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Fate Online: Shadow
4.16 (298 số lượng người đọc)
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Tags: Power Couple, Action, Adventure, Romance, R-18, Virtual Reality, Comedy, Secret Identity, Overpowered MC, Male Protagonist and Female Lead.
The most feared Assassin in the world died because of vengeance.
What he didn't expect was instead of being sent to the nether world, he instead woke up on his younger self all before the time he became an Assassin.
Instead of going back to the life of living in the shadows. He instead decided to lead a new normal life this time and play the newly released Virtual Game, Fate Online!
Let's watch as he change the things that isn't supposed to happen while changing his fate along with it and watch him, on the road to becoming a top professional player.
Note: The Female Lead would have its own narration along in the story.
[Artwork: ptitvinc]
Release Update: 7 Chapters /week
Want to add an addition to the story? Then check out my Patreon! https://www.patreon.com/apocalypseII
P.S - If you're gonna leave a low end review. Make sure its a constructive criticism, because I would certainly get it deleted, if it doesn't help me in improving my story.
I don't except hate reviews just to lower its rating because the story is premium.
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Wow this author is really shameless, 3 times of deleted review already cause it was getting likes from the readers since they can relate to what I said that it was full of inconsistency and we,with the author, even argued about it but dude just said "go make your own novel and make one thats better than harry potter lmao. So here I am again to make a review to counter your shamelessness of deleting low rating reviews. ** Im gonna make one again if you delete this again so yah
k... the novel is fine but there are a lot of things to improve on it, starting with. 1. Its been a while now since a lot of people point out that you wrote 28 years old in chapter 1 when it should be 18 and it still hasnt been fixed despite you thanking a reader for pointing it out and its been months!!!!. 2.world announcements as sometimes it shows the level of the monster, others, it dosnt. Its important for the level to be known as its a difference killing a lvl 10 boss while being same level than killing it while being lvl 30 for example. 3.At the start, it was said that the time was twice as long in the game but then it was said that it was only 12 hours longer and then it got increased that 1 real-world day is 2 days inside which is what was said from the start..... 3. the stats of Amanda in the game are way to high for someone level 7, her stats are 119 in total - 30 stats per level - 60 stats supposing she got all 10 like shadow = 29... Meaning her equipment adds 29 points to her stats in total, thats way to much...... either its that way, she got more than 10 in stats at the start or you messed that up. 4. It bothers me a lot the start of the novel with Shadow and Amanda having to run for accidentally instantly killing the senator's son by making him trip on a rock... even if that was enough to damage his head it won't be enough to instantly kill the guy unless he was to fall on his head from a few meters and im sure that he could have reached the hospital alive even if he were to die from bleeding inside the head. 4. it wasnt stated how the gang found out that mc "killed" the rich guy son. 5. how come Amanda was working full time as the boss of a restaurant if she was THAT good in the game and she could earn thousands dollars... dosnt makes sense and she is even higher level than MC and he is OP 6. Amanda's friend Jeny seems to be from a powerful family, how come she couldn't help Amanda from the rich guy? From what i can see, Jeny could have helped Amanda with no problems 7. how is it possible for a normal guy and girl to escape a hunt from a criminal gang plus the justice for killing a person, not to mention the senator's son!!!, the pair would captured fast and easy as they had a criminal organization and the government searching for them.... and even him becoming a high paid assassin while doing so lol... where did he even get the money for that!! 9. The mc calls little girl the sister of his friend but she is 18 years old, same age as the mc.... LOL 10. why he didnt buy a helmet for Tina? the sister of his best friend? 11. The mc wants money but as soon as he gets a new equipment he tosses the one he had out! lol, he can sell those! 12. Not much is known about the classes, not even the assasin class as what they can or cant do... Such as use 1 or 2 daggers 13. No world announcement was given when the mc CREATED a skill... you would think that such an amazing thing would create a world annoucement but nothing happened... All things considered, this leads me to believe that you dont have any guide while writing this nor you are keeping track of things. Its likely that you must go back to read what you wrote on X chapter to remember instead of writing down important things on a separate file. I recommend using excel or google sheets to keep track of things K... try to improve the world background a little and give some more physycal description of your characters. Pls be consistent with the information given
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Thank god for this story it made me regain some faith in the 'VRMMO' type its not the bull**** die because of betrayal in a game go back and do all of the secret quests. Its good because even though there is some bull in it there in no excess and it gives reasons for the stupid little things like the fact that he doesn't instantly adapt to his new weaker body or how he has to adapt to the game. Also thank god for no BS harem made out of tsundere famous rich girls just some slow romance. I love the romance aspect of this novel, just the little things that the woman remebers. The MC is alot more fresh than I expected, Being an assasin he doesn't shy away from murder outside of the game but still has enough character development to not just be the typical cold killer type. This novel is a lot of small details put together in weird ways to make strange thing that work very well. The MC isn't some diehard gamer that magicly gets an OP class then sudenly becomes rich and handsome he is a person who uses his skill to help him in the game but isn't constantly in the game, unlike most novels of this type the character spends a decent ammount of time out of the game.
