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This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please Write the next chapters soon so I will be able to read them thank you🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏
Ehh it’s alright. The world is SW but it’s not original in its execution especially at the beginning. The author was a little weird about the gender swap thing. But eh.
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The story is a waste. The mc is a transgender thing. Mc is Male makes a female character and then goes to sw and is born as a female. Nothing but the author trying to live a gender swap fantasy which ruins the whole thing. Please dont put this stuff here. We very seldom get a sw story much less a good one and then we get this.... at least put a transgender notation on it so people know what they are getting into.
As the author... I believe to know some of my flaws, such as laziness, but I still believe the work I do is great and will intrigue and attract others. Give this book a shot! It isn't a power fantasy, but will reach that level through the hard work of the main character eventually! The journey is always more important than the destination with stories, and I believe this journey is well worth interest <3.
Your writing has gotten better as you went on, the story has been fun to read and your inner turmoil at what a sith character has to do makes the character that much more understandable.
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This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please Write the next chapters soon so I will be able to read them thank you🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏📖🙏
Ehh it’s alright. The world is SW but it’s not original in its execution especially at the beginning. The author was a little weird about the gender swap thing. But eh.
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The story is a waste. The mc is a transgender thing. Mc is Male makes a female character and then goes to sw and is born as a female. Nothing but the author trying to live a gender swap fantasy which ruins the whole thing. Please dont put this stuff here. We very seldom get a sw story much less a good one and then we get this.... at least put a transgender notation on it so people know what they are getting into.
As the author... I believe to know some of my flaws, such as laziness, but I still believe the work I do is great and will intrigue and attract others. Give this book a shot! It isn't a power fantasy, but will reach that level through the hard work of the main character eventually! The journey is always more important than the destination with stories, and I believe this journey is well worth interest <3.
Your writing has gotten better as you went on, the story has been fun to read and your inner turmoil at what a sith character has to do makes the character that much more understandable.