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Seriously, it's really annoying when the author made him powerful without giving proper details on the process...like how tf did he suddenly gained the knowledge of Flying Thunder God, an S-ranked jutsu...don't tell me that he gained that while he was in Orochimaru's lab, and if it really is, then this just funny or maybe he learned that in his past life, and if that really is, then that's just dumb.
To this day I'm sad that the story was dropped 😭One, if not the my favorite Naruto story
This fanfic is a gem 💎 The story is really good..the mc background which was depicted was really interesting and the love interest was 🔥 this is the best fanfic i have read..
This is an amazing fan fiction. The story was well crafted with an excellent plot, engaging characters, and descriptive writing. The author did an outstanding job in capturing the essence of the Naruto world and stayed true to the characters' personalities. 💯💯💯💯
Literally the world be in a better place if MC didnt exist, MC wanted to stick to the plot, but since he was already a threat to the enemies they increased their forces and what does MC do, RUNS OFF AND CHASES A SPIRIT CAUSE WHY NOT, IT HAD NO RELEVANCE, MC is honestly more of a screw up then danzo
I felt the character design was a bit lazy, however his *character* (personality) was not. THe story had decent grammar and good punctuation. The writing however was kind of mid. Author did a good job with dialogue but sometime story feels rushed or dragged at certain points. The dialogue between characters feel like someone is rambling on and on and it just feels long, sometimes they are basically saying the same thing over in different ways. So in certain situations they drag words and it just makes a very long chapter for no reason. The story was good and the switch in p.o.v was decent as well. Overall good job, just work on spacing and paragraph setting so it doesn’t look like a long speech.
first mc is idiot ...no very big idiot....... first author made his previous world and this world very dark .... and then he made our mc very kind and stupid..... yes you get it right he changes the plot but not in very good way... he keep helping sasuke by the risk of his own life even if sasuke doesn't need it... on top of that sasuke start suspecting him that he want something thats why he is so much helping him for no reason.....2nd his decidion is trash and filled with unneccesory kindness... third- conversation is very awkward to read as for example---- naruto-"who are you dattebayo!" yes this is how in this novel naruto talks but its onkey but problem is talks between him and his friend that is way awkward like someone is talking to his gf or some cringe drama is going on.. "I won't let you fight because you are very pericious to me blah blah type cringe conversation..
Started of really good and then it just became annoying. For one, the MC explains his techniques to the one he's fighting. Also it's basically a xianxia novel.
Author make MC mess around in major story events but he is too cowardly to change the story so MC action becomes meainless since he'll arrive too late or fail to produce anyresult. Eg: Fighing orochimaru to help sasuke BUT after he gave the curse mark and was about to leave, so MC exposed himself for no reason. Also, Author started throwing around Xianxia logic, like MC developing breathing technique to recover chakra from enviroment (Not nature chakra), Creating his own sholin style body refininement technique, Sucking the balls of 3rd hokage since he is the supreme leader etc... I'd add more but I dont have the patient to keep reading this POS.
This book started off so well, and enjoyable. Then you decided to completely change your style. Stopped using first person, and started constantly just ignoring your MC. I personally think that was a bad decision. More then half of the last 15 chapters of the first part don't even mention the MC. This was just annoying, honestly skipped most of it. Then you just start butchering all the best characters and nerfing your MC with reckless abandon. Did you just decide you wanted to annoy us? I fail to see the reason behind this. I couldn't even finish the last few chapters. Overall you are a decent writer, and your fights were interesting. It's a shame you derailed the book like you did. I am sure plenty liked it regardless i however did not. Best wishes and good day.
Read this a year ago. Honesty this is THE top tier naruto fanfic of all time. Not one of the but THE top tier fanfic. Cause none other fanfic even comes close to this. Author are you still there. We need more fanfic like this.
The story is well thought out and shows a lot of creativity. This makes it unique that shows development like the martial arts they made. i would read it over and over again.
The story has good development but writing quality is kinda bland, feels boring. so it could have been better...............................
Dunno why it says completed but it deserves infinite stars, not just 5. I cried alot of times while watching naruto, and I cried alot of times while reading this fanfic. Its THE BEST Naruto fanfic.
One of the naruto fanfiction I have read in my thousands of reads. I still come here to read it again. ................................. ...
I like it... but is it dropped??? I hope it continues.. thanks for the novel 😀 😊 🙂 👍 ☺ 🙏 😀 😊 🙂 👍 ☺ 🙏 😀 😊 🙂 👍 ☺ 🙏 😀 😊 🙂 👍 ☺ 🙏 😀 😊 🙂 👍
Another Canon with mc as a side character. Just annoying to read how everything is the same. Especially in Boruto. Like they are 10 new characters in Boruto but still follows canon.
