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I honestly like this book, however I don't remember him using the revive card and it doesn't entirely match the description.
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I'm serious, the page pays you to copy and paste these MHA stories, how come 99% of the stories on this page about that anime are copy and paste?
The writings decent, if not filled with an unnecessary amount of random jokes. Like, there’s not one good moment where seriousness actually stays where it needs to be. Also, I just can’t with the MC making some of the dumbest choices possible. Like really? Revealing your reincarnation? There is literally no point in doing that, bo one would ever be able to find out about it so you don’t have to reveal it. Overall, just bad character writing and decisions.
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Этот проект интересен для меня. Минусы проекта : 1)нарушен лимит мощности 2)очень мало сюжета 3)мало персонажей, а существующие мало раскрыты
👍 Good! I really like it most of it was the note at the end of the chapter!hehehehe the were funny!. omg god this fanfiction took me over a week to complete, not a week though . Only 5 day if i would say. Any way it really fantastic . I am really looking forward to you next fiction. Bye.
If you want to know the spoiler, just read review from the kintaro498 (1 month ago), you can have know the big part of the story from there and also all the tags is true, thanks author for the story 👍👍👍👏👏👏
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Hm, I'll start saying that I dropped the FF on chapter 30ish, but I'll also say that I think this FF is more criticized than it should. To be honest, it's not that bad, not 3.Something stars at least. The author has potencial for sure, will look if he has other works. But let's talk about this one rn. First 'problem' that I can think, author loves his jokes and references, and they were pretty good... but too much it starts getting annoying, but that wasn't much of a problem. Second, and the deal breaker to me, the story development. Well, it started pretty good, and when we find out that the MC was a year older than the cast I got excited, because that would be a criative way to explore the 'not so interesting' world of MHA. But my hopes died shortly, because something the autor created made it necessary for the MC to be in all the major events of the canon story, and that was the buff he gave to all the 'major' villains. So in turn we have a Super Strong MC who is helping, but not enough to make too much difference, just enough to counter the new buffs. And what that means at the end? It means that the author gave then buffs just so that MC could counter them, result? No visible change at all in the story, basically a useless fanfic. And don't get me wrong, I think it is possible to make a good canon MHA FF, but it sure is hard. And even though ppl talk bad about MC being a 'sl*ve' to the system, it kinda makes sense, since author foreshadows that the Rob has a bigger plan for him or something. So of course Rob has to make sure the MC isn't slacking. You can see some other inconviniences, like the child MC releasing mangas and technologies becoming a secret multi-billionaire teenager, but whatever. It's clear that the parts that the author let his imagination dictate the flow of the story were way better than when he started trying to fit the MC on the already existing plot. I would love to see him trying to write fanfics in stories that has a vast world like One Piece, for example, one that the MC could probably do whatever he wants without worrying about the plot. No hate though, Much love.
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Okay, I might be a bit over the top on my comment, but I have NO idea why you would do that at the end of the Hideout arc (my name is Jeff, the last one). I mean, why? Inspiration? nah, man. Why would you have a hero be so F*COKING STUPID as to get someone killed due to ego and carelessness. that just isn't nessesary. Maybe others like this kind of thing, but it is NOT for me. a shame. you had a good story up to that point in my opinion. well, better luck next time.
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[Vector Manipulation] OP. Great story in all honsesty though... All hail Egg-Sama
i would give 4 stars because i did not like the ending, but it is just personal preference sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo...
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One of the best fanfic that I have read in a long time it was ever good it made the Mc over power but it was funny and did not over do the power base and made it a good book to read
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Me encantó, la parte de la Loli Eri :3 un accelerator no es accelerator sin su Loli, solo deseo que ya valla a un nuevo mundo, y avanza un poquito lento, pero me encantó, deseo que siga así :3,
a very low quality system slave that really doesnt use his brain, like he has less than 10 skills after having the gamer for more than ten years, and he also really wastes his time
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I love it to be honest, there's a lot of flaws but nothing is perfect. The one thing that make me drop this is the way mc feel he should explain everything to his girl, heck he hasn't realize momo like him and proceed to tell her. There's a way to tell someone you love, but not blatantly say "I know the original timeline, I'm not supposed to be here" or some shit. Reincarnation and stuff like this still unbelievable even in quirk world, the smart female like momo won't think mc somehow manipulate things to his liking since he knows so many things about others, maybe even how to get momo, maybe it's all lie? Anyway, I feel it's bad execution and kinda disappointed after bracing myself reading this. Thanks for your work, I hope we can meet in your next book
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Very good story. Also has creativity for the skills that mc has. I do have a question, can the mc create a black hole? The forces to compress an item would be astronomical and if so, wouldn't he be the strongest in the world?
