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Truly a unique novel. I was so wrapped up in the story that I couldn't stop! Honestly inspiring and so different from all the other books I've read in nearly 30 years. Makes me want to write again. Thank you for sharing your imagination with the world.
The story is undoubtedly one of the most attentive one. It could be see how much attention the author gave to complete it. It has very awesome character design AND smooth plot fluidity. BUT the obvious logic holes present is the reason for this low review. For example: "Mutants don't eat each other and plants are also mostly mutants", then how did they survive?? Mutants can procreate faster than they die out of starvation!!! Thats stupid! How can they procreate if they don't even have the energy to survive? Give me my law of conservation of mass and energy back! Another example: "Those who die in future also die(being vegetative is almost equal to death) after loading" ALSO "It cost 5% XFE to load AND energy can be recovered in the past". Doesn't that mean that you can just kill till out of ammo -> load to point where you can recover almost all energy you spend in battle -> kill the remaining ones and rinse and repeat! Weak? you are a one man army with a god level stealth cheat bro!!
this has to be one of my favorite novels, you gotta be one of my favorite creators in this platform if not my complete favorite. im currently on like chapter 35 and Its amazing, didnt dissapoint, but a bit more explanation of outside the sanctuary would be nice.
If you love futuristic academy and superpowers, you might want to give this book a try. It has a lot of action to its battles and plot development is stellar. The author does a great job of building up the background of the main character and giving him an attitude based on it. It took me a few chapters to get into it, but it was totally worth it.
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Until now that I read (chapter 162-161), it bothers me that Ruby is sleeping with her sister, apart from if you are going to do a chapter like that, do the trio and lengthen it like that it is uncomfortable to read.
MC's name is Zax. He starts off cold, and only gets colder. The writing is well above average and thankfully the MC isn't dense. He's an adult. I love where it is going. The betrayal felt natural, evoked some emotion and stuff. I think the mood change from cynical, to sweet, to even more cynical drove away a variety of readers, but not me. Later, it gave weight to the secondary character of Tairo. I hate him soooooo much more. Thanks, author. Oh yeah... Harem. I'll just say... the details are 👌 Criticisms: The character introductions are a little too thorough. The initial testing scene where all the characters were introduced by fighting the instructor felt boring and cluttered. I simply wasn't invested in them yet. It would have been better to introduce them slower, with the same amount of low detail the apathetic MC's POV would have been, and keep many of their details in the writer notes, describing them when they became relevant to MC. Second, the limited use of the "save point" ability irritates me the most. Entire books can revolve around this concept, yet the MC often "forgets" about it, uses it for meaningless things like pranks and sweets, or escape self-imposed consequences. As a literary device, it lowers stakes but the payoff isn't maximized. (That's the whole point of the ability.) Not using it for everything makes the MC seem undisciplined. Also, the brain chip is voice-activated. What? I'm done.
I first started reading this because I was bored and now I don't even think about putting my power stones anywhere else. The character development is great, the powers are creative and the grammar is almost perfect. I honestly don't know what I would change. Keep it up!!
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pretty good tbh,love the book, you should read it for sure. very nice progression, knows how to balance action so its not only action all the time.
Dando uma moral pro autor pra aumentar a quantidade de pessoas pra aumentar a popularidade desse novel porque com certeza merece esta la no alto do rank
I really wanted to have money to give some support you i really liked both of yours novel, more on the other one, i can only give 5 stars and power stone hope it helps
I like this story, but not as much i liked your other work though.I mean i'm not as invested as i was in the characters like in the other one.What this really need is a good antagonist moment, except that betrayal at the begginning there was no other good moments, even her doesn't do much after that, and the others are just meh they don't do anything special.Maybe is just that we don't have that much chapters so it might be a really early to review and i still have high expectation for thi.So keep going author
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The writing quality is a rich blend of goodness. Mmmmmmnnnn combined with the excellent plot and pacing, this is one of the best books and I’ve read a lot (650+ on this website alone). The best thing about this novel is how real it feels despite having a fantasy element. No one is without flaws/perfect, they all have a unique personality and the main character character isn’t some overpowered big shot who one shots everything without breaking a sweat. Really the only I’d like to see more is frequent updates (which the author has been doing recently) other than that, it’s an amazing story. I’m completely invested.
