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Viết đánh giáодин из лучших фанфиков, которые я читал. It’s a shame that the author abandoned it due to unfounded hate
To be honest it just reads as a to do list rather than an actual story. Sasuke trains accomplishes one goal after another theres no real plot just Sasuke training gain power and making those around him stronger. That’ really it, a good story requires the reader to be engaged as it stands I genuinely do not care for any of the characters even worse I can almost guess how the fic will go. Sasuke will get Uber strong naruto will most likely become hokage and they will defeat all there enemies.
Tiết lộ SpoilerI was just revisiting my favorite fics and remembered about how mad I was that this one was dropped because of toxic people and tbh, that was actually everything I wanted to say love your fics, almost all of them (didn't read one of them, but read all the others) an wish you best of luck in whatever you're doing nowadays
ВЫКАЛИТЕ МНЕ ГЛАЗА Я ПРОЧИТАЛ ТОЛЬКО ДО 2 ГЛАВ И МЕНЯ ТОШНИТ Я НЕНАВИЖУ-САКУРУ, И НАРУТО, ЧЕМ ОНА ХОРАША ЕТО ВАША САКУРА КОРОЧЕ Я НЕНАВИЖУ ЕЕ +ГГ СЛИШКОМ ДОБРЫЙ Я НЕ ХОЧУ ЧТОБ ОН ДРУЖЫЛ С НАРУТО И ВСТРЕЧАЛСЯ САКУРОЙ
Супер мне очень понравилось!!!жаль что бросил писать,иза дебилов всеких!!!!ааааааааааааааааааааааааааааапппппппппппппппппппппппааааапппппппппппппппппп
very good job on this novel it,s very.... ............................................................... good thank you pls more chapters
Спасибо! За работу!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
story is awesome you should definitely read this book its on of the best books i have ever read the plot and character development is really entertaining
Mc дебил дружить с Наруто когда он конченый человек с промытыми мозгами 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
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awakens mangekyo at the age of 13,sucks naruto of,marries sakura and thinks she had it rough because sasuke didnt feel the same for her even though she still has parents practically no sad story etc so in conclusion this is trash and for people rating this 5 stars why lie
The writing quality is pretty good but there is still some room for improvement. Story development is great . as for Updating stability idk 😅 I read this the day it was dropped. the world background is pretty obvious it's good. P.S:author pls continue this fan fiction as I enjoy reading it just ignore the haters and keep going
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Disappointing... Just another power fulfillment fanfic... MC transmigrates into Sasuke, and in 1 year he goes from Academy level to Sanin level and mastered everything from Mangekyou sharingan, Genjutsu, Fire & lightning Ninjutsu, original jutsus, both Uchiha and Guy's Taijutsu, as well as 5 of the 8 inner gates, Fuinjutsu, a bit of wood style, and even Hashirama's sage mode! Then there's the strange fetish that the author has with Naruto. The MC here is more obsessed with Naruto than Naruto was with Sasuke in canon. It enters ridiculous level where MC directly attacks anyone who insults Naruto. Also an idiotic cliche of many fanfics. Writing down fights/dialogues same as in canon is so freaking pointless and irritating to read (yeah we all read Manga/watched anime, no need to repeat stuffs from there in fanfics). And also the idiotic suggestions to other characters to make them do what they would do eventually anyways. Like telling Naruto to beat Gaara by using the summoning jutsu 🤦. What's even the point in telling when he'll do that anyways. Overall pretty disappointing.
so disgusting. Sakura is in the team and sasuke wants to improve how relations. I thoughts sasuke will be cool and detaches but he is another Naruto . so disgusting.
this fanfic is awesome the héro is kind and clever i Hope the autor will end the story i will give him power stone every day to persuade him to finish the story
This is one of the best Naruto Fanfics that i have read till now. Good story development and background. Please at least complete the war part. I am not able to sleep without it. Plz plz plz plz plz
why just why did you have to bring that everlasting peace bs everyone should know everything peace is not real, just look at what happened when hashirama died a whole bunch of wars started for all that height as well join pain and obito in dream of everything peace, and it was just getting good sakura and naruto and susake have been training together for while with him teaching so why is it that both sakura and naruto still act like their mentally slow
I don't know why but this novel touch my heart ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ I love how their friendship is and I get very emotional ............................
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Me encanta pero por favor no lo caigas es mu buen fanfiction de naruto me encanta que usarás a óbito para resucitar a los que murieron en la guerra i a algunos de el clan Uchiha
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Great book with a very interesting premise, writing quality is also almost perfect other than the occasional typos in earlier chapters. Overall one of the best naruto fanfics on this site. Keep up the great work! Also pls release more soon thanks
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Meskipun plotnya pasaran, saya tetap menikmatinya Bro, sayang sekali fiksi penggemar ini hanya sampai di sini, dan itu tiga tahun yang lalu... Good.