I honestly like this book, however I don't remember him using the revive card and it doesn't entirely match the description.
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The writings decent, if not filled with an unnecessary amount of random jokes. Like, there’s not one good moment where seriousness actually stays where it needs to be. Also, I just can’t with the MC making some of the dumbest choices possible. Like really? Revealing your reincarnation? There is literally no point in doing that, bo one would ever be able to find out about it so you don’t have to reveal it. Overall, just bad character writing and decisions.
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Этот проект интересен для меня. Минусы проекта : 1)нарушен лимит мощности 2)очень мало сюжета 3)мало персонажей, а существующие мало раскрыты
👍 Good! I really like it most of it was the note at the end of the chapter!hehehehe the were funny!. omg god this fanfiction took me over a week to complete, not a week though . Only 5 day if i would say. Any way it really fantastic . I am really looking forward to you next fiction. Bye.
If you want to know the spoiler, just read review from the kintaro498 (1 month ago), you can have know the big part of the story from there and also all the tags is true, thanks author for the story 👍👍👍👏👏👏
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Hm, I'll start saying that I dropped the FF on chapter 30ish, but I'll also say that I think this FF is more criticized than it should. To be honest, it's not that bad, not 3.Something stars at least. The author has potencial for sure, will look if he has other works. But let's talk about this one rn. First 'problem' that I can think, author loves his jokes and references, and they were pretty good... but too much it starts getting annoying, but that wasn't much of a problem. Second, and the deal breaker to me, the story development. Well, it started pretty good, and when we find out that the MC was a year older than the cast I got excited, because that would be a criative way to explore the 'not so interesting' world of MHA. But my hopes died shortly, because something the autor created made it necessary for the MC to be in all the major events of the canon story, and that was the buff he gave to all the 'major' villains. So in turn we have a Super Strong MC who is helping, but not enough to make too much difference, just enough to counter the new buffs. And what that means at the end? It means that the author gave then buffs just so that MC could counter them, result? No visible change at all in the story, basically a useless fanfic. And don't get me wrong, I think it is possible to make a good canon MHA FF, but it sure is hard. And even though ppl talk bad about MC being a 'sl*ve' to the system, it kinda makes sense, since author foreshadows that the Rob has a bigger plan for him or something. So of course Rob has to make sure the MC isn't slacking. You can see some other inconviniences, like the child MC releasing mangas and technologies becoming a secret multi-billionaire teenager, but whatever. It's clear that the parts that the author let his imagination dictate the flow of the story were way better than when he started trying to fit the MC on the already existing plot. I would love to see him trying to write fanfics in stories that has a vast world like One Piece, for example, one that the MC could probably do whatever he wants without worrying about the plot. No hate though, Much love.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Okay, I might be a bit over the top on my comment, but I have NO idea why you would do that at the end of the Hideout arc (my name is Jeff, the last one). I mean, why? Inspiration? nah, man. Why would you have a hero be so F*COKING STUPID as to get someone killed due to ego and carelessness. that just isn't nessesary. Maybe others like this kind of thing, but it is NOT for me. a shame. you had a good story up to that point in my opinion. well, better luck next time.
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[Vector Manipulation] OP. Great story in all honsesty though... All hail Egg-Sama
i would give 4 stars because i did not like the ending, but it is just personal preference sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo...
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One of the best fanfic that I have read in a long time it was ever good it made the Mc over power but it was funny and did not over do the power base and made it a good book to read
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Me encantó, la parte de la Loli Eri :3 un accelerator no es accelerator sin su Loli, solo deseo que ya valla a un nuevo mundo, y avanza un poquito lento, pero me encantó, deseo que siga así :3,
a very low quality system slave that really doesnt use his brain, like he has less than 10 skills after having the gamer for more than ten years, and he also really wastes his time
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I love it to be honest, there's a lot of flaws but nothing is perfect. The one thing that make me drop this is the way mc feel he should explain everything to his girl, heck he hasn't realize momo like him and proceed to tell her. There's a way to tell someone you love, but not blatantly say "I know the original timeline, I'm not supposed to be here" or some shit. Reincarnation and stuff like this still unbelievable even in quirk world, the smart female like momo won't think mc somehow manipulate things to his liking since he knows so many things about others, maybe even how to get momo, maybe it's all lie? Anyway, I feel it's bad execution and kinda disappointed after bracing myself reading this. Thanks for your work, I hope we can meet in your next book
Tiết lộ Spoiler Very good story. Also has creativity for the skills that mc has. I do have a question, can the mc create a black hole? The forces to compress an item would be astronomical and if so, wouldn't he be the strongest in the world?
You got a story and a concept but got no characters