I dont know what to say, its easily among my top 3 and it doesnt have the one thing i hate the most.. dumb protagonists. 10/10 would meme again
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
I'm only 67 chapters in but so far its a really good read. One thing I like about is that the protagonist isn't flat out broken. there are some stories that are good with an op protagonist but not most. This Mc is just strong, not Op, not undefeatable just strong. He uses his ability and experiences through training and real life fighting to defeat his enemy's. He even knows when an enemy is too powerful and needs to back out. I can ramble for a long time on how much I like this story but I'm to lazy to type that much. Anyways keep up the good work author 👍
Dude, put more updates on this story. I cant even wait. Please, keep updating that story than your second story. These story was so thrilling
Very good story, and I absolutely like it so far. Could be more stable when it comes to updating, but not bad all things considered. The one thing I really don't like though, is the fact that premium costs 1 coin for 2 chapters and 49 coins for 3 chapters. 48 coins for only 1 extra chapter is, in my opinion, a rip-off. Had it been a couple chapters extra for that amount, I'd be happy to support the author & pay for the premium, but not when it's the prices and chapters it is now.
I really like this book. The MC isnt weird or creepy or too OP, and the story is really enjoyable. I think its seriously underrated. This needs more attention from people, its very good.
This story is good but such a shame it doesn't got the attention it should. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I started reading this because I like the author's other works, so I already had high expectations of it. Once I started reading it I started to love it. The main character is cold and calculative, but unlike slot of other LN on this app the author still shows that he is a human with emotions. I like the characters and their many different interactions. The grammar for this is also far better than a lot of stuff on here. I can't wait to read some more chapters when they come out! Oh, even though I mentioned grammar, I'm not the best at it myself so I shouldn't really complain. Anyway I think you are doing a great job on this.
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Really like this story, love the protagonist and the power system is pretty cool too. Updates are a bit slow, but really looking forward to the next chapters
Read it Read it now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am very much enjoying the novel and I liked the humour of the setting. The writing flows and it will be interesting to see how the characters develop as the story progresses. Keep up the good work!
Having just completed this novel, I can sincerely say I enjoyed the journey this novel took me on. That said, I want to thank the author and encourage them to continue writing, you have excellent talent. Now for those who are thinking of reading this book let me sum up my experience… simply marvellous! I gave it 5 stars in every category. Very few novels here on Webnovel don’t use plot crunches to support themselves, such as transmigration, and reincarnation, as examples. This novel is about a dystopian future where humanity exists at the cliffs edge, holding on by its finger tips. Zac, a boy almost nobody wants and is willing to discard with the trash must find the will to survive… no, the will to rise up and be some one of real worth. That’s my takeaway and I feel better after enjoying the amazing battle and steamy romance chapters. Could have done without the authors comments at the end of each chapter… easily ignored, but provides the reader with contact information if you want to know more. Thank you 🙏
Truly a unique novel. I was so wrapped up in the story that I couldn't stop! Honestly inspiring and so different from all the other books I've read in nearly 30 years. Makes me want to write again. Thank you for sharing your imagination with the world.
The story is undoubtedly one of the most attentive one. It could be see how much attention the author gave to complete it. It has very awesome character design AND smooth plot fluidity. BUT the obvious logic holes present is the reason for this low review. For example: "Mutants don't eat each other and plants are also mostly mutants", then how did they survive?? Mutants can procreate faster than they die out of starvation!!! Thats stupid! How can they procreate if they don't even have the energy to survive? Give me my law of conservation of mass and energy back! Another example: "Those who die in future also die(being vegetative is almost equal to death) after loading" ALSO "It cost 5% XFE to load AND energy can be recovered in the past". Doesn't that mean that you can just kill till out of ammo -> load to point where you can recover almost all energy you spend in battle -> kill the remaining ones and rinse and repeat! Weak? you are a one man army with a god level stealth cheat bro!!
this has to be one of my favorite novels, you gotta be one of my favorite creators in this platform if not my complete favorite. im currently on like chapter 35 and Its amazing, didnt dissapoint, but a bit more explanation of outside the sanctuary would be nice.
If you love futuristic academy and superpowers, you might want to give this book a try. It has a lot of action to its battles and plot development is stellar. The author does a great job of building up the background of the main character and giving him an attitude based on it. It took me a few chapters to get into it, but it was totally worth it.
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Until now that I read (chapter 162-161), it bothers me that Ruby is sleeping with her sister, apart from if you are going to do a chapter like that, do the trio and lengthen it like that it is uncomfortable to read.
MC's name is Zax. He starts off cold, and only gets colder. The writing is well above average and thankfully the MC isn't dense. He's an adult. I love where it is going. The betrayal felt natural, evoked some emotion and stuff. I think the mood change from cynical, to sweet, to even more cynical drove away a variety of readers, but not me. Later, it gave weight to the secondary character of Tairo. I hate him soooooo much more. Thanks, author. Oh yeah... Harem. I'll just say... the details are 👌 Criticisms: The character introductions are a little too thorough. The initial testing scene where all the characters were introduced by fighting the instructor felt boring and cluttered. I simply wasn't invested in them yet. It would have been better to introduce them slower, with the same amount of low detail the apathetic MC's POV would have been, and keep many of their details in the writer notes, describing them when they became relevant to MC. Second, the limited use of the "save point" ability irritates me the most. Entire books can revolve around this concept, yet the MC often "forgets" about it, uses it for meaningless things like pranks and sweets, or escape self-imposed consequences. As a literary device, it lowers stakes but the payoff isn't maximized. (That's the whole point of the ability.) Not using it for everything makes the MC seem undisciplined. Also, the brain chip is voice-activated. What? I'm done.
