My insomnia is killing you

LV 10

Ceecee

Hey this is some quality writing, very polished. The main character has depth and the beginning is intriguing, definitely lures the reader in. Still early in the story but I’ll def be putting this in my library to revisit soon!

Quality writing with beautiful immersive descriptions. With great enthusiasm, the author presents us with a story that proves his talent for writing. From the very first lines, we become enraptured by a story that is both original and pleasant to read, as it sports good rhythm and good grammar. I especially enjoyed the fact that there is a clear execution; by which I mean that there is no room for incoherency, something that often bothers me in other works. The way you compose your sentences is clear and simple without being tedious. As I mentioned above, this is due to the fact that the rhythm in your work is very persistent. I never found it to slack. This is a story that pleasantly surprised me.

LV 11

Sigmao

This is a very well-written novel. The opening draws your interest and is unique. The system seems interesting as well. I hope you keep writing this!

LV 4

MaxwellKHA

This is a good read, I don't see any considerable grammatical error and I like it. Too bad the author doesn't update that often. Plot wise it's good so I don't have any complains

LV 5

Seide

Still early in the story but the writing is polished and the story is engaging. The MC is very relatable as well. I'm definitely putting it in my library to revisit.

LV 3

Dan_Ryder

Honestly, I would read this novel if it had more chapters released. I like almost all cultivation novels so this is my kinda thing. I enjoyed how it started and hope the author works hard on their novel. RvR- Devil's Rise.

LV 5

RenuKakkar

The story is interesting. The main character seems to hop between two lives. I would like to see how he overcomes this issue. The writing quality is good. There are some typos like leggs for legs. But that does not interfere with the flow of the story. The stability of updates is good. The Story is developing nicely. The Character design and the world background have been well designed. All the best.

LV 2

Brandongould94

This is Brandon Gould i am responding to a Review Swap for you to Review The Tylingariea Epic i enjoyed the Soul migration parts of this book, i belive it has potional but you shoul focus on one genre either fanstey of Video Games as well as given your chartors a voice and describing where, when and what the would around them looks like. but i did enjoy it hope to see your review soon

LV 3

yizreel_jez

To be honest, I am interested in this story, I love the details such as the attributes of the characters, it is well detailed, dang! It's the first time I read martial arts novel but it hit hard on me, I'm quite liking the plot so far. The quality of writing for me is Ok, I can understand it well. A very pleasant work author!

LV 2

Shahreen_Islam

I feel like this story has great potential. I found the language a bit difficult to follow at times, but it was still interesting. I am assuming it is one of those RPG virtual reality stories? I've read one which was similar to this. But this is better. I wish the author good luck.