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This fanfic has too many comments on the paragraphs and sentences! even a simple exclamation or sfx* can't escape!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Mmmrjndbxhekdnfh ismr rhdj jene chckrmr fhcjrn ****emfnzzz&.’.’.!:!!:!;!,!,!!.!!!h!..................... :$4&;&4&;
Genuinely one of the most insufferable protagonists i've ever read about in my entire existence...............................................
well could be a nice book. but author failed pretty early. his quest system got the punishment of death when he fails... so every quest given is a sure success. you can skip till the quest is over.... its plain stupid. mc would be DEAD for sure cause only an omnipotent beeing can always win. 1 quest is making sure no one will drop out of a test.... or death.... well teacher is an asshole and could drop someone random....students could fail cause they suck... so many thinks he cant controll that would be his death.... just skip it cause he CANT FAIL or the story is over. its so stupid.... dropped around chapter 20-30 dont even know.
One Of the best Dan fics on web novel. consistent updates and funny protaganist.👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👏🏿👏🏿😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
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The world has too many flaws (if the villains that appeared in the anime are stronger, because they would follow the plot, being stronger it is obvious that their plans would change, their personalities, etc.) The character follows the canon and acts as a babysitter for isuku (beta), it seems that he had several personalities, it is as if the author did not decide what personality to give the mc, sometimes it is social, other antisocial, sometimes childish, other mature. at the beginning the story had started well but the further you progress the worse it gets, the inconsistencies of the character cannot even be considered comedic. Another thing that annoys says that he does not want to stand out and that his white hair is enough, he lives in a world where there are people who transform into animals or parts (Rumi, his companion who controls the shadows), plants (the hero who literally is a tree) and many more things such as horns (Eri), wings (hawk), tail (his companion), etc, which part of him would make him stand out, he is literally a secondary character that you would never notice, because there are hair colors to heaps in that anime.
Writing Quality-5 Very less grammatical mistakes but it wasn't at the top of several fanfics of this site Stability of Updates-5 I binged it but, then I dropped World Background-4 Limited to what Horikoshi has written and no extra development like other countries Story Development-2 Reasons below Character Design-3 reasons below The main problem with the fanfic is the main premise of the story -If the timeline changes then the universe collapses and thus the mc gets robbed. What was the point of writing a wish fulfilment fanfic if the timeline remains the same ? The only driving force of the story is the system and mc's accelerator powers and the death penalty. Which makes the story shallow and there is little to no character development. Author tries to add some comedic elements but it becomes cringe for the readers. why? because Mc is from OUR real world and him suddenly acting anime-ish but with IRL JOJO memes is too much and this type of comedy never works in Fanfics. This type of comedic elements has already been explored by other fanfics and is cliche. Conclusion: If you have nothing to read then you will probably enjoy it. It is an average harem, wish fulfilment, cringey fanfic
Simple Thing If u r inventing iron man suit nd arc reactor nd whatnot in this type of world u r a fool. i mean cm on. Op is fine, Richie Rich is f9 too bt Meh
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Comedy is good, but he always takes things as a joke and does not take the problems he later faces seriously. The story is interesting but a bit strange because then it starts to put plots out of nowhere without much backstory
++NO REVIEW++ Haven't read, but I can't believe I haven't found this jewel~! I have high expectations! ლ(・﹏・ლ) FillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFiller
A good and fun novel. I only have one problem, and that is the author talks about future events. Thanks and I hope you keep posting more chapters. More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
.................................. I don’t want to go home because I Have a car and a car so yi was my day I was going home I had a good time and then I got my car to do a car wash and then I’ll be back home and then I’m going home I have a few minutes I need to go home and take care is a beautiful day and night and the sun is going out and then you can just take a little break and then get to go home and take some time off of the weekend so I to go and get my hair done I will be home by five or u to be sure to be in the next couple of weeks I have a few minutes of the week to go to work I just got home I have a few things to come up to you can I just go get my stuff and get them done I don’t want you guys going on a trip or you want to come and go to the house or you guys want to go get it or something to eat or do I want
es una buena historia con un buen protagonista péro se puede hacer algo pesada sin apresurarnos, a las personas qué no están acostumbradas al harem
I consider myself tolerant with reading, I can read even the badly written and think if it has potential or not, but this fic ... I mean, I have read the first 14 chapters, the MC is a stupid *** addict, who speaks to the fourth wall and the author himself corrects the supposed God calling him ROB again ... I don't like this fic, it shows that the future that the author has for this fic is only multiversal ***, the only future I see is MC hunting all The female characters, being super OP, I do not see adventure, nor character growth, nor action, nor even approach to drama of any kind, this fiction from the beginning is horrible, I recommend the author to rewrite it in something better.
