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Nice first year and good stopping point regardless if you don't ever pick it up again. As far as FF go, most particularly self-inserts, moreover a self insert with a probable future harem I think you did a great job. 9/10 for me!
Author what happened to you man? This is literally top 5 harry potter fanfics on this whole site, I was absolutely loving it till I realized the last update was an year ago. Any plans to pick this one back up?
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hey author a question here when will you add the Percy Jackson and the gods aspect in story because it is getting boring now. and is Draco a demigod or a legacy.
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Big fan of this fanfic, I like what you did with the characters it’s unique and the way you integrated parts of other HP fanfics is really good
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Wow! What a great start. I couldn’t stop myself From reading as the chapters went on. Thanks so much for spending Your time on writing this. If tour considering this book, please give this a read, great story so far. Youll love it if you’re a fan of HP and it doesnt get boring bc of some of the authors changes to the storyline.
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Really good as well as the great chapter length but the release time for chapters aren’t really good but quality over quanitity is a must overall a decent book
To be completely honest the only bad thing I can find in this fan fic is the lack of chapters! Really hope you continue the work !
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La idea me parece muy interesante, ya te di mis piedras de poder y apoyo, de verdad espero que sigas subiendo capítulos, me interesa mucho esta historia.
I've been exploring the third dimension for 17 eons and have seen the beginnings of stars and the end of time(twice). I've counted every single grain of sand in the Serengeti while Jupiter experience it's third metaphysical crisis and this is single handidly some of the best shit i've ever read.
Man, I can't hate any of your work even though many of them stop updated. But I love your work and hope this can work well as you did with Avatar. As your fan, all I can do is make sending Power Stone.
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Like. https://youtu.be/IO0YCTYnR7c [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
honestly i would not have more than 3 girls bc more than that and you are likely to neglect some of them. three are managabel timewise. just look at most of these harem novels 99% of them mess up because they cant handle the amount of women. spending time with them, dating, R-18 moments, getting to know them. thats a lot to do, just to get one women, now you want what 8? 10?. dont forget that even after you get them, you still have to have plenty of slice of life moment apart from R-18 scenes(Muggle introduction,shopping,movies,vacation,entertainment...) most author especially chinese novel authors dont understand that you cant just write a story with action, action, action and then some more action. you need to balance the story between high tension scenes and low tension scenes out. a good way to mellow down a moment is by writing a couple chapter of you just speding time woth your girls, friends and family.
Sorry! Just a shameless writer reviewing his own story. 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅 That said, I wish to thank everyone that had read it. 😉👍 For those who didn’t liked it... sorry. I really hope you find what you are looking for. Suggestions and questions are always welcomed. Bye!
Dropped like a POS. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Nice first year and good stopping point regardless if you don't ever pick it up again. As far as FF go, most particularly self-inserts, moreover a self insert with a probable future harem I think you did a great job. 9/10 for me!
Author what happened to you man? This is literally top 5 harry potter fanfics on this whole site, I was absolutely loving it till I realized the last update was an year ago. Any plans to pick this one back up?
Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍!
Tiết lộ Spoiler hey author a question here when will you add the Percy Jackson and the gods aspect in story because it is getting boring now. and is Draco a demigod or a legacy.
Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍!
Tiết lộ Spoiler Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍!
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Tiết lộ Spoiler Big fan of this fanfic, I like what you did with the characters it’s unique and the way you integrated parts of other HP fanfics is really good
Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍!
Tiết lộ Spoiler Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍!
Tiết lộ Spoiler Wow! What a great start. I couldn’t stop myself From reading as the chapters went on. Thanks so much for spending Your time on writing this. If tour considering this book, please give this a read, great story so far. Youll love it if you’re a fan of HP and it doesnt get boring bc of some of the authors changes to the storyline.
one of the best authors out here in the world of fandom more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
good chapters. ********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
Esta buena tu historia crack, además bastante largo cada capítulo Esta buena tu historia crack, además bastante largo cada capítulo Esta buena tu historia crack, además bastante largo cada capítulo Esta buena tu historia crack, además bastante largo cada capítulo
Really good as well as the great chapter length but the release time for chapters aren’t really good but quality over quanitity is a must overall a decent book
To be completely honest the only bad thing I can find in this fan fic is the lack of chapters! Really hope you continue the work !
3 words... HIGH-QUALITY WRITING [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
thanks author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] please don't drop[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
La idea me parece muy interesante, ya te di mis piedras de poder y apoyo, de verdad espero que sigas subiendo capítulos, me interesa mucho esta historia.
I've been exploring the third dimension for 17 eons and have seen the beginnings of stars and the end of time(twice). I've counted every single grain of sand in the Serengeti while Jupiter experience it's third metaphysical crisis and this is single handidly some of the best shit i've ever read.
Man, I can't hate any of your work even though many of them stop updated. But I love your work and hope this can work well as you did with Avatar. As your fan, all I can do is make sending Power Stone.
https://youtu.be/tOH-zv1xtmI [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp][img=recommend][img=fp][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Like. https://youtu.be/IO0YCTYnR7c [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
honestly i would not have more than 3 girls bc more than that and you are likely to neglect some of them. three are managabel timewise. just look at most of these harem novels 99% of them mess up because they cant handle the amount of women. spending time with them, dating, R-18 moments, getting to know them. thats a lot to do, just to get one women, now you want what 8? 10?. dont forget that even after you get them, you still have to have plenty of slice of life moment apart from R-18 scenes(Muggle introduction,shopping,movies,vacation,entertainment...) most author especially chinese novel authors dont understand that you cant just write a story with action, action, action and then some more action. you need to balance the story between high tension scenes and low tension scenes out. a good way to mellow down a moment is by writing a couple chapter of you just speding time woth your girls, friends and family.
Sorry! Just a shameless writer reviewing his own story. 😅😅😅😅😅😅😅😅 That said, I wish to thank everyone that had read it. 😉👍 For those who didn’t liked it... sorry. I really hope you find what you are looking for. Suggestions and questions are always welcomed. Bye!
Dropped like a POS. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]