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Great comedy, made me grin and writing quality is great. Its on hiatus sadly so thats sad. pogpogpogpogpogpogpogpogpogpogpogpogpogpogpogpog
Yo normalmente no posteo ningún comentario, pero siento que debo hacerlo, esta es una de las mejores historias que e leído y déjame diserte que ya e superado el 4000 libros e historias leídas. Lo que as logrado con esta historia es increíble¡¡¡ As logrado cautivar mi atención de principio a fin, con una combinación de comedia y acción. Tu creaste a un ser vivo¡¡¡ tu creaste a Hessian. Para mi el es tan real como Peter Parker, Emiya Shiro, Logan y muchos otros que lograron tocar mi alma. Tu creaste a alguien tan real como tu y yo¡¡¡ Así que mantén la frente en alto ya que con convicción puedo decir que si fuiste capas de crear vida, tu eres capas de hacer lo que sea que te propongas en tu vida. Para terminar quiero dictar con las palabras de tu hijo continua escalando, continua haciendo cosas¡¡¡
Hmm, It's pretty much a crack fanfic, I mean soooo much stuff happened here and it's gotten way too ridiculous. Kinda tired with mc always thinking with his lower body...
Lmao this story is great. Troll MC. Not a trashy generic harem with a billion girls to manage like the other fanfics on this website/app.
Literally the ****post version of fanfics. But the one that makes you go ah... i see you are a man of culture as well. The spicy ones that is basically pure essence of memes. Ya like memes then read this **** and yeet your stones at it for the MEMES>
it's all fun and games and lighthearted chaos and i have to reach that 140 character mark i guess so uh, the author's probably a good guy, probably...
10/10 IGN would read again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
...........................................................................................................................................................sugoi
Orgasm....... enough said ....................................................................................................................
I would be honest, last few chapter is fcking confusing with how he just doing something here and there and there's no connection between chapter... But atl east it's good, although I hate the 'teleporting chapter'...
this fanfic is chaos ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
A good FanFiction that rather giving a refreshing feeling unlike those mainstream FanFic with a overly horny MC Recommended to read the first 10 chapter before deciding wheter you like it or not / good or bad Also, you can literally skip the first chapter(chapter 1)
SUBARASHI I like how the story goes, the author doesn't make stupid mistakes and doesn't seem to want to nerf, the author is different from those fanfic authors who have never read a fanfic or two related to what he writes, as How the author seems to read fanfic as much as we readers and seem to know what we hate about a fanfic of the genre, I'm very happy to have found this fanfic, even though it doesn't have many chapters and is irrelevant, considering the amount of fanfic I read daily, that's the best thing that I've already read. today, perhaps in the future, people will start telling the author what to do, how to order a harem, etc. I hope he doesn't mind the orders and follow what he thinks is best when you try to fulfill a reader's request, you end up rushing things, not to mention that when writing a story like this, you usually write with your own wishes, fantasies and will, if you prioritize the reader's will, you will eventually lose inspiration for the story because it is no longer a story about your will. My internet is terrible, so if you don't understand anything I said, don't ask why I can't go back here to comment again, because I need to use the translator, who uses the internet whose quality my internet doesn't have. It was immensely difficult just to write this review, I had to correct translation errors here and there all the time and when the internet signal went down everything I wrote was suddenly erased when reloading the page automatically.
Shameless review after hitting 10 chapters, Doing this while bored so don't expect any fast releases. This is just you're average isekai with cheats.
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Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍 Thanks for the hard Work 😍!
Tiết lộ Spoiler Great comedy, made me grin and writing quality is great. Its on hiatus sadly so thats sad. pogpogpogpogpogpogpogpogpogpogpogpogpogpogpogpog
Yo normalmente no posteo ningún comentario, pero siento que debo hacerlo, esta es una de las mejores historias que e leído y déjame diserte que ya e superado el 4000 libros e historias leídas. Lo que as logrado con esta historia es increíble¡¡¡ As logrado cautivar mi atención de principio a fin, con una combinación de comedia y acción. Tu creaste a un ser vivo¡¡¡ tu creaste a Hessian. Para mi el es tan real como Peter Parker, Emiya Shiro, Logan y muchos otros que lograron tocar mi alma. Tu creaste a alguien tan real como tu y yo¡¡¡ Así que mantén la frente en alto ya que con convicción puedo decir que si fuiste capas de crear vida, tu eres capas de hacer lo que sea que te propongas en tu vida. Para terminar quiero dictar con las palabras de tu hijo continua escalando, continua haciendo cosas¡¡¡
Hmm, It's pretty much a crack fanfic, I mean soooo much stuff happened here and it's gotten way too ridiculous. Kinda tired with mc always thinking with his lower body...
Lmao this story is great. Troll MC. Not a trashy generic harem with a billion girls to manage like the other fanfics on this website/app.
Literally the ****post version of fanfics. But the one that makes you go ah... i see you are a man of culture as well. The spicy ones that is basically pure essence of memes. Ya like memes then read this **** and yeet your stones at it for the MEMES>
it's all fun and games and lighthearted chaos and i have to reach that 140 character mark i guess so uh, the author's probably a good guy, probably...
10/10 IGN would read again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
...........................................................................................................................................................sugoi
Orgasm....... enough said ....................................................................................................................
I would be honest, last few chapter is fcking confusing with how he just doing something here and there and there's no connection between chapter... But atl east it's good, although I hate the 'teleporting chapter'...
this fanfic is chaos ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
A good FanFiction that rather giving a refreshing feeling unlike those mainstream FanFic with a overly horny MC Recommended to read the first 10 chapter before deciding wheter you like it or not / good or bad Also, you can literally skip the first chapter(chapter 1)
SUBARASHI I like how the story goes, the author doesn't make stupid mistakes and doesn't seem to want to nerf, the author is different from those fanfic authors who have never read a fanfic or two related to what he writes, as How the author seems to read fanfic as much as we readers and seem to know what we hate about a fanfic of the genre, I'm very happy to have found this fanfic, even though it doesn't have many chapters and is irrelevant, considering the amount of fanfic I read daily, that's the best thing that I've already read. today, perhaps in the future, people will start telling the author what to do, how to order a harem, etc. I hope he doesn't mind the orders and follow what he thinks is best when you try to fulfill a reader's request, you end up rushing things, not to mention that when writing a story like this, you usually write with your own wishes, fantasies and will, if you prioritize the reader's will, you will eventually lose inspiration for the story because it is no longer a story about your will. My internet is terrible, so if you don't understand anything I said, don't ask why I can't go back here to comment again, because I need to use the translator, who uses the internet whose quality my internet doesn't have. It was immensely difficult just to write this review, I had to correct translation errors here and there all the time and when the internet signal went down everything I wrote was suddenly erased when reloading the page automatically.
Shameless review after hitting 10 chapters, Doing this while bored so don't expect any fast releases. This is just you're average isekai with cheats.
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