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I am reading this book for quite sometime now. . I really enjoy the book. I hope this book this book goes on and on. The story is getting improved with every chapter. ENJOY
nice book please have stable updates. I feel there.. the book needs more characters to do good. hope you read it. ..........................
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nice story but hard to follow the flow, jumps from character to character, no explenation on how the story went from point A to point B and suddenly going to point F with no explenation. hoped for better flow After going Premium but It remain the same. I regret spending coins for this quality
Надежда MC могла быть отцом Эрзы и дать им лучший конец ... У нее была такая печальная жизнь, что ей пришлось пожертвовать своей человечностью, и она даже не может оставаться с Эрзой, опасаясь ее злобной мысли завладеть ею ... Хотя, честно говоря, я предпочитаю тело дракона .. Пока я могу контролировать трансформацию, это определенно хорошее преимущество иметь ... чувака с чертовым телом дракона .
I have been bamboozled! This is a harem but without a harem tag! Be warned my fellow daoist who are not controlled by their big brother, this is a sham! P.S Grammar is sickening and plot is eh
it's a ok story cause the internet is filled with same kinda stories which are plotted batter so yeah a three star story but very slow progressing
the story is good, but the sspellings and grammar made it uninteresting. a story that not suitable for me and for others who hate wrong grammars and spellings, yeh bye
I Absolutely love it it is fantastic please please please do not drop this novel thank you
it's good but it still needs a lot of work. space space space space space space space space space space space space space space space space space.
hareem or no? please say noo but if it is i hope it is NOT one of those storys where the mc is going to fall in love with every pretty girl or he will forgive girls just because they are pretty god please no last Q is he cold and willing to do whatever it takes to get stronger or he's the i will sacrifice my life for you type?
Let me be honest the Grammer is unbearable the simplest of mistakes are made and ruins the flow of the novel the author seems to not care much to remember what he just wrote down then says or does something the same a few paragraphs later the MC is really dumb for a dude that was the best scientist author could be bothered to re read his work let alone remeber if he wrote down “looks at hands and they seem bigger” then MC goes and looks in water to see hes red like what
Tried to read it the grammaR stopped me from enjoying the story it was SiMple stuff that would be easily Fixed by rereading the work, if you got annoyed by the constant capitals theN good luck
seems cool but the grammar could definitely use some work and you dropped off there for a little while 🤑😉😚😙😝🥲😝😋🙃🏤🛖🏣🪨🏪🍆🥥🍆🍏🧄🍐🥑🧅🫓🌽🫓🌽🫓🏘🏤🏦🏥🌎⚽️🥎
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the spelling and overall grammar is horrifying but I like the story development, this story has a lot of potential however it is the simple spelling that is ruining it
Hmm, la novela es buena, pero cuando un sistema de mierda te amenaza con matarte si no cumples su misiones, non importa si es beneficioso o no para el mc, se siente muy mal
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Tiết lộ Spoiler
OK book give meeting chapter, chapter and chapter. . overall a goood booooooooooooooooook give more chapter.... ......... ................
I think the writer needs to work more on this book. as specially the world background. overall it's a good book. ... .. .. .. .... ... . that's all
Good book write more, more chapters please.. please.. work more on giving names to the characters............................................
The author is shamelessly promoting his work.... I hope you guys like. comment and share. just a small comment from your side can make my day.. Happy Reading...
good book.... keep writing..... add some side characters.... ...............................................................................
over all its a good book hope the MC is gets more fighting skills. the starting was good. ... ... .........................................
I hope the mc gets stronger and stronger. never lose. . hahah I really enjoy the book. I hope this book this book goes on and on. The story is getting improved with every chapter. ENJOY
hello there, I am the author of this novel. I hope you like my work. Feel free to criticize.. you may not like my writing style but surely you will like the plot Happy reading
I am reading this book for quite sometime now. . I really enjoy the book. I hope this book this book goes on and on. The story is getting improved with every chapter. ENJOY
nice book please have stable updates. I feel there.. the book needs more characters to do good. hope you read it. ..........................
