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Daoist689073

Really wish this novel had kept going. Two years later and I still find myself thinking back to the main character from time to time, and the rather interesting and unique take on his whole solar blood style of magic. While I understand the author probably has stopped working on projects, I hope I can find their work in future elsewhere.

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1yr
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Mauro_Zucchelli

Really nice cultivation story without most of the cliche that plague the genre. I really like the character development and the complete absence of deus ex machina

4yr
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Adithya_Balepalli_0584

The writing style which depicts MC's growth is what made me give 5 star writing.The knowledge of the world is introduced as MC grows and a very good coming of age,well sculpted cultivation world story that every fantasy reader should read.A MUST READ.All the best to author.May the force(flux here;)) be with you[img=recommend][img=update]

4yr
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Spatiotemporal

I liked the story. I would like to wish the author of the continuation of the novel. Although of course the fact that he's a vampire is not an op in my opinion. But read on can be an interesting development of the plot!

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4yr
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code_heart66

pretty slow paced if you ask me, I'm the kinda person that lives for the thrill it might get better later on but the training is taking too much time in my opinion

4yr
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Mr_Fluff

Hope that rating it 5 stars can help even if its a little hehehehehehhehehehehehehehehrhrhgehhehehehehehhehehehehehehehrhehehhehehheheheheheheheheheh[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

4yr
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Angel_King_8463

Valla mierda el MC si sabes que no vas a ganar no vallas y déjalo a tu amigo y no hagas el ridiculizado o al menos gana una hdp aquí lo dejo solo por eso

4yr
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nuramus64

It is a good book with good characters, world building, development, and plot and better than many other novels out there and definitely worth it

4yr
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Michael_Boylen

love the character development and with steady world development and i like the side characters and their close relationship with the MC also like way it foreshadows future events overall very good story

4yr
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Astertian

I'm actually at 50 chapters. I find the book really amazing. You can find real depth in how the cultivation works and how it might develop( As well as the background, however i let you have your own point of view on this. I love books that make your mind wander. Even if it might not be the same as you think. It's in my opinion what make you addicted to the universe of the story). Big up to the author for his work here. I hope i won't finish all the chapters too quickly.

4yr
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X_Wheel_Will

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4yr
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LucidDreamer

the story goes too slow.... not for me so i drooped it .. but the story got a good flow and indeed its a hidden gem.. just not suited for me.. or any other who don,t like slow development pace story ...

4yr
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lnflux

Great story, and a real hidden gem. It is nothing like the usual cultivation novel, with actual character development, interesting world background, and incredibly good quality of writing. I would highly recommend this if you're looking for a good novel to read.

4yr
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christopher2nd

Awesome possums! This book has it all. A sweet cultivation system, split between cultivating the body and cultivating the spirtual qi found in the air, with nine individual stages that are respectively identified by various conditions being met eith the body or dantian. The MC is a mostly solitary dude, who has only a few close friends and eventually a love interest. That said, the charaxters are all well established and clearly defined, each with unique attributes and easily recognizable.

4yr
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TheAncientOnell

This book is too damn slow no offense its good sometimes boring as F the fact it it's based on kids is overwhelming good job but time to grow up. The ability description is lacking very much.

4yr
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Mercury34

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4yr
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cloudandrain

gives you the feeling of wanting more for every new chapter.... so give me more damnit...MOREEEEE!!!........................................

4yr
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dregens_319

PoA so far has done Really well. Solid updating stability, complex characters making their way in a feverish struggle to become stronger. Not to mention the world building, which gives you enough information to understand the medieval-esque landscape, yet at the same time leaving a layer of mystery as to whats beyond Demia, and beyond the planet. Overall, a really interesting read and a lot of fun, especially if you’re looking for something new to the cultivation genre.

4yr
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FoolsCode

the only thing I can complain about is the slow updates but it is always worth the wait. very thrilling and descriptive makes it easy to get lost in the story.

4yr
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christopher2nd

Cool story with a neat cultivation system and great characters. Not the best ever, but a solid story that you won’t regret reading. Recommended for people who enjoy the different stages being explained and for the actual acts of cultivation being described.

4yr
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tamei_music

This novel is honestly impeccable , story building , character development , all of it is exquisite. If you're looking for a mash between a cultivation and a fantasy novel this is it for you.

4yr
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Darksurge

don't know where to begin. I say that the story development isn't as fast paced as most novels where they time skip to avoid character building. a great new system of cultivation. there is still a great mysterious veil over the greater world leading you to guess how far it goes.

