Love or Obsession?

LV 13

Shiny_Star5683

Sorry, I just saw that I didn't give the review. From the synopsis onwards, I was full of curiousity. And still now I m curious about how the main characters life change with the coming of my most favorite character of the book (I won't tell the name). You might feel that it's a normal love story but that's bcuz the author has very well played with the words to confuse the reader but if you try to read it. I m sure you will get so engrossed in the storyline and would want more and more. I can't help myself I want to read more and more. I know the author is new but the story is worth it. [img=recommend]

LV 4

AuHNG

Disclaimer: I only write negative reviews, because I think it's not helpful to write what went well. The stars will reflect my opinion on the novel. Advice; flesh out the companies a bit more. It's just generic company here, and somehow all the people in the story are successful. Download gram marly to catch minor grammar or punctuation errors. You have a lot of those. I think the romance is too fast paced. Remember that while we feel initial butterflies, what makes us love someone are little things like how they are focused on something, their unique quirks and their likes. For now, all I get from the romance is: Alexander finds Eve hot. Eve becomes dumb in the presence of Alexander. Oliver likes Clara. Clara is innocent bird that is getting abused. I think it'll be better if you made the love a lot more meaningful. I won't say that there aren't cute moments that do show love, but as of right now, I think the love could be a lot deeper. For example, there's this novel called When The Butterflies Came, that I loved. The leads fall in love because they have fun times together. Quality time- that and working together and helping each other, are two of the main qualities for a successful relationship. (along with trust and honesty). The villains (I'm assuming) are neither pitifully evil nor good. I can't say I hate or dislike them and that's ok. But a good villain needs to be hated a lot, or sympathized a lot. Morally grey characters are good, but not morally boring characters. That and as of now, I thought the plot would be more intriguing. Will write a better review if you can address these concerns. The beginning had a lot of potential, but the drama of this novel is subpar to some of the telenovelas and dramas I have watched. Develop the drama of this novel a bit more. Had a lot of potential which is why I read to chapter 30. But this novel needs work.

LV 15

BedheadBookworm

Enjoyed binge reading this story… liked all the characters — even the evil ones — and watching the friend groups develop and strengthen. Good book!

LV 13

Jo_J

Great "catchy" title! I think there is a very thin line between the two ;) Interesting storyline and expressive characters! Well done! All the best with the story!

LV 1

moonmato

The plot left me wanting more and more. The synopsis caught my eyes at first and now it's definitely going to be in my library! The interesting plot and characterization are the strong points in this book. Keep up the good work!

LV 11

Jyojiko

Love? Obsession? between friendships. When do they cross the line in between? Let this author bring you to a beautifully written story that will have you waiting for the next updates!

LV 2

nessiaart

Can I just say your book is literal heaven?! I love how you hooked me in the beginning and I love your writing style. I could really feel the emotion of your characters and all of this in only chapter one. Please continue to update I'm looking forward to more lovely chapters from you.

LV 10

_AiRen_

The novel is an amazing read! With a possessive ML yearning for only FL that's something you find in most other works but no doubt this novel stands out more! An intricately designed world background with interlinking relationships pertaining to romance, humour, obsession and further more love and adoration. The plot construction is free flowing not forced and clearly accentuates with charm found in good quality work! Good job author!

LV 13

Jo_J

Good romance! The storyline is interesting and the characters are expressive! Reading is easy and fun. No grammatical or stylistic mistakes. Well done!

LV 1

cutie0001

I am wowed. The book is just so...... [img=update][img=faceslap][img=coins][img=update][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=fp][img=faceslap][img=update][img=fp][img=exp][img=update][img=recommend][img=update] You guys should definitely read this book. I don't know if it's wrong to do this here, you could check out who?¿ by khenny Esther,. it's not of the same genre but you'll like it.. Kudos to you writer, much love

LV 2

MistressUnderworld

The descriptions and narration are pretty well done. Some minor spelling or grammar errors, but nothing major. I would like to see what the characters can offer. Keep up the good work!

LV 2

divya_dwivedi

Very well written story with real engagement of audience for sure. Please keep up this good writing author. And surely waiting for the story to move ahead with some more twists and plots.

LV 10

Scriptamagina

Hi! It caught my interest on the story you made. I actually save it from my library. I love the way you turn a roller coaster ride of the characters. Hmm. I'm imagining if that really exists in our world. Huhu. I hope it is. Hehe. You bring me to your world of imagination writer. Awesome. 😊

LV 3

Littlepunnie

I love how you write them Author. This is a must read novel. I am a fan of Romance novel thus I look up to more of your novel's updates. I love how you use your words, the designs of the characters are great. Keep writing Author! (♡ω♡ ) ~♪

LV 2

LinYang

This book is very beautifully written, virtually devoid of errors. I very much enjoy the author's style. The plot is moving along nicely, and I enjoy seeing the characters interact with each other. Perfect for those who like romance and drama. Highly recommend.

LV 3

Tanya_Winters

Interesting story, author 😊 I found your sentences well-written and I like your way of describing. You use metaphors beautifully. There are a few grammatical errors and common nouns in uppercase but they can be easily overlooked by the engrossed reader. I'm sure your story will be perfect with just a few tweaking here and there. Your story has good potential. Keep up the good work and hang in there, author! 😊

LV 2

debbieintrigue

Interesting at first sight, nice plot, the story line is totally relatable, you often find friendships being ruined because the friends all want the same girl, nice one

LV 5

LaziGamer

Pretty nice story although the genre is not my cup of tea, I enjoy reading it. I hope you continue having a stable release, I am pretty curious of what's going to happen next.

LV 4

LOVE097

Story is really good... Like though the novel shows heartbreak in the starting chapters it is not over the top like she will die without him or something... Hope you will write her life story and love story 😁😜 too author...