Take my stars. Gimme more chapters. MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MAOR MAOR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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The mc gets vector control and the gamers power. Vector control is shown quite normal as all things should be but the gamers power, now thats where it turns a lie. There is nothing that shows The Gamers power except the gamers mind and body, other than that it's just a generic slave system with stats, daily quest and ocasional missions. Nothing that makes The Gamer special is here, the lootings, game like skills that appears for almost everything you do, the buffs and the cheaty things.The MC doesnt even actively seeks power, looks for loopholes and grinds things either. Even the stats are a bullshit, gamer gets 1k int and turns kinda godly but the mc gets almost 10k and just barely gets the original accelerators level. Plus it doesnt even seems to increase his computing powers much, it says it does but thats just on paper because the while the MC is having his inner monologue minutes pass. The power levels are all over the place, his level is too low for his high stats (ik, the meditation and other gimmicks) it's not even thought out, i guess thats true to canon The Gamer manhwa where the stats are all over the place.
The novel has so many JoJo reference. The whole novel is a JoJo reference. The author is full of JoJo reference. The MCs brain is filled with JoJo reference The MCs parellel thoughts are thinking of nothing but JoJo references because he just stops being a genius with unholy amount of INT and WIS when the plot needs it. Just above average memelord who says he can handle it easily if he went all out yet nerfs himself hard. Other than that a good read. Quite funny too.
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Q: Why 5 stars??? A: Just because I like it. (To fill 140 .............................................. ...............................................................)
its pretty good worth a read dont get why people really harsh on the author its good so give it a read..............................................................
just like the other low stars reviewer said. this novel is just too much bullshit. mc acts as nanny for izuku and friends, monologues too much. he's strong enough to change the plot but he's didn't do it fearing the butterfly effect and just following cannon which i find boring like the other 10 thousands mha fanfics. yep. it's booring
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You won't find anything new in this fanfiction, MC just follows the canon, and also acts as a nanny for Izuku ... I don't understand ... I expected in this fanfiction to see someone who at least remotely resembles Accelerator or at least the personal history of MC in MHA, but it follows the canon. It seems to me that the author cannot just come up with anything new and discard the canon and that is why he added a system that gives MC tasks with a fatal penalty so that the MC cannot change the canon ... I'm sorry that I wasted time on this fanfic.
A normal man, through some bullshit luck, got chosen to reincarnate in another world after getting killed by the legendary Truck-kun. Distraught at the fact that he died without losing his V-Card, he becomes impatient and wanted to get the reincarnation process over quickly. Because of this, he ended up annoying the ROB overseeing his reincarnation, and to spite him, the ROB rigged his quest system. Because of this he ended up being forced to keep the timelines of the worlds he travels to intact and as close to canon as possible. If not, the world collapses. The problem? The bad guys all have power ups while the good guys get nothing. Follow our resident MC as he tried to keep the timelines intact while doing his best to become relevant and interact with the characters... and maybe get some girls on the way. Maybe.
just follow canon, mc have one year more than classe A but he go in this classe like "assistance" just for follow canon more and more, is not rly good for me but is me.