I first started reading this because I was bored and now I don't even think about putting my power stones anywhere else. The character development is great, the powers are creative and the grammar is almost perfect. I honestly don't know what I would change. Keep it up!!
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pretty good tbh,love the book, you should read it for sure. very nice progression, knows how to balance action so its not only action all the time.
Dando uma moral pro autor pra aumentar a quantidade de pessoas pra aumentar a popularidade desse novel porque com certeza merece esta la no alto do rank
I really wanted to have money to give some support you i really liked both of yours novel, more on the other one, i can only give 5 stars and power stone hope it helps
I like this story, but not as much i liked your other work though.I mean i'm not as invested as i was in the characters like in the other one.What this really need is a good antagonist moment, except that betrayal at the begginning there was no other good moments, even her doesn't do much after that, and the others are just meh they don't do anything special.Maybe is just that we don't have that much chapters so it might be a really early to review and i still have high expectation for thi.So keep going author
Tiết lộ Spoiler The writing quality is a rich blend of goodness. Mmmmmmnnnn combined with the excellent plot and pacing, this is one of the best books and I’ve read a lot (650+ on this website alone). The best thing about this novel is how real it feels despite having a fantasy element. No one is without flaws/perfect, they all have a unique personality and the main character character isn’t some overpowered big shot who one shots everything without breaking a sweat. Really the only I’d like to see more is frequent updates (which the author has been doing recently) other than that, it’s an amazing story. I’m completely invested.
I dont know what to say, its easily among my top 3 and it doesnt have the one thing i hate the most.. dumb protagonists. 10/10 would meme again
I think the story is amazing and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
I'm only 67 chapters in but so far its a really good read. One thing I like about is that the protagonist isn't flat out broken. there are some stories that are good with an op protagonist but not most. This Mc is just strong, not Op, not undefeatable just strong. He uses his ability and experiences through training and real life fighting to defeat his enemy's. He even knows when an enemy is too powerful and needs to back out. I can ramble for a long time on how much I like this story but I'm to lazy to type that much. Anyways keep up the good work author 👍
Dude, put more updates on this story. I cant even wait. Please, keep updating that story than your second story. These story was so thrilling
Very good story, and I absolutely like it so far. Could be more stable when it comes to updating, but not bad all things considered. The one thing I really don't like though, is the fact that premium costs 1 coin for 2 chapters and 49 coins for 3 chapters. 48 coins for only 1 extra chapter is, in my opinion, a rip-off. Had it been a couple chapters extra for that amount, I'd be happy to support the author & pay for the premium, but not when it's the prices and chapters it is now.
I really like this book. The MC isnt weird or creepy or too OP, and the story is really enjoyable. I think its seriously underrated. This needs more attention from people, its very good.
This story is good but such a shame it doesn't got the attention it should. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I started reading this because I like the author's other works, so I already had high expectations of it. Once I started reading it I started to love it. The main character is cold and calculative, but unlike slot of other LN on this app the author still shows that he is a human with emotions. I like the characters and their many different interactions. The grammar for this is also far better than a lot of stuff on here. I can't wait to read some more chapters when they come out! Oh, even though I mentioned grammar, I'm not the best at it myself so I shouldn't really complain. Anyway I think you are doing a great job on this.
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Really like this story, love the protagonist and the power system is pretty cool too. Updates are a bit slow, but really looking forward to the next chapters
Read it Read it now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am very much enjoying the novel and I liked the humour of the setting. The writing flows and it will be interesting to see how the characters develop as the story progresses. Keep up the good work!
Having just completed this novel, I can sincerely say I enjoyed the journey this novel took me on. That said, I want to thank the author and encourage them to continue writing, you have excellent talent. Now for those who are thinking of reading this book let me sum up my experience… simply marvellous! I gave it 5 stars in every category. Very few novels here on Webnovel don’t use plot crunches to support themselves, such as transmigration, and reincarnation, as examples. This novel is about a dystopian future where humanity exists at the cliffs edge, holding on by its finger tips. Zac, a boy almost nobody wants and is willing to discard with the trash must find the will to survive… no, the will to rise up and be some one of real worth. That’s my takeaway and I feel better after enjoying the amazing battle and steamy romance chapters. Could have done without the authors comments at the end of each chapter… easily ignored, but provides the reader with contact information if you want to know more. Thank you 🙏