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Daoist370160

I have only one word for this novel. Amazing. I can be considered an experienced veteran when it comes to reading web novels I have read all the mainstream novels but i have never read something so smooth. The transition from chapter to chapter is simply smooth and refined. I must say this novel has brought me much fun while reading. I request the author to not give up this novel and keep writing amazing novels like these! THE CULTIVATION GENERA NEEDS MORE AUTHORS LIKE YOU. PLS NEVER GIVE UP HOPE. GOD BLESS YOU

4yr
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Yoonaught

I absolutely live this book, it completely immerses me into the world and makes me want the chapters to come out more regularly. I love the development of the characters and their paths, I like the new spin on cultivation and how they create their own paths.

4yr
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Buckeye43

Absolutely stunning story, that has a great plot. the characters are fleshed out and add a lot of depth to the story, and there are no annoying/useless side characters. Overall one of my favorite stories on this app and I can’t wait for more to read.

4yr
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Raron
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They work hard in ebsuring thr characters develop well, can be a bit slow however i prefer this to an MC fueled via plot armour. All in all, one of the better stories on this site, because, and this will shock you, he can write well as a writer!!!

4yr
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BishopECL

interesting and well written story so far. The protagonist is not an arrogant jerk, and the world is interesting with large universe. So far, so good

4yr
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origin666

Love. Just read it. One of my favorites. I accidentally picked it up just to pass the time but man am I glad. The characters are fleshed out story never gets boring and u just wanna keep reading

4yr
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sonkyuubi

It is really well thought out and well written. The cultivation is interesting and the story will probably also be interesting. Aside from the kinda slow battle descriptions, this novel is very good

4yr
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Kunal_Singh_2575

Liked it, great idea of Ascension. though the story still feels like it's in infancy, with the overarching plot only slightly beginning, the overall writing style has me hooked. Hope to enjoy this work for a long time to come.

4yr
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Daoist689073

Really wish this novel had kept going. Two years later and I still find myself thinking back to the main character from time to time, and the rather interesting and unique take on his whole solar blood style of magic. While I understand the author probably has stopped working on projects, I hope I can find their work in future elsewhere.

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1yr
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Mauro_Zucchelli

Really nice cultivation story without most of the cliche that plague the genre. I really like the character development and the complete absence of deus ex machina

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Adithya_Balepalli_0584

The writing style which depicts MC's growth is what made me give 5 star writing.The knowledge of the world is introduced as MC grows and a very good coming of age,well sculpted cultivation world story that every fantasy reader should read.A MUST READ.All the best to author.May the force(flux here;)) be with you[img=recommend][img=update]

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Spatiotemporal

I liked the story. I would like to wish the author of the continuation of the novel. Although of course the fact that he's a vampire is not an op in my opinion. But read on can be an interesting development of the plot!

Tiết lộ Spoiler
4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
code_heart66

pretty slow paced if you ask me, I'm the kinda person that lives for the thrill it might get better later on but the training is taking too much time in my opinion

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Mr_Fluff

Hope that rating it 5 stars can help even if its a little hehehehehehhehehehehehehehehrhrhgehhehehehehehhehehehehehehehrhehehhehehheheheheheheheheheh[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

4yr
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Angel_King_8463

Valla mierda el MC si sabes que no vas a ganar no vallas y déjalo a tu amigo y no hagas el ridiculizado o al menos gana una hdp aquí lo dejo solo por eso

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
nuramus64

It is a good book with good characters, world building, development, and plot and better than many other novels out there and definitely worth it

4yr
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Michael_Boylen

love the character development and with steady world development and i like the side characters and their close relationship with the MC also like way it foreshadows future events overall very good story

4yr
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Astertian

I'm actually at 50 chapters. I find the book really amazing. You can find real depth in how the cultivation works and how it might develop( As well as the background, however i let you have your own point of view on this. I love books that make your mind wander. Even if it might not be the same as you think. It's in my opinion what make you addicted to the universe of the story). Big up to the author for his work here. I hope i won't finish all the chapters too quickly.

