Saiyan in Marvel (Completed)

LV 5

GramDemolition

I don't know much about other readers,but the first 2 chapters in itself is disappointing with the MC being absolutely stupid and going to visit the meeting between Iron Man and Nick Fury just because he is a fanboy right after transmigration.Then rather than disappearing into some corner of the world for training he keeps going to school as though he has not entered into the sights of SHIELD and Ironman.I am just putting it here because I don't want others like me who hate thoughtless and reckless MC to be misled by ratings.

LV 10

Zhanye

Looks like the story has been written by a kid .................................................................................................................

LV 4

Kira_Chiya

I hate immature and stupid MCs .... MC= fanboy + stupid + simp + parasite (because he leeching) ............................... ..............

LV 4

Mustifa_89

I reaaaally love this ff there ara a lot of marvel fanfic but this one is one of best for me please keep going and if you can faster my first ff choice right now

LV 3

Fantasy_Dream

The mc is just an annoying cunt in the first 9 chapter. If you don't want to be a hero be a villain but noooo, he is literally the embodiment of irritating and irresponsibility, he becomes a hero but don't care about the lost of lives because they are not his loved one, **** off you better be a villain and kill civilians.

LV 1

mustafa92

good fanfic

LV 15

Gh0st00

very very very good story.. you'll love the banter and the mc trust me.. chapters are long.. only 3 chapters so far but im hooked already...

LV 14

Passing_Through

Saiyan is not a simp

LV 12

KreiosDeimos

The story was alright for the first few chapters but got really shit over time first of all the MC is a dumbass one of the first things he does after transmigrating is going to see Tony Stark and Nick Fury meeting because he's a fanboy and guess what he gets caught. Secondly, even though he is a Saiyan he is super nerfed I mean he was bleeding from falling rocks even though he achieved SSJ4 also the reason for his transformation to SSJ was really forced. The story has more plot holes than my country has potholes in the roads (trust me its a lot), the MC also has no impact to the events in Marvel seriously the events are all the same as they are in the movies the MC is basically just watching the movies play out. So overall its pretty shit. Writing Quality: 3/5 Stability of updates: 4/5 Story Development: 1/5 Character Design: 1/5 World Background: 1/5

LV 15

Ricko_wijaya

-great interaction and conversation between the characters -the story is actually interesting -power level is balanced -NOT FEEL FORCED AT ALL -But the story development is real fast for me. 9 chapters and its already around ultron -LONG CHAPTERS FOR THE WIN

LV 14

Gabbu_Xul

One of the most basic tests I measure a story by is the "Indiana Jones" test. Sadly, this story fails that test as the MC has no impact on the outcome of the story. From the progression to the end of the story, it's almost exactly the same as the movies. The differences are trivial, where a character may live that otherwise wouldn't have, but no greater impact than that. This story is easily summed up as watching the MCU movies with one extra hero. That's it, there really nothing more to see. Which is sad as this story had potential, the writing was good, and the updates consistent.

LV 4

qwertypous_046

this story feels like have been written by a kid. The MC is a bloody reckless Simp idiot and the world seems to agree with the kid with no bad consequences on every action the idiot do.

LV 5

Pavan1234

Good. Just want to support a good fast paced fanfiction. Hope author completes this fanfic. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

LV 11

BrownOptometrist

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍

LV 13

SliverFang

I enjoy the premise and willing to give a lot of leeway to stories that follow along those lines, so I honestly say that this was very disappointing. The MC is just an overpowered fanboy that's there along for the ride. His actions don't change the original plot at all, even when they should. Even before he forgets the storyline, he does nothing and is vindicated by the Ancient One that any change he does will only lead to a worse future. He saves Quicksilver, who seems to not appear afterwards, because that would imply the MC is relevant. He easily beats Cp Marvel, who equals and even overpowers Thanos yet he couldn't stop Thanos directly? And the entire romance with Black Widow makes no sense. There's no reason for her to desire him, especially when she knows he already has someone. She's not some hormonal teenager...

LV 5

MoonSon

Particularly, the ending is horrible ... But aside from that and the protagonist that the author seems to have struggled to spoil, if you can ignore that, the story is not so bad.

LV 3

Achraf2000

This story was amazing but after chapter 11 every thing is a bull sh*t I don't know what happened is the writer trying his best to destroy the story or what

LV 4

shifuufufuuud

Hey continue your fanfic price of freedom before this plss ... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .