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I really like the fact that the mc is very calculative. for a fan-fic it is a great read, the only thing that will make this great is if the updates and the quality would be consistent or better. I'm really hoping for steady release.
Thanks for the good work sensei I 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
The story really s*cks at times. The MC is inconsistent—sometimes he's ruthless, and other times he's way too soft, which ends up ruining the character. It feels like the author is forcing the MC into the plot for no real reason, making it hard to stay invested.
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Naruto: The Shinobi Genius Naruto: El genio shinobi [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Ruim. O que? É sistema! E um mal escrito por cima. E como se não bastasse, a escrita em geral parece mais um diário apressado do que uma situação vivencional.
Seriously, I read this a long time ago and I remember liking it, but bro, what is this? The writing format is horrible, you can't tell who is speaking, character development doesn't even exist
All I can say is: thanks for taking care of Itachi and giving him a bunch of cats. Was basically either facepalming or snickering the entire read time.
I was searching for a fanfic where main character is naruto and i find it in it + no-harem not long and boring arcs mc starts to get strong and become the stronget i had fun while reading it
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Trach and waste of time for these resons: 1- stupied MC and characters 2- the story is going too fast 3- bad fights end in two seconds 4- all the fouce on the MC And the list goes on insted of reading this trach I recommend to read these fan fiction novels: 1- HP magical journey (HARRY POTTER) 9.5/10 MUST READ!! 2- famous police detective in detective world (CONAN) 9/10 3-
I appreciate the author hard work so I will give this a four-star review, however honestly I can only say it was a half baked fanfic... without much thought put into it, after all the MC only reincarnated for a few years and can already invent seals that simply defy logic... Training for only three years and can already sneak to the Hokage office and still information?? Not likely...
If wish-fulfillment is synonymous to a dessert, then this is pure sugar. This is just a Naruto rehash where MC cake walk everything.
I never do this type of reviews but I couldn’t not save other people time MC just gets what he wants whenever he wants honestly author should have added [dark MC] ,[ evil MC] to the tags don’t know if the author added the [OP tag] if he didn’t that’s another thing he should add this story started off with great potential but later on it went to 💩 with the MC having basically a second chunibyo (idk if I spelled that correctly) personality that makes him do dumb stuff let me not even mention relationships and plot actually two words : FORCED ,Rushed if there was anything worth mentioning is the interaction between MC and FL after the whole awkward force relationship started I like the way the MC and FL Interact Meme chosen to represent mood :
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Bad novel, this is danzo jr. Char development from netral to evil just ambigious. Btw you author didnt like critics about your novel 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
Story writing wasn’t the best but still not bad for me to not read, good book, however I feel that some powers weren’t researched enough however it doesn’t trail far from its actuality. Ending was probably a bit rushed IMO. Overall, it’s an ok book, character design was good, and the application was better. Plot also flowed through as well. Reason for a vague review is to not spoil the plot. If you don’t like it after 20 chapters then just stop reading.
such a nice fanfic better than anime and charecter not mad for only power but a peace full like
the MC is completely crazy and way to unrealistic and way to OP he mastered Edo tensei jutsu before he graduated he has mastered stealth to a level no one except a chakra sensor can sense him and he created a seal so they can't sense him before that so no thank you to this story
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It is generic to the point that it becomes boring. In essence, the protagonist replacing our favourite Uzumaki is statedly a master manipulator and schemer of sorts. Unfortunately, in every dialogue he is the very picture of your average 12 year old otaku. Reading it gives me second-hand embarrassment. On the other hand, the moments where he's under the pretext of manipulating people, it's so blatantly and painfully obvious, that all the believability and immersion is gone. It hits all predictable tropes in such a manner that by reading a few chapters you'll already have a rough outline on everything that'll happen from that point on, namely most "issues" and plot points he'll want to change being discribed as following: "Hello, nice to meet you. I'm Naruto. You should/shouldn't do, think or be this way. I'm a genius and smart, so you should follow my advice." "Oh okay, you are now my best friend.". This story loves to pretend that its characters aren't humans with complex desires and intricate personalities, but NPC's with preprogrammed responses. In the end, I think it lacks passion. I've realised I'm ranting now. It's most likely because I'm tired of reading these stories where the protagonist is supposed to be a genius, but thinks and talks like. an. idiot! 2,8 out of 5 and that's only because it is on WebNovel.com.
Fantastic read. Kind of a rushed last few chapters. But overall wrapped the story up nicely. Expecting other great stories from you author.
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On chapter 5 , I dropped it . Not really , in 3 years he trained his body to genin ? The author does not understand the campaign . it would be better if he Guy overpowered his soul in Naruto . Naruto if you train properly and do more than yesterday , he would already be a jonin . yes, I'm sorry for the fans, this is a fan fiction mugu to say one thing, he's probably been doing push-ups 10 times for 3 years, he was probably afraid to dislocate his arm
I liked it all the way to the end. Really nice. I read, some others' works beforehand and the pacing and approach was no worse. I stopped the progress on other stories to continue this one to end. I ENJOYED 😉 Thank-you. ^ -< ^ )
Writing Quality 5 Stability of Updates 5 Story Development 5 Character Design 5 very good writing quality and was enjoyable till end unlike when sum fanfic become boring and dull in middle
The character strength developments are everywhere he explains sometimes others he just forgets (tbh I think the author forgot the character has a system multiple times throughout), his mental state is everywhere and no where at the same time, doesn’t follow original writing theme he set up( slowly op and darker personality) instead he made him op rather immediately and barely follows the personality scheme, if your looking for a mindless read this is one however if your looking for something original or at least a bit different than the other hundred cliche fanfic then this isn’t for you.
Great read, everything is good from translation to character development but I am kinda wondering what happened to him going to another anime world
It's a really good fanfiction 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊⛄🎄⛄🎆🎆🎆😊😊😊😎😎🎆🎆🎆🎆☀️☀️☀️☀️ Thanks author
Writing Quality : 5* only negligible typo mistake Updates : 5* 7 chaps a week is pretty good Story : 5* so far pretty good, just need more details. Char. : 4* do steady development please. World : 4* need more details, please add movie arc ¬That chapter with that Inari kid is felt forced. Please do MC character development steadily. ¬Need more interaction with Hinata and show some her POV ¬MC needs to learn Medical Ninjutsu, his control is enough, do experiments with Hashirama cell ¬Make the story pace slower please, he is already in he is already in Elite Jonin Tier in chapter 1, I love him getting OP, but this is too fast, with this pace in less 100 chap he will dominate naruto world and go other universe. 😂
I really like the fact that the mc is very calculative. for a fan-fic it is a great read, the only thing that will make this great is if the updates and the quality would be consistent or better. I'm really hoping for steady release.
Thanks for the good work sensei I 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
The story really s*cks at times. The MC is inconsistent—sometimes he's ruthless, and other times he's way too soft, which ends up ruining the character. It feels like the author is forcing the MC into the plot for no real reason, making it hard to stay invested.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Naruto: The Shinobi Genius Naruto: El genio shinobi [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
Ruim. O que? É sistema! E um mal escrito por cima. E como se não bastasse, a escrita em geral parece mais um diário apressado do que uma situação vivencional.
Seriously, I read this a long time ago and I remember liking it, but bro, what is this? The writing format is horrible, you can't tell who is speaking, character development doesn't even exist
All I can say is: thanks for taking care of Itachi and giving him a bunch of cats. Was basically either facepalming or snickering the entire read time.
I was searching for a fanfic where main character is naruto and i find it in it + no-harem not long and boring arcs mc starts to get strong and become the stronget i had fun while reading it
Tiết lộ Spoiler Trach and waste of time for these resons: 1- stupied MC and characters 2- the story is going too fast 3- bad fights end in two seconds 4- all the fouce on the MC And the list goes on insted of reading this trach I recommend to read these fan fiction novels: 1- HP magical journey (HARRY POTTER) 9.5/10 MUST READ!! 2- famous police detective in detective world (CONAN) 9/10 3-
I appreciate the author hard work so I will give this a four-star review, however honestly I can only say it was a half baked fanfic... without much thought put into it, after all the MC only reincarnated for a few years and can already invent seals that simply defy logic... Training for only three years and can already sneak to the Hokage office and still information?? Not likely...
If wish-fulfillment is synonymous to a dessert, then this is pure sugar. This is just a Naruto rehash where MC cake walk everything.