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Needs a tonne of work, props to the author and I wish him/her the best of luck. I must say, the first chapter was imho, freaking terrible. It was all over the place, nonsensical mish mash of all the best stuff someone could think of for a modern day mc slapped together into an abomination called Michael. I seriously could not bring myself to read another chapter, I dont say this to discourage the author, it's hard to write! I understand that it isn't easy. This book needs some serious editing and the author needs to just sit and relax a bit, your mc never has to be the everything guy! The best things about characters in novels arent their perfections but their imperfections! All their flaws make them come alive and make your readers empathise with them through their journey! The best thing you can do for your audience is to make them always think about the qualities of our creations that resonate with them! Connecting with them makes your story stand out from the rest of the monotonous garbage that litters this app. You should (If you haven't already but suggesting by the hazardous writing that feels like its come straight from your head to being published) brain storm ideas, the direction you want to go, important antagonists and/or ideas for ones to come! Major turning points in your story that will affect your mc in major ways! These sort of plot points are needed so you can have some sort of direction to love in otherwise it becomes a mess, something that becomes harder to fix the longer you go. Never start the fillings before you've conquered your outline and outlook of where you want your story to go! You may not read this but I seriously hope this helps if you do kind regards
Asking for stones for this is an insult to all authors.You should try to write the plot on a piece of paper then see if what you write next actually fits with what is already there
It feels very fake and the quality is below average. Sorry, no offence. I read the first few chapters and it was very basic and the articulation was not smooth at all. Even the smallest of details and cause dislike and irritation to the reader. The plot was also not too in depth, it went into the story line so quick that it just doesn't feel right.
OH MY GOD THANKS FOR UPDATING !!! IT WAS AWESOME IM REALLY THANKFULL !! PLZ UPDATE AGAIN!! CAN U MAKE HIM FIND SOMETHING OP AND GETS A HAREM??