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This fanfic has too many comments on the paragraphs and sentences! even a simple exclamation or sfx* can't escape!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Mmmrjndbxhekdnfh ismr rhdj jene chckrmr fhcjrn ****emfnzzz&.’.’.!:!!:!;!,!,!!.!!!h!..................... :$4&;&4&;
Genuinely one of the most insufferable protagonists i've ever read about in my entire existence...............................................
well could be a nice book. but author failed pretty early. his quest system got the punishment of death when he fails... so every quest given is a sure success. you can skip till the quest is over.... its plain stupid. mc would be DEAD for sure cause only an omnipotent beeing can always win. 1 quest is making sure no one will drop out of a test.... or death.... well teacher is an asshole and could drop someone random....students could fail cause they suck... so many thinks he cant controll that would be his death.... just skip it cause he CANT FAIL or the story is over. its so stupid.... dropped around chapter 20-30 dont even know.
One Of the best Dan fics on web novel. consistent updates and funny protaganist.👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👏🏿👏🏿😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes yup yes I yes yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes yup yes I yes yes
The world has too many flaws (if the villains that appeared in the anime are stronger, because they would follow the plot, being stronger it is obvious that their plans would change, their personalities, etc.) The character follows the canon and acts as a babysitter for isuku (beta), it seems that he had several personalities, it is as if the author did not decide what personality to give the mc, sometimes it is social, other antisocial, sometimes childish, other mature. at the beginning the story had started well but the further you progress the worse it gets, the inconsistencies of the character cannot even be considered comedic. Another thing that annoys says that he does not want to stand out and that his white hair is enough, he lives in a world where there are people who transform into animals or parts (Rumi, his companion who controls the shadows), plants (the hero who literally is a tree) and many more things such as horns (Eri), wings (hawk), tail (his companion), etc, which part of him would make him stand out, he is literally a secondary character that you would never notice, because there are hair colors to heaps in that anime.
Writing Quality-5 Very less grammatical mistakes but it wasn't at the top of several fanfics of this site Stability of Updates-5 I binged it but, then I dropped World Background-4 Limited to what Horikoshi has written and no extra development like other countries Story Development-2 Reasons below Character Design-3 reasons below The main problem with the fanfic is the main premise of the story -If the timeline changes then the universe collapses and thus the mc gets robbed. What was the point of writing a wish fulfilment fanfic if the timeline remains the same ? The only driving force of the story is the system and mc's accelerator powers and the death penalty. Which makes the story shallow and there is little to no character development. Author tries to add some comedic elements but it becomes cringe for the readers. why? because Mc is from OUR real world and him suddenly acting anime-ish but with IRL JOJO memes is too much and this type of comedy never works in Fanfics. This type of comedic elements has already been explored by other fanfics and is cliche. Conclusion: If you have nothing to read then you will probably enjoy it. It is an average harem, wish fulfilment, cringey fanfic
Simple Thing If u r inventing iron man suit nd arc reactor nd whatnot in this type of world u r a fool. i mean cm on. Op is fine, Richie Rich is f9 too bt Meh
Tiết lộ Spoiler Comedy is good, but he always takes things as a joke and does not take the problems he later faces seriously. The story is interesting but a bit strange because then it starts to put plots out of nowhere without much backstory
++NO REVIEW++ Haven't read, but I can't believe I haven't found this jewel~! I have high expectations! ლ(・﹏・ლ) FillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFillerFiller
A good and fun novel. I only have one problem, and that is the author talks about future events. Thanks and I hope you keep posting more chapters. More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
.................................. I don’t want to go home because I Have a car and a car so yi was my day I was going home I had a good time and then I got my car to do a car wash and then I’ll be back home and then I’m going home I have a few minutes I need to go home and take care is a beautiful day and night and the sun is going out and then you can just take a little break and then get to go home and take some time off of the weekend so I to go and get my hair done I will be home by five or u to be sure to be in the next couple of weeks I have a few minutes of the week to go to work I just got home I have a few things to come up to you can I just go get my stuff and get them done I don’t want you guys going on a trip or you want to come and go to the house or you guys want to go get it or something to eat or do I want
es una buena historia con un buen protagonista péro se puede hacer algo pesada sin apresurarnos, a las personas qué no están acostumbradas al harem
I consider myself tolerant with reading, I can read even the badly written and think if it has potential or not, but this fic ... I mean, I have read the first 14 chapters, the MC is a stupid *** addict, who speaks to the fourth wall and the author himself corrects the supposed God calling him ROB again ... I don't like this fic, it shows that the future that the author has for this fic is only multiversal ***, the only future I see is MC hunting all The female characters, being super OP, I do not see adventure, nor character growth, nor action, nor even approach to drama of any kind, this fiction from the beginning is horrible, I recommend the author to rewrite it in something better.