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
X_Wheel_Will

⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛ ⬛⬛❤💛💚⬛💜💖❤⬛⬛ ⬛💜💖❤💛💚💙💜💖❤⬛ ⬛💙💜💖❤💛💚💙💜💖⬛ ⬛⬛💙💜💖❤💛💚💙⬛⬛ ⬛⬛⬛💙💜💖❤💛⬛⬛⬛ ⬛⬛⬛⬛💙💜💖⬛⬛⬛⬛ ⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛💙⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛ ⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛⬛

4yr
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LucidDreamer

the story goes too slow.... not for me so i drooped it .. but the story got a good flow and indeed its a hidden gem.. just not suited for me.. or any other who don,t like slow development pace story ...

4yr
Xem 1 lời trả lời
lnflux

Great story, and a real hidden gem. It is nothing like the usual cultivation novel, with actual character development, interesting world background, and incredibly good quality of writing. I would highly recommend this if you're looking for a good novel to read.

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
christopher2nd

Awesome possums! This book has it all. A sweet cultivation system, split between cultivating the body and cultivating the spirtual qi found in the air, with nine individual stages that are respectively identified by various conditions being met eith the body or dantian. The MC is a mostly solitary dude, who has only a few close friends and eventually a love interest. That said, the charaxters are all well established and clearly defined, each with unique attributes and easily recognizable.

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
TheAncientOnell

This book is too damn slow no offense its good sometimes boring as F the fact it it's based on kids is overwhelming good job but time to grow up. The ability description is lacking very much.

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Mercury34

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4yr
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cloudandrain

gives you the feeling of wanting more for every new chapter.... so give me more damnit...MOREEEEE!!!........................................

4yr
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dregens_319

PoA so far has done Really well. Solid updating stability, complex characters making their way in a feverish struggle to become stronger. Not to mention the world building, which gives you enough information to understand the medieval-esque landscape, yet at the same time leaving a layer of mystery as to whats beyond Demia, and beyond the planet. Overall, a really interesting read and a lot of fun, especially if you’re looking for something new to the cultivation genre.

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
FoolsCode

the only thing I can complain about is the slow updates but it is always worth the wait. very thrilling and descriptive makes it easy to get lost in the story.

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
christopher2nd

Cool story with a neat cultivation system and great characters. Not the best ever, but a solid story that you won’t regret reading. Recommended for people who enjoy the different stages being explained and for the actual acts of cultivation being described.

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
tamei_music

This novel is honestly impeccable , story building , character development , all of it is exquisite. If you're looking for a mash between a cultivation and a fantasy novel this is it for you.

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Darksurge

don't know where to begin. I say that the story development isn't as fast paced as most novels where they time skip to avoid character building. a great new system of cultivation. there is still a great mysterious veil over the greater world leading you to guess how far it goes.

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Daoist370160

I have only one word for this novel. Amazing. I can be considered an experienced veteran when it comes to reading web novels I have read all the mainstream novels but i have never read something so smooth. The transition from chapter to chapter is simply smooth and refined. I must say this novel has brought me much fun while reading. I request the author to not give up this novel and keep writing amazing novels like these! THE CULTIVATION GENERA NEEDS MORE AUTHORS LIKE YOU. PLS NEVER GIVE UP HOPE. GOD BLESS YOU

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Yoonaught

I absolutely live this book, it completely immerses me into the world and makes me want the chapters to come out more regularly. I love the development of the characters and their paths, I like the new spin on cultivation and how they create their own paths.

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Buckeye43

Absolutely stunning story, that has a great plot. the characters are fleshed out and add a lot of depth to the story, and there are no annoying/useless side characters. Overall one of my favorite stories on this app and I can’t wait for more to read.

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
Raron
LV 15 Badge

They work hard in ebsuring thr characters develop well, can be a bit slow however i prefer this to an MC fueled via plot armour. All in all, one of the better stories on this site, because, and this will shock you, he can write well as a writer!!!

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
BishopECL

interesting and well written story so far. The protagonist is not an arrogant jerk, and the world is interesting with large universe. So far, so good

4yr
Xem 0 lời trả lời
origin666

Love. Just read it. One of my favorites. I accidentally picked it up just to pass the time but man am I glad. The characters are fleshed out story never gets boring and u just wanna keep reading

4yr
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sonkyuubi

It is really well thought out and well written. The cultivation is interesting and the story will probably also be interesting. Aside from the kinda slow battle descriptions, this novel is very good

4yr
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Kunal_Singh_2575

Liked it, great idea of Ascension. though the story still feels like it's in infancy, with the overarching plot only slightly beginning, the overall writing style has me hooked. Hope to enjoy this work for a long time to come.

4yr
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