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So I know the author is extremely sensitive in hearing negative reviews, but I have to be honest. As much as the premise does to serve the fans with things they (including myself) would like (such as VRMMO concepts, Romance, Strong powers etc.) It has a very important issue of execution. From the first chapter, I can quote what others have been saying which boils down to it "being all over the place". It tells us what is going on rather than showing, but in a very loose method. It does not keep a focus and ultimately, becomes uncomfortable to read. Each chapter should have a purpose. The *flow* and *transitioning* of each sentence and paragraph should be strong and easy to follow through. What I would advise is for the author to look at *how* other authors write their books. Yes, I say "how" becasue I feel that the writing style needs to change. It can get exhausting, especially if a lot of chapters have been completed. Let's say you learned a lot from other books and finally came up with a better style – it'd take a long time to fix all of it. I understand. However, if that's the case I would get an editor to help you out. There's plenty of authors who would do that in the discord for Webnovel/RoyalRoad. For other works, I'd analyze how Sword Art Online, Rising of the Shield Hero or Library of Heaven's Path wrote their chapters and their style of conveying their messages to their audience. Plot wise, make sure when writing a scene to imagine how the readers will feel about that scene when comparing it to the *previous chapters*. For example, if the main cast fought and won against a guild of people but then suffers against several weaker hunters later on, there should be a reason *why* they are struggling in the very least, or else it will leave them confused. Overall, great job with nearly 3 million views and good luck with the rest! 👍🏻
TL:DR Terrible grammar, inconsistent writing, and generally super cringy novel. Honestly, Extra Chapter 0 from Supreme Magus is a chapter pointing out cliches in novels, and this entire novel is basically the same as this one chapter. Mc kills " a powerful person"s son, goes on the run with a girl, she dies, he becomes "an assassin" that can supposedly dodge bullets, then goes on to get revenge and murder the entire family of the dead kid, including the employees working for them.Mc dies, travels back in time and starts playing a "VRMMO" in which he gets OP stats. Two(?) days after release there are already " experts" in the game or w/e. The game has time dilation so two days in are one day IRL. Then we get told that there is a limit of 10 hours playing in the game as well, to stop no-lifers. Mc wants to be with his waifu and he "meets" her again in a gym, where he proceeds to save her by punching a guy and knocking out his mate, which makes him fly 3 meters back and falls unconscious. His grill immediately leaves the gym so he "gives them another quick beating" before running outside after her. In the span of a couple of minutes(?) he beats these guys twice, they call their "powerful uncle (or w/e)" and he beats them again.
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The grammar is so atrocious but I like it so far but the grammar is definitely something that would make me want to drop this completely but other than that I'm enjoying it so far
Just reading the synopsis - 7 chapters a week (webnovel says 3). Guy die-revives decides to play a game. (OK. Why? Makes no sence.) Has a female lead tag, says a female character gonna appear later.. What? When? A single sentence would be enough. Or is is gonna reveal all the deepness? You gotta give more credit to the guy actually made your cover not just put his name in between a bunch of plain text, almost got it missed. Somewhat put a patreon link in there, with "addition to the story"? Not even going to comment on this. Worst of all - gonna delete undesired reviews because it is a "premium" novel. Whatever that means. If it is the webnovel's definition about "premium" it is nothing to be proud of.. Something else.. Then wow. I've seen people doing this "non constructive comments removal". It's just the worst possible function on here. Not all five star novels are good. Got this featured on log page. Might read/might not. If the novel's quality is the same as its description, better not. Best of constructive I could. 😘
this story had a lot of potential but it seems the author is writing it wrong. the author seems to not have planned out the story and just keeps adding whatever he wants even though it ruins the story he set at the start. *SPOILER* for example, he first describes the female MC as a helpless person but later says how she would have been able to defend herself. its really inconsistent and ruins the flow of the story. as for how to fix it, it seems the only way is to start the story again.
Read through the first 56 chapters, the story was nice & definitely had potential, but the lack of editing (especially in the early chaps) makes it somewhat difficult to get really absorbed into the novel itself. There were also some minor inconsistencies with in game data related things, but I'll put that down to grammar and editing too. Just somewhat sad I didn't really feel hooked enough on the story to want to continue reading after chapter 56 when the paywall hit. Thanks for a decent attempt author ❤ but honestly, please go back through the previous chapters and just run it through Microsoft Word or something just so it's a smoother read for us.