Take my stars. Gimme more chapters. MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MAOR MAOR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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The mc gets vector control and the gamers power. Vector control is shown quite normal as all things should be but the gamers power, now thats where it turns a lie. There is nothing that shows The Gamers power except the gamers mind and body, other than that it's just a generic slave system with stats, daily quest and ocasional missions. Nothing that makes The Gamer special is here, the lootings, game like skills that appears for almost everything you do, the buffs and the cheaty things.The MC doesnt even actively seeks power, looks for loopholes and grinds things either. Even the stats are a bullshit, gamer gets 1k int and turns kinda godly but the mc gets almost 10k and just barely gets the original accelerators level. Plus it doesnt even seems to increase his computing powers much, it says it does but thats just on paper because the while the MC is having his inner monologue minutes pass. The power levels are all over the place, his level is too low for his high stats (ik, the meditation and other gimmicks) it's not even thought out, i guess thats true to canon The Gamer manhwa where the stats are all over the place.
The novel has so many JoJo reference. The whole novel is a JoJo reference. The author is full of JoJo reference. The MCs brain is filled with JoJo reference The MCs parellel thoughts are thinking of nothing but JoJo references because he just stops being a genius with unholy amount of INT and WIS when the plot needs it. Just above average memelord who says he can handle it easily if he went all out yet nerfs himself hard. Other than that a good read. Quite funny too.
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Q: Why 5 stars??? A: Just because I like it. (To fill 140 .............................................. ...............................................................)
its pretty good worth a read dont get why people really harsh on the author its good so give it a read..............................................................
just like the other low stars reviewer said. this novel is just too much bullshit. mc acts as nanny for izuku and friends, monologues too much. he's strong enough to change the plot but he's didn't do it fearing the butterfly effect and just following cannon which i find boring like the other 10 thousands mha fanfics. yep. it's booring
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You won't find anything new in this fanfiction, MC just follows the canon, and also acts as a nanny for Izuku ... I don't understand ... I expected in this fanfiction to see someone who at least remotely resembles Accelerator or at least the personal history of MC in MHA, but it follows the canon. It seems to me that the author cannot just come up with anything new and discard the canon and that is why he added a system that gives MC tasks with a fatal penalty so that the MC cannot change the canon ... I'm sorry that I wasted time on this fanfic.
A normal man, through some bullshit luck, got chosen to reincarnate in another world after getting killed by the legendary Truck-kun. Distraught at the fact that he died without losing his V-Card, he becomes impatient and wanted to get the reincarnation process over quickly. Because of this, he ended up annoying the ROB overseeing his reincarnation, and to spite him, the ROB rigged his quest system. Because of this he ended up being forced to keep the timelines of the worlds he travels to intact and as close to canon as possible. If not, the world collapses. The problem? The bad guys all have power ups while the good guys get nothing. Follow our resident MC as he tried to keep the timelines intact while doing his best to become relevant and interact with the characters... and maybe get some girls on the way. Maybe.
just follow canon, mc have one year more than classe A but he go in this classe like "assistance" just for follow canon more and more, is not rly good for me but is me.
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