He used to be a Reserve Genin

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NoodleBrain

Story is about a person reincarnated in World of Naruto about 4 years prior to Naruto's birth. Story aims to be engaging by putting an odinary person with extraodinary talents trying to hold to his morals in ruthless elemental nations. A detailed view into chakra system and village dynamics. Overall aims to be a engaging story.

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sdrwwe

I like the design of the character so far, that it is from the kurama clan is another point that is also hiding its skills and strength I just hope it is not hot-minded

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Bezelel666

I like it. . yyyy you yyy you you you yy you u u u u u uu u u u u uu u u u uu u u u u u u u h. J.. j. ....... K kk k k k k kk k k uhuhiiij

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OrdinaryWriter131

Found something Amazing that was not rated yet nice.

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VINCI88

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lstreader

Absolutely amazing. The OC is fantastic and has a in depth background that is revealed as the story goes on. The story itself is so complicated with my hidden factors that make it so catchy and makes you want to read more. Honestly one of my favorite Naruto fanfics I’ve read so far.

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RandomSwordsThief

An addictive story. No systems or stupid stores where you buy some Kekkei Genkai's and come up with a bs story that everyone believes for some reason. Smart buildups and every comment hint at something. First fanfiction read that shows the importance of Doton. It may not be as effective as wind style or as stunning as fire style, but it is the best element for surprise attacks and escaping combat (A survival element). It is dominantly used by Orochimaru whenever he gets into a sticky situation. Mud clones are the sturdiest clones, by the way. 5/5, but the story hasn't had consistent updates recently.

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Fetherw

Absolutely amazing. The OC is fantastic and has a in depth background that is revealed as the story goes on.

This is amazing!!! I haven't read something this good in a long time... I really like this story... Stories so good are hard to find... Excuse my english

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Mirio_kun

Love it. But it would be great if you update more frequently. Also I think it will much better if he gets a place which he can call his home and wouldn't have to worry that his own people will kill him. I just hope now that you are making him op don't need him. And I really want to see him be stronger than both Naruto and Sasuke in their SSP Mode. 👌👍✌️

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RedGunner

Well written fanfic and the author has put a lot of effort into research and getting his facts right while introducing some new things. Border skirmishes arc is the only reason I am not giving it five stars. That arc was bland and boring, the reason we read fanfic is to see new characters mix with the already existed characters in the original but this particular arc has all the things that I did not like and felt boring. I hope the author doesn't get lost in introducing new scenarios and characters while turning it into a new book instead of fanfic. I like exploiting a new plot but it should have a good mix of the original storyline.

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Ihateusername

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Egor_Memnonov

Reasonably well written fic. Interesting plot about plotting plotters like Danzo or Hokage who are reasonably "evil" as in powerhungry politicians that consider people to be tools =). Antagonists are well written and MC is not MarySue despite high proficiency in jutsu ergo interesting read.

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Tartarus

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Omipotent_reader

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Sudeep_Kiki

I bet you this is better than 80% of the naruto fan fics you read if you don’t believe me than read at least 5 chapters and tell me you don’t want to reas more

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iraniakasibu

Don't drop it, compared to other brainless brawn and fight fan fiction this fiction is best. It will be good if you maintain a weekly update atleast 😂😂

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AbsoluteTruth

I can honestly say that th8s took me by surprise. I love how you explain and reason through the Chakra use and it all makes sense within context, which is honestly top tier in comparison to regular Naruto fiction. A distinct lack of handwaving and zero explanation in this story, for both Chakra snd storyline is honestly some of my favorite things about this fan fiction. The realism in the life of being a Ninja without it going overboard where it becomes "Ninja's are Super Evil because ReAsOnS". Truly a top tier Story, realistic depictions of characters and worldbuilding with in universe reasoning behind odd quirks of an anime bound into realism. I Loved every second of this, I hope it gets more chapters. (Ch43 as of writing this)