один из лучших фанфиков, которые я читал. It’s a shame that the author abandoned it due to unfounded hate
To be honest it just reads as a to do list rather than an actual story. Sasuke trains accomplishes one goal after another theres no real plot just Sasuke training gain power and making those around him stronger. That’ really it, a good story requires the reader to be engaged as it stands I genuinely do not care for any of the characters even worse I can almost guess how the fic will go. Sasuke will get Uber strong naruto will most likely become hokage and they will defeat all there enemies.
Tiết lộ SpoilerI was just revisiting my favorite fics and remembered about how mad I was that this one was dropped because of toxic people and tbh, that was actually everything I wanted to say love your fics, almost all of them (didn't read one of them, but read all the others) an wish you best of luck in whatever you're doing nowadays
ВЫКАЛИТЕ МНЕ ГЛАЗА Я ПРОЧИТАЛ ТОЛЬКО ДО 2 ГЛАВ И МЕНЯ ТОШНИТ Я НЕНАВИЖУ-САКУРУ, И НАРУТО, ЧЕМ ОНА ХОРАША ЕТО ВАША САКУРА КОРОЧЕ Я НЕНАВИЖУ ЕЕ +ГГ СЛИШКОМ ДОБРЫЙ Я НЕ ХОЧУ ЧТОБ ОН ДРУЖЫЛ С НАРУТО И ВСТРЕЧАЛСЯ САКУРОЙ
Супер мне очень понравилось!!!жаль что бросил писать,иза дебилов всеких!!!!ааааааааааааааааааааааааааааапппппппппппппппппппппппааааапппппппппппппппппп
very good job on this novel it,s very.... ............................................................... good thank you pls more chapters
Спасибо! За работу!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
story is awesome you should definitely read this book its on of the best books i have ever read the plot and character development is really entertaining
Mc дебил дружить с Наруто когда он конченый человек с промытыми мозгами 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮
man you must make this more . nxnxnxnxndjdjdjdjdjdbdjdjdhdifhfifbfifbdjxbakebnedjdbjdjdbdidh chord form bib ivan IV hddidbdvdjdhdvdusksndbdjd
awakens mangekyo at the age of 13,sucks naruto of,marries sakura and thinks she had it rough because sasuke didnt feel the same for her even though she still has parents practically no sad story etc so in conclusion this is trash and for people rating this 5 stars why lie
The writing quality is pretty good but there is still some room for improvement. Story development is great . as for Updating stability idk 😅 I read this the day it was dropped. the world background is pretty obvious it's good. P.S:author pls continue this fan fiction as I enjoy reading it just ignore the haters and keep going
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Disappointing... Just another power fulfillment fanfic... MC transmigrates into Sasuke, and in 1 year he goes from Academy level to Sanin level and mastered everything from Mangekyou sharingan, Genjutsu, Fire & lightning Ninjutsu, original jutsus, both Uchiha and Guy's Taijutsu, as well as 5 of the 8 inner gates, Fuinjutsu, a bit of wood style, and even Hashirama's sage mode! Then there's the strange fetish that the author has with Naruto. The MC here is more obsessed with Naruto than Naruto was with Sasuke in canon. It enters ridiculous level where MC directly attacks anyone who insults Naruto. Also an idiotic cliche of many fanfics. Writing down fights/dialogues same as in canon is so freaking pointless and irritating to read (yeah we all read Manga/watched anime, no need to repeat stuffs from there in fanfics). And also the idiotic suggestions to other characters to make them do what they would do eventually anyways. Like telling Naruto to beat Gaara by using the summoning jutsu 🤦. What's even the point in telling when he'll do that anyways. Overall pretty disappointing.
so disgusting. Sakura is in the team and sasuke wants to improve how relations. I thoughts sasuke will be cool and detaches but he is another Naruto . so disgusting.
this fanfic is awesome the héro is kind and clever i Hope the autor will end the story i will give him power stone every day to persuade him to finish the story
This is one of the best Naruto Fanfics that i have read till now. Good story development and background. Please at least complete the war part. I am not able to sleep without it. Plz plz plz plz plz
why just why did you have to bring that everlasting peace bs everyone should know everything peace is not real, just look at what happened when hashirama died a whole bunch of wars started for all that height as well join pain and obito in dream of everything peace, and it was just getting good sakura and naruto and susake have been training together for while with him teaching so why is it that both sakura and naruto still act like their mentally slow
I don't know why but this novel touch my heart ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ I love how their friendship is and I get very emotional ............................
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Me encanta pero por favor no lo caigas es mu buen fanfiction de naruto me encanta que usarás a óbito para resucitar a los que murieron en la guerra i a algunos de el clan Uchiha
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
Great book with a very interesting premise, writing quality is also almost perfect other than the occasional typos in earlier chapters. Overall one of the best naruto fanfics on this site. Keep up the great work! Also pls release more soon thanks
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Meskipun plotnya pasaran, saya tetap menikmatinya Bro, sayang sekali fiksi penggemar ini hanya sampai di sini, dan itu tiga tahun yang lalu... Good.