the thing that rlly bothers me about this novel is the inconsistency in the story and how everyone and their mothers are so gung-ho about pk-ing that its just a major turn off from the story. Like how you would skip the parts about the mc dungeoning and the spend 4-7 chapters about him getting pk-ed or mc pk-ing. the plot inconsistency is rlly bugging me out, like how you plotted out the story beforehand and then when u go to write it its nothing like the story you plotted out already, and more of just sitting down and improvising the whole thing. there was something i was rlly looking forward to later in the novel but all of a sudden getting that event pulled out from under my nose made me deduct major points from this novel. and idk about anyone else but when i read a novel about a game i like seeing the numbers, equip stats, player stats, dmg numbers and stuff like that. but having it all suddenly disappear for like 70 chapters only to have it reappear for like 2-3 chapters rlly grinds my gears(200 something chapters as of this review) most annying part is when u read the story it skips around and back like u forgot to mention something and just decided that all of a sudden it becomes canon. u cant be like "wow he just soloed a boss thats higher level than him" to all of a sudden "o hes not strong enough to take this boss on yet" inconsistency is the key if that was fixed id totally be onboard to continue reading but for now its a no for me. (** if this doesnt count as contructive criticism and gets deleted will be posting it multiple times till it doesnt)
dont drop it continue doing amazing job :) 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drop it continue doing amazing job :) 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drop it continue doing amazing job :) llalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalat drop it continue doing amazing job :) llalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalat drop it continue doing amazing job :) llalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalallalalalalalalalat drop it continue doing amazing
I like this novel so far but there are wayyyyy to many grammar or spelling mistakes. The idea of this novel is good, being a game and real life story, instead lf others being only game and no outside game stories.
Has potential, but the many grammar errors and plot holes get under my skin, especially the grammar, which has mistakes so obvious one has to ask thenselves why it wasnt corrected after all this time. If that puts you off than i cant recommend this one for you, this novel still has its possitives, but i would give it more time so the author corrects the mistakes, untill then its not worth it.
I love the novel not because it was game/life kind of reality but the way the story is presented to the mind of we the readers . For me, I will say that the author did his work very well and now we're enjoying the it . Still waiting for more chapters 😃 . Shadow!!!
Honestly im much more interested in his real life.. he is like a ferocious tiger that looses his fangs and claws in the game.. he is the highest player but he always run even if his enemy is just low levels and a single party of 5 or 6.. btw im already chapter 130+ and im starting to loose interest in this novel.. i hope next chapters will see much improvement of the author.. good luck
