked forward to the further development of the story. Character Design. Based on how the author describes the characters, they really act that way and speak the way in line with their personalities. Nothing feels forced in the dialogues and such. World Background. I love it. I myself am a fan of system novels. And with a setting that is intergalactic and sci-fi added, truly a chef's kiss. Recommendation: Just read the first chapter, and I know you will definitely like to continue reading it. It's sad that I don't have stones right now, but I will definitely vote for this when I have. Overall, this will definitely stay in my library! I look forward to more chaps! Great work, author!
I'm not much of a fan of system series but I'm a man of my word and read this to return feedback. This review is based off the first 3 chapters. At first I was slightly turned off by (from my understanding, please correct me if I am wrong author) what was "reverse" r*pe that the victim ended up liking??? Later on the MC has a convo with a friend who admits to sexually harassing his boss. These types of things take me out of wanting to read most stories, but the plot is pretty good so hopefully this isn't a recurring theme. And that is my ONLY complaint outside of minor punctuation mistakes.(Some may be due to different writing rules in different countries.) The author is a great story-teller and did a great job of creating a relatable MC who seemed down on his luck but finally gets an opportunity of a lifetime. I noticed that the author has already uploaded this series with quite a bit of content (DRAFT version) but I will wait on this version to be updated. Good luck in the WPC.
Tiết lộ Spoilergonna be honest, i did think the idea is intresting but after reading till the locked chaps i got bored more and more, still taste differs but sadly its not for my taste. still keep the work going
The author has a good writing skills... the story can easily understand and the discription is very vivid.... the story is very captivating and detailed 😊😊😊
It’s a good story. It is obviously not wish fullfillment; other people are implied to have ”heat” other than the protag. The one thing i’ve always hated is implied “heat” especially after they just talked down about the protag or me self inserted. That happened with his mom and her boyfriend. (the dad has a thing for A.I) Protag is still a wimp as of chapter 62; he is getting a little bit better. At the same time there are A.I, other intelligent life, “Qmales” or humans who can cop----- with both genders, and space exploration. Though there isn’t much action at all... Actually the real protag is our mcs best friend, and the story follows and praises him way too much... Females fall in love at first sight, and he protects our wimp mc like the good friend he is. Expect gay jokes. Protag has a charm ability, attributes plus assignable stat points, a licking system; take it literally. The only romance the mc has had so far is with an A.I and we got c*^>blocked because of his conscience. Oh, his sister is a yandere. That's the one thing that kept me going. (almost dropped when the mother forced political marriage onto her; she’s blackmailing her by sending the mc as a hostage to another species prince..) Not that the mc gives her the time of day... In conclusion, if you have the time and nothing else to do, give it a gamble. And I recommend free readers to wait until it’s 24hrs free...
Tiết lộ SpoilerI was looking for copper, but I found gold. I really like the story, I'm writing a review on chapter 62 (I think I'll buy them later) and in general, everything suits me now. You can describe the advantages of this work for a long time, but as for me, this story did not deserve due popularity, which is a pity. I am only confused by two things, this is his communication with women (as for me, if in the future many girls will show him sympathy, and he just ignores it because of love for one girl, I am rather confused by the fact that he will do with them?) And most importantly, let the sister not be the main love interest, I don't really like her character at the time of writing the review, and I hope his girlfriend won't be who - then in the likeness of the captain of their ship :) Well, I have described my thought in principle, I wish the author good luck in writing a full-fledged interesting story in such a wonderful genre for her (I hope it turned out legibly, since English is not my native language)
Tiết lộ Spoiler1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
Legends say that a normal guy died of ligma and received the supreme licking system... ..................................................................
The novel is good if you just want to leisurely spend time. Though you might be bothered by mistakes here and there, but it's good overall. ---
Tác giả Nr_Yet1208
Alright, I'd like to make some things clear. 1. Yes, there's romance but that's a subplot. 2. No, this won't be a harem. Due to the system though, a lot of stuff might happen. 3. Yes, this was published before as a draft, but I'm editing and only after two edits, releasing the new chapters. The release rate is 6-9ch/week and it'll stay like that for a while. 3.5. The system would be introduced just around Ch30. 4. Why the system exists and how it came to be will be explained and so will its purpose. I hope to upload daily and entertain you guys. So, a little motivation (in the form of tickets or votes) is always welcome. Thank you for picking this up and have a great day.
Tiết lộ Spoiler