I never do this type of reviews but I couldn’t not save other people time MC just gets what he wants whenever he wants honestly author should have added [dark MC] ,[ evil MC] to the tags don’t know if the author added the [OP tag] if he didn’t that’s another thing he should add this story started off with great potential but later on it went to 💩 with the MC having basically a second chunibyo (idk if I spelled that correctly) personality that makes him do dumb stuff let me not even mention relationships and plot actually two words : FORCED ,Rushed if there was anything worth mentioning is the interaction between MC and FL after the whole awkward force relationship started I like the way the MC and FL Interact Meme chosen to represent mood :
Tiết lộ Spoiler Bad novel, this is danzo jr. Char development from netral to evil just ambigious. Btw you author didnt like critics about your novel 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎
Story writing wasn’t the best but still not bad for me to not read, good book, however I feel that some powers weren’t researched enough however it doesn’t trail far from its actuality. Ending was probably a bit rushed IMO. Overall, it’s an ok book, character design was good, and the application was better. Plot also flowed through as well. Reason for a vague review is to not spoil the plot. If you don’t like it after 20 chapters then just stop reading.
such a nice fanfic better than anime and charecter not mad for only power but a peace full like
the MC is completely crazy and way to unrealistic and way to OP he mastered Edo tensei jutsu before he graduated he has mastered stealth to a level no one except a chakra sensor can sense him and he created a seal so they can't sense him before that so no thank you to this story
Tiết lộ Spoiler It is generic to the point that it becomes boring. In essence, the protagonist replacing our favourite Uzumaki is statedly a master manipulator and schemer of sorts. Unfortunately, in every dialogue he is the very picture of your average 12 year old otaku. Reading it gives me second-hand embarrassment. On the other hand, the moments where he's under the pretext of manipulating people, it's so blatantly and painfully obvious, that all the believability and immersion is gone. It hits all predictable tropes in such a manner that by reading a few chapters you'll already have a rough outline on everything that'll happen from that point on, namely most "issues" and plot points he'll want to change being discribed as following: "Hello, nice to meet you. I'm Naruto. You should/shouldn't do, think or be this way. I'm a genius and smart, so you should follow my advice." "Oh okay, you are now my best friend.". This story loves to pretend that its characters aren't humans with complex desires and intricate personalities, but NPC's with preprogrammed responses. In the end, I think it lacks passion. I've realised I'm ranting now. It's most likely because I'm tired of reading these stories where the protagonist is supposed to be a genius, but thinks and talks like. an. idiot! 2,8 out of 5 and that's only because it is on WebNovel.com.
Fantastic read. Kind of a rushed last few chapters. But overall wrapped the story up nicely. Expecting other great stories from you author.
Tiết lộ Spoiler On chapter 5 , I dropped it . Not really , in 3 years he trained his body to genin ? The author does not understand the campaign . it would be better if he Guy overpowered his soul in Naruto . Naruto if you train properly and do more than yesterday , he would already be a jonin . yes, I'm sorry for the fans, this is a fan fiction mugu to say one thing, he's probably been doing push-ups 10 times for 3 years, he was probably afraid to dislocate his arm
I liked it all the way to the end. Really nice. I read, some others' works beforehand and the pacing and approach was no worse. I stopped the progress on other stories to continue this one to end. I ENJOYED 😉 Thank-you. ^ -< ^ )
Writing Quality 5 Stability of Updates 5 Story Development 5 Character Design 5 very good writing quality and was enjoyable till end unlike when sum fanfic become boring and dull in middle
The character strength developments are everywhere he explains sometimes others he just forgets (tbh I think the author forgot the character has a system multiple times throughout), his mental state is everywhere and no where at the same time, doesn’t follow original writing theme he set up( slowly op and darker personality) instead he made him op rather immediately and barely follows the personality scheme, if your looking for a mindless read this is one however if your looking for something original or at least a bit different than the other hundred cliche fanfic then this isn’t for you.
Great read, everything is good from translation to character development but I am kinda wondering what happened to him going to another anime world
It's a really good fanfiction 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊⛄🎄⛄🎆🎆🎆😊😊😊😎😎🎆🎆🎆🎆☀️☀️☀️☀️ Thanks author
Writing Quality : 5* only negligible typo mistake Updates : 5* 7 chaps a week is pretty good Story : 5* so far pretty good, just need more details. Char. : 4* do steady development please. World : 4* need more details, please add movie arc ¬That chapter with that Inari kid is felt forced. Please do MC character development steadily. ¬Need more interaction with Hinata and show some her POV ¬MC needs to learn Medical Ninjutsu, his control is enough, do experiments with Hashirama cell ¬Make the story pace slower please, he is already in he is already in Elite Jonin Tier in chapter 1, I love him getting OP, but this is too fast, with this pace in less 100 chap he will dominate naruto world and go other universe. 😂