Âm lượng 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Âm lượng 1
- 1 Dive! Game Start! 5 years ago
- 2 It's Him! 5 years ago
- 3 The World Is Truly Small Between Us 5 years ago
- 4 Ambush! 5 years ago
- 5 Perfect Stats! 5 years ago
- 6 Meeting Amanda 5 years ago
- 7 Ray of Frost 5 years ago
- 8 The Three Guild Alliances 5 years ago
- 9 You Just Need To Do This and Everything Would Be Easy As Pie! 5 years ago
- 10 A Dead Man Walking 5 years ago
- 11 Shopping and Quest Grades 5 years ago
- 12 Fear 5 years ago
- 13 Shadow Blur 5 years ago
- 14 Quickdraw! 5 years ago
- 15 Robbery 5 years ago
- 16 Where Do I Find This Punk? 5 years ago
- 17 The Grey Couple 5 years ago
- 18 Money Grubber Assassin 5 years ago
- 19 Nevareth Continent 5 years ago
- 20 F*ck Me! 5 years ago
- 21 City Lord 5 years ago
- 22 Lord Gustav 5 years ago
- 23 First Wild Boss 5 years ago
- 24 Ladies Man! 5 years ago
- 25 Jenny 5 years ago
- 26 Dylan 5 years ago
- 27 Gods and Goddesses 5 years ago
- 28 Second Wild Boss! 5 years ago
- 29 Chapter 30 5 years ago
- 30 Tina and Adalind 5 years ago
- 31 Solitary Tempest 5 years ago
- 32 Dungeon Dive 5 years ago
- 33 Dungeon Run (1) 5 years ago
- 34 Dungeon Run (2) 5 years ago
- 35 Dungeon Run (End) 5 years ago
- 36 Soloing A Boss 5 years ago
- 37 Arche Longbow 5 years ago
- 38 Sudden Fame 5 years ago
- 39 In The City Lord Mansion 5 years ago
- 40 Storm Raptor 5 years ago
- 41 Grenari’s Cloak 5 years ago
- 42 Training 5 years ago
- 43 No Mercy To My Enemies 5 years ago
- 44 Chaser 5 years ago
- 45 New Skills 5 years ago
- 46 Timor Village 5 years ago
- 47 Veiled Shadows 5 years ago
- 48 When A Real Expert Is Too OP 5 years ago
- 49 Augur Mine (1) 5 years ago
- 50 Augur Mine (2) 5 years ago
- 51 Augur Mine (3) 5 years ago
- 52 Ghosts 5 years ago
- 53 Meet Up 5 years ago
- 54 PK (UE) 5 years ago
- 55 Hidden Boss 5 years ago
- 56 Escape! 5 years ago
- 57 Midnight 5 years ago
- 58 Hang Out 5 years ago
- 59 Teaming Up 5 years ago
- 60 Finally Meeting Up! 5 years ago
- 61 Dylan and Michael 5 years ago
- 62 Reckless Driving 5 years ago
- 63 Mysterious Person 5 years ago
- 64 Laosun District 5 years ago
- 65 Arms Trade 5 years ago
- 66 You're Dumb 5 years ago
- 67 Knife Training 5 years ago
- 68 Durinberg 5 years ago
- 69 Attack On Shadow! 5 years ago
- 70 Luring A Boss 5 years ago
- 71 Guild Wipe 5 years ago
- 72 School Festival 5 years ago
- 73 School Fight 5 years ago
- 74 School Fight (End) 5 years ago
- 75 Leaderboards 5 years ago
- 76 Wasted 5 years ago
- 77 An Egg! 5 years ago
- 78 Half Elf 5 years ago
- 79 Empryean Beast 5 years ago
- 80 Talk 5 years ago
- 81 Ahhhhh! 5 years ago
- 82 The Continental 5 years ago
- 83 Codename: Two 5 years ago
- 84 Shadow 5 years ago
- 85 We, The Assassins! 5 years ago
- 86 Heading Back 5 years ago
- 87 Meeting 5 years ago
- 88 Dark Viper 5 years ago
- 89 Trouble 5 years ago
- 90 Tremble! 5 years ago
- 91 Yeah, I Thought So 5 years ago
- 92 Run! Shadow Dance! 5 years ago
- 93 Pathetic Sight 5 years ago
- 94 Fragment of the Night King 5 years ago
- 95 Mine Tech Industries, The Continental 5 years ago
- 96 Orphanage 5 years ago
- 97 Catch It! 5 years ago