God Emperonrrrrtuuopmhgeesaaqsc,jhgrezsfhklllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
nice story but hard to follow the flow, jumps from character to character, no explenation on how the story went from point A to point B and suddenly going to point F with no explenation. hoped for better flow After going Premium but It remain the same. I regret spending coins for this quality
Надежда MC могла быть отцом Эрзы и дать им лучший конец ... У нее была такая печальная жизнь, что ей пришлось пожертвовать своей человечностью, и она даже не может оставаться с Эрзой, опасаясь ее злобной мысли завладеть ею ... Хотя, честно говоря, я предпочитаю тело дракона .. Пока я могу контролировать трансформацию, это определенно хорошее преимущество иметь ... чувака с чертовым телом дракона .
I have been bamboozled! This is a harem but without a harem tag! Be warned my fellow daoist who are not controlled by their big brother, this is a sham! P.S Grammar is sickening and plot is eh
it's a ok story cause the internet is filled with same kinda stories which are plotted batter so yeah a three star story but very slow progressing
the story is good, but the sspellings and grammar made it uninteresting. a story that not suitable for me and for others who hate wrong grammars and spellings, yeh bye
I Absolutely love it it is fantastic please please please do not drop this novel thank you
it's good but it still needs a lot of work. space space space space space space space space space space space space space space space space space.
hareem or no? please say noo but if it is i hope it is NOT one of those storys where the mc is going to fall in love with every pretty girl or he will forgive girls just because they are pretty god please no last Q is he cold and willing to do whatever it takes to get stronger or he's the i will sacrifice my life for you type?
Let me be honest the Grammer is unbearable the simplest of mistakes are made and ruins the flow of the novel the author seems to not care much to remember what he just wrote down then says or does something the same a few paragraphs later the MC is really dumb for a dude that was the best scientist author could be bothered to re read his work let alone remeber if he wrote down “looks at hands and they seem bigger” then MC goes and looks in water to see hes red like what
Tried to read it the grammaR stopped me from enjoying the story it was SiMple stuff that would be easily Fixed by rereading the work, if you got annoyed by the constant capitals theN good luck
seems cool but the grammar could definitely use some work and you dropped off there for a little while 🤑😉😚😙😝🥲😝😋🙃🏤🛖🏣🪨🏪🍆🥥🍆🍏🧄🍐🥑🧅🫓🌽🫓🌽🫓🏘🏤🏦🏥🌎⚽️🥎
Exp 😍 😍 😍 ❤️❤️❤️💞💞❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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the spelling and overall grammar is horrifying but I like the story development, this story has a lot of potential however it is the simple spelling that is ruining it
Hmm, la novela es buena, pero cuando un sistema de mierda te amenaza con matarte si no cumples su misiones, non importa si es beneficioso o no para el mc, se siente muy mal
biviuycgcuvifufcivicuycivuyciuviuvuyciubijvcgciviycyrxzfgcjhci67***oltdkzjutfrdytfuyzjkrxydtufyctxjxkduylfifytxzrxyxkhgxjgfjhkxkfzjgvhvxigdziklxkjrzujfx
Tiết lộ Spoiler OK book give meeting chapter, chapter and chapter. . overall a goood booooooooooooooooook give more chapter.... ......... ................
I think the writer needs to work more on this book. as specially the world background. overall it's a good book. ... .. .. .. .... ... . that's all
Good book write more, more chapters please.. please.. work more on giving names to the characters............................................
The author is shamelessly promoting his work.... I hope you guys like. comment and share. just a small comment from your side can make my day.. Happy Reading...
good book.... keep writing..... add some side characters.... ...............................................................................
over all its a good book hope the MC is gets more fighting skills. the starting was good. ... ... .........................................
I hope the mc gets stronger and stronger. never lose. . hahah I really enjoy the book. I hope this book this book goes on and on. The story is getting improved with every chapter. ENJOY
hello there, I am the author of this novel. I hope you like my work. Feel free to criticize.. you may not like my writing style but surely you will like the plot Happy reading