Good Nice work ,i reaally Sant see more, Will wait until realease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@!@!@!@!!!@!@!@!@!!!@!!@!@!!@!
THE BEST NOVEL NARUTO FANFIC, THE BEST NOVEL NARUTO FANFIC THE BEST NOVEL NARUTO FANFIC THE BEST NOVEL NARUTO FANFIC THE BEST NOVEL NARUTO FANFIC THE BEST NOVEL NARUTO FANFIC THE BEST NOVEL NARUTO FANFIC
only on chapter 13 but I have to say it's shaping up to be one of the best fanfics I've read, and I've read a lot. The MC in particular, his moral alignment, his decision making, and his willingness to change the future is all truly commendable. Most fanfics aren't imaginative enough to attempt this. usually going with the emotionless or evil MC who refuses to meddle in anything. keep it up!
author do you still have a plan of updating your novel? I really want to read about what happened next. it's very interesting novel. especially you continue it to buroto. this is the first novel that I've read that has a child to parent relationships with the MC.
Tiết lộ Spoiler
Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
This fan fiction is so good! !! totally I really don't like reading first person pov .but to these novel it change me completely! like yeah the author is so good! !! thumbs up to you author-sama👍. thank you very much of writing this awesome Naruto fan fiction! !! I really like reading it and it's not like the other fan fiction. this fan fiction is one of the best that I've read so far. !! ! so keep it up author-sama! and I hope you write more awesome fan fiction novels. huhuhu still I'm satisfied because the chapters is so few .but I understand ! at least it's complete. not like the others who dropped it.
It is one of the best fan-fics of Naruto and Boruto I have ever read . It is interesting and the main character's personality is great . The pairing is also great.
the fanfic is great and Interesting for the naruto part the main character is intriguing and well implemented to the naruto world while also showing the effects on the main naruto storyline in a logical way
I read this before and I accidentally deleted the tab so I’ve been looking for this book for so long, I really enjoyed is so 5 stars! Good work as well
This story had a good start and after some time it became very cringe so I can't continue reading this
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Seriously, it's really annoying when the author made him powerful without giving proper details on the process...like how tf did he suddenly gained the knowledge of Flying Thunder God, an S-ranked jutsu...don't tell me that he gained that while he was in Orochimaru's lab, and if it really is, then this just funny or maybe he learned that in his past life, and if that really is, then that's just dumb.
To this day I'm sad that the story was dropped 😭One, if not the my favorite Naruto story
This fanfic is a gem 💎 The story is really good..the mc background which was depicted was really interesting and the love interest was 🔥 this is the best fanfic i have read..
This is an amazing fan fiction. The story was well crafted with an excellent plot, engaging characters, and descriptive writing. The author did an outstanding job in capturing the essence of the Naruto world and stayed true to the characters' personalities. 💯💯💯💯
Literally the world be in a better place if MC didnt exist, MC wanted to stick to the plot, but since he was already a threat to the enemies they increased their forces and what does MC do, RUNS OFF AND CHASES A SPIRIT CAUSE WHY NOT, IT HAD NO RELEVANCE, MC is honestly more of a screw up then danzo
I felt the character design was a bit lazy, however his *character* (personality) was not. THe story had decent grammar and good punctuation. The writing however was kind of mid. Author did a good job with dialogue but sometime story feels rushed or dragged at certain points. The dialogue between characters feel like someone is rambling on and on and it just feels long, sometimes they are basically saying the same thing over in different ways. So in certain situations they drag words and it just makes a very long chapter for no reason. The story was good and the switch in p.o.v was decent as well. Overall good job, just work on spacing and paragraph setting so it doesn’t look like a long speech.
first mc is idiot ...no very big idiot....... first author made his previous world and this world very dark .... and then he made our mc very kind and stupid..... yes you get it right he changes the plot but not in very good way... he keep helping sasuke by the risk of his own life even if sasuke doesn't need it... on top of that sasuke start suspecting him that he want something thats why he is so much helping him for no reason.....2nd his decidion is trash and filled with unneccesory kindness... third- conversation is very awkward to read as for example---- naruto-"who are you dattebayo!" yes this is how in this novel naruto talks but its onkey but problem is talks between him and his friend that is way awkward like someone is talking to his gf or some cringe drama is going on.. "I won't let you fight because you are very pericious to me blah blah type cringe conversation..
Started of really good and then it just became annoying. For one, the MC explains his techniques to the one he's fighting. Also it's basically a xianxia novel.
Author make MC mess around in major story events but he is too cowardly to change the story so MC action becomes meainless since he'll arrive too late or fail to produce anyresult. Eg: Fighing orochimaru to help sasuke BUT after he gave the curse mark and was about to leave, so MC exposed himself for no reason. Also, Author started throwing around Xianxia logic, like MC developing breathing technique to recover chakra from enviroment (Not nature chakra), Creating his own sholin style body refininement technique, Sucking the balls of 3rd hokage since he is the supreme leader etc... I'd add more but I dont have the patient to keep reading this POS.
This book started off so well, and enjoyable. Then you decided to completely change your style. Stopped using first person, and started constantly just ignoring your MC. I personally think that was a bad decision. More then half of the last 15 chapters of the first part don't even mention the MC. This was just annoying, honestly skipped most of it. Then you just start butchering all the best characters and nerfing your MC with reckless abandon. Did you just decide you wanted to annoy us? I fail to see the reason behind this. I couldn't even finish the last few chapters. Overall you are a decent writer, and your fights were interesting. It's a shame you derailed the book like you did. I am sure plenty liked it regardless i however did not. Best wishes and good day.
Read this a year ago. Honesty this is THE top tier naruto fanfic of all time. Not one of the but THE top tier fanfic. Cause none other fanfic even comes close to this. Author are you still there. We need more fanfic like this.
The story is well thought out and shows a lot of creativity. This makes it unique that shows development like the martial arts they made. i would read it over and over again.
The story has good development but writing quality is kinda bland, feels boring. so it could have been better...............................
Dunno why it says completed but it deserves infinite stars, not just 5. I cried alot of times while watching naruto, and I cried alot of times while reading this fanfic. Its THE BEST Naruto fanfic.
One of the naruto fanfiction I have read in my thousands of reads. I still come here to read it again. ................................. ...
I like it... but is it dropped??? I hope it continues.. thanks for the novel 😀 😊 🙂 👍 ☺ 🙏 😀 😊 🙂 👍 ☺ 🙏 😀 😊 🙂 👍 ☺ 🙏 😀 😊 🙂 👍 ☺ 🙏 😀 😊 🙂 👍
Another Canon with mc as a side character. Just annoying to read how everything is the same. Especially in Boruto. Like they are 10 new characters in Boruto but still follows canon.
Good Nice work ,i reaally Sant see more, Will wait until realease!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@!@!@!@!!!@!@!@!@!!!@!!@!@!!@!
THE BEST NOVEL NARUTO FANFIC, THE BEST NOVEL NARUTO FANFIC THE BEST NOVEL NARUTO FANFIC THE BEST NOVEL NARUTO FANFIC THE BEST NOVEL NARUTO FANFIC THE BEST NOVEL NARUTO FANFIC THE BEST NOVEL NARUTO FANFIC
only on chapter 13 but I have to say it's shaping up to be one of the best fanfics I've read, and I've read a lot. The MC in particular, his moral alignment, his decision making, and his willingness to change the future is all truly commendable. Most fanfics aren't imaginative enough to attempt this. usually going with the emotionless or evil MC who refuses to meddle in anything. keep it up!
author do you still have a plan of updating your novel? I really want to read about what happened next. it's very interesting novel. especially you continue it to buroto. this is the first novel that I've read that has a child to parent relationships with the MC.
Tiết lộ Spoiler Awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
This fan fiction is so good! !! totally I really don't like reading first person pov .but to these novel it change me completely! like yeah the author is so good! !! thumbs up to you author-sama👍. thank you very much of writing this awesome Naruto fan fiction! !! I really like reading it and it's not like the other fan fiction. this fan fiction is one of the best that I've read so far. !! ! so keep it up author-sama! and I hope you write more awesome fan fiction novels. huhuhu still I'm satisfied because the chapters is so few .but I understand ! at least it's complete. not like the others who dropped it.
It is one of the best fan-fics of Naruto and Boruto I have ever read . It is interesting and the main character's personality is great . The pairing is also great.
the fanfic is great and Interesting for the naruto part the main character is intriguing and well implemented to the naruto world while also showing the effects on the main naruto storyline in a logical way
I read this before and I accidentally deleted the tab so I’ve been looking for this book for so long, I really enjoyed is so 5 stars! Good work as well
This story had a good start and after some time it became very cringe so I can't continue reading this