- 98 Young Vs Old 5 years ago
- 99 Big Day For The Kids 5 years ago
- 100 Relatives 5 years ago
- 101 Firefight! 5 years ago
- 102 Making Waves! 5 years ago
- 103 The Seven Sins 5 years ago
- 104 Dragon Race 5 years ago
- 105 Conflict 5 years ago
- 106 Finally! 5 years ago
- 107 Tom and Jerry 5 years ago
- 108 Valley of Alnuut 5 years ago
- 109 Hideout! 5 years ago
- 110 Death Is The Ultimate Form Of Escape 5 years ago
- 111 Fierce Beasts 5 years ago
- 112 Revenants (1) 5 years ago
- 113 Revenants (2) 5 years ago
- 114 Athena and Dylan 5 years ago
- 115 Teacher (1) 5 years ago
- 116 Teacher (2) 5 years ago
- 117 Surging Brothers (1) 5 years ago
- 118 Surging Brothers (2) 5 years ago
- 119 Radiant Adventurer’s Necklace 5 years ago
- 120 Calderock Village 5 years ago
- 121 League of Hunters (1) 5 years ago
- 122 League of Hunters (2) 5 years ago
- 123 Kicked Out! 5 years ago
- 124 Church of the Wild (1) 4 years ago
- 125 Church of the Wild (1) 4 years ago
- 126 Piece of Trash (1) 4 years ago
- 127 Piece of Trash (2) 4 years ago
- 128 Puzzle...Solved!? 4 years ago
- 129 Pummeled 4 years ago
- 130 Bounty! 4 years ago
- 131 Four Leaf Clover 4 years ago
- 132 Hedwig Silverstar 4 years ago
- 133 Hedwig Silverstar (2) 4 years ago
- 134 Undercurrents (1) 4 years ago
- 135 Undercurrents (2) 4 years ago
- 136 The Night King! 4 years ago
- 137 Expedition, General Ouki 4 years ago
- 138 Girl Power 4 years ago
- 139 Herbs 4 years ago
- 140 Expedition, Start! 4 years ago
- 141 Enemy Attack! 4 years ago
- 142 Leading The Battle 4 years ago
- 143 Dayum! 4 years ago
- 144 Military Officer 4 years ago
- 145 Wolf Den 4 years ago
- 146 Run B*itch, Run! 4 years ago
- 147 To Be The Best! 4 years ago
- 148 How Come I Suddenly Don’t Understand Shit!? (1) 4 years ago
- 149 How Come I Suddenly Don’t Understand Shit!? (2) 4 years ago
- 150 Gift 4 years ago
- 151 This Damn Rabbit! 4 years ago
- 152 Poor Him 4 years ago
- 153 Get Your A** Down Here! 4 years ago
- 154 Oh My God! What The Freak Just Happened!? 4 years ago
- 155 For Being Annoying 4 years ago
- 156 Why are the two of you here? 4 years ago
- 157 F*ck off! 4 years ago
- 158 I’ll Bet A Thousand Dollars! 4 years ago
- 159 Mr. Randy 4 years ago
- 160 I Will Make His Life A Living Hell! 4 years ago
- 161 Warning 4 years ago
- 162 Lionett Household (1) 4 years ago
- 163 Lionett Household (2) 4 years ago
- 164 Lionett Household (3) 4 years ago
- 165 Happy New Year! 4 years ago
- 166 Back at Calderock Village 4 years ago
- 167 Huh!? 4 years ago
- 168 Beauty! 4 years ago
- 169 Aroused 4 years ago
- 170 Damn you! 4 years ago
- 171 Cowan City 4 years ago
- 172 Jin! 4 years ago
- 173 Car Chase 4 years ago
- 174 The Car... 4 years ago
- 175 This isn't over between us! 4 years ago
- 176 What!? 4 years ago
- 177 The People Behind Central City 4 years ago
- 178 Aww~! 4 years ago
- 179 Senator Reeves 4 years ago
- 180 Amanda, It hurts! 4 years ago
- 181 No! Why would I lend you my baby!? 4 years ago
- 182 Reeds 4 years ago
- 183 Ahhhh! 4 years ago
- 184 Fate Entangled 4 years ago
- 185 I’m Not A Virgin Anymore Though! 4 years ago
- 186 Don't Tell Me She Likes Dark Chocolate? 4 years ago
- 187 I told you this is a Bandit's Hideout! 4 years ago
- 188 Gate 4 years ago
- 189 Stingy Brat! 4 years ago
- 190 A man’s dream come true! 4 years ago
- 191 I'm not a parrot 4 years ago
- 192 That's Odd 4 years ago
- 193 Galatine Silver Sword 4 years ago
- 194 You Really Should Buy a New Mount 4 years ago
- 195 Hidden 4 years ago
- 196 What a bunch of Puss**s! 4 years ago
- 197 You're a Dad! 4 years ago
- 198 Beast Takeover 4 years ago
- 199 Meeting her again 4 years ago
- 200 Fack! Do you know how hard it is to take care of kids? 4 years ago
- 201 Viper and The Two Sisters 4 years ago
- 202 How dare you! 4 years ago
- 203 We're just doing a rehearsal! Sorry! 4 years ago
- 204 Behemoth 4 years ago
- 205 A date? 4 years ago
- 206 What do you want? 4 years ago
- 207 Steve Coventry 4 years ago
- 208 I am a Prince! 4 years ago
- 209 I had fun today! 4 years ago
- 210 You're here again 4 years ago
- 211 Wickan 4 years ago
- 212 Summer 4 years ago
- 213 The App 4 years ago
- 214 It's brand new 4 years ago
- 215 Reign of Terror 4 years ago
- 216 Fate loves to play around 4 years ago
- 217 Monsters 4 years ago
- 218 Blood Knives 4 years ago
- 219 Token 4 years ago
- 220 Flame Rose Guild 4 years ago
- 221 Black Genesis 4 years ago
- 222 Shut up, old man! 4 years ago
- 223 I want him...DEAD! 4 years ago
- 224 Imminent Clash 4 years ago
- 225 The Deadly Cheeseburger 4 years ago
- 226 You...you bitch! 4 years ago
- 227 What the hell, so irresponsible! 4 years ago
- 228 Town of Suaron 4 years ago
- 229 Earl's State 4 years ago
- 230 Arriving at the Earl's Estate 4 years ago
- 231 Six Sages 4 years ago
- 232 Darkness 4 years ago
- 233 Bandits 4 years ago
- 234 Soul Crash! 4 years ago
- 235 Everwinter 4 years ago
- 236 Ice Troll 4 years ago
- 237 Ice and Fire 4 years ago
- 238 Frost Dragon 4 years ago
- 239 Outlander 4 years ago
- 240 Seth's Lair 4 years ago
- 241 Seth's Undead Lair (1) 4 years ago
- 242 Are you shitting me right now? 4 years ago
- 243 The Traveling Merchant 4 years ago
- 244 Dullahan 4 years ago
- 245 A New Companion 4 years ago
- 246 Crazy Sage 4 years ago
- 247 Faith 4 years ago
- 248 This is trouble 4 years ago
- 249 Dungeon Boss 4 years ago
- 250 Uprising of the Dead 4 years ago
- 251 Meeting in Real Life 4 years ago
- 252 Meeting in Real Life (2) 4 years ago
- 253 Trouble Comes Knocking! 4 years ago
- 254 Heading Home 4 years ago
- 255 Police Station (1) 4 years ago
- 256 Police Station (2) 4 years ago
- 257 Police Station (3) 4 years ago
- 258 Mission: Secure Food! 4 years ago
- 259 Winter Horned Bear 4 years ago
- 260 Converging In One Point 4 years ago
- 261 This is like Siberia! 4 years ago
- 262 The Blood Guards 4 years ago
- 263 What..? 4 years ago
- 264 You Scared Him 4 years ago
- 265 Changes (1) 4 years ago
- 266 Changes (2) 4 years ago
- 267 Changes (3) 4 years ago
- 268 Changes (4) 4 years ago
- 269 Changes (5) 4 years ago
- 270 Red Capes 4 years ago
- 271 Tired of it? Then don’t eat it, freaking bastard! 4 years ago
- 272 What an asshole 4 years ago
- 273 Oh my...god! 4 years ago
- 274 What a poor sod! 4 years ago
- 275 That...I'm a Dragon 4 years ago
- 276 Mount Rasborg (1) 4 years ago
- 277 Mount Rasborg (2) 4 years ago
- 278 Mount Rasborg (3) 4 years ago
- 279 Daisy!? 4 years ago
- 280 Get Lost 4 years ago
- 281 What happened to him? 4 years ago
- 282 We're not afraid of causing trouble. 4 years ago
- 283 Tomorrow!? 4 years ago
- 284 Scary Motherf*ckers 4 years ago
- 285 You freaking bastard! 4 years ago
- 286 A Huge Storm Is Looming Over 4 years ago
- 287 Collision (1) 4 years ago
- 288 Collision (2) 4 years ago
- 289 Collision (3) 4 years ago
- 290 Collision (4) 4 years ago
- 291 Collision (End) 4 years ago
- 292 Damn! 4 years ago
- 293 This sh*t is scary! 4 years ago
- 294 Orc Keechi 4 years ago
- 295 Morgash 4 years ago
- 296 Generals 4 years ago
- 297 Meanwhile 4 years ago
- 298 Talks 4 years ago
- 299 FIRE!!! 4 years ago
- 300 Where the f*ck is Kora? 4 years ago
- 301 Care to Spar? 4 years ago
- 302 Pursuit 4 years ago
- 303 GO! 4 years ago
- 304 Chase 4 years ago
- 305 Thunder Bluff Chieftain: Orgar 4 years ago
- 306 Zero 4 years ago
- 307 Money Grubbing Bastard 4 years ago
- 308 We're having a baby! 4 years ago
- 309 You Promised! 4 years ago
- 310 Deadly Arts 3 years ago
- 311 Intruders 3 years ago
- 312 Kabuki Mask 3 years ago
- 313 Joker Cards 3 years ago
- 314 Master Lin and the Party 3 years ago
- 315 Michael and The Princess 3 years ago
- 316 The Azure Gang 3 years ago
- 317 De Luna Inn 3 years ago
- 318 Joker Cards 3 years ago
- 319 Hijacking 3 years ago
- 320 Home 3 years ago
- 321 It's Hard To Act Cool and Mysterious 3 years ago
- 322 Short Face-Off! 3 years ago
- 323 Skill UP 3 years ago
- 324 Fire and Water 3 years ago
- 325 Werebears 3 years ago
- 326 Dark Secrets [Happy New Year!] 3 years ago
- 327 March of the Undead 3 years ago
- 328 Zimura Church 3 years ago
- 329 Psycho 3 years ago
- 330 Woman, Chill! 3 years ago
- 331 I can't help it! 3 years ago
- 332 A changed man. 3 years ago
- 333 Someone Familiar 3 years ago
- 334 Airport Thief 3 years ago
- 335 Lan and Ashe 3 years ago
- 336 Lurking Danger 3 years ago
- 337 Louis and Gunner 3 years ago
- 338 Rogue Monk 3 years ago
- 339 That Will Get You Killed One Day! 3 years ago
- 340 Pearl Nation 3 years ago
- 341 Guide 3 years ago
- 342 Of course, It would be me 3 years ago
- 343 Count's Mansion 3 years ago
- 344 Since When Was She The Boss? 3 years ago
- 345 Mine Tech. Industries 3 years ago
- 346 Shopping 3 years ago
- 347 I'll be seeing you soon. 3 years ago
- 348 Five Down, More to go. 3 years ago
- 349 Alone and Craziness 3 years ago
- 350 And I'm Jealous! 3 years ago
- 351 Absurd Request 3 years ago
- 352 I'm Buying All of Them! 3 years ago
- 353 All Done 3 years ago
- 354 A Futile Attempt 3 years ago
- 355 Piece of Crap 3 years ago
- 356 Meeting Her Parents 3 years ago
- 357 An Old Friend 3 years ago
- 358 Old General 3 years ago
- 359 The Orphanage 3 years ago
- 360 Run. 3 years ago
- 361 Baiting 3 years ago
- 362 Star Fall 3 years ago
- 363 National Competition 3 years ago
- 364 Bicorn 3 years ago
- 365 Explosion! 3 years ago
- 366 (Read Below Before Unlocking) 3 years ago
- 367 (Real Chapter 366) Sahanna Grassland 3 years ago
- 368 Buying a House 3 years ago
- 369 House Visit 3 years ago
- 370 Are you kidding me right now? 3 years ago
- 371 New Friends? 3 years ago
- 372 Joseon 3 years ago
- 373 Can You Afford It? 3 years ago
- 374 Give Me All Your Money Or Else... 3 years ago
- 375 Dragon Valley 3 years ago
- 376 Fear 3 years ago
- 377 The Tonight Show 3 years ago
- 378 Rabbit 3 years ago
- 379 Signature 3 years ago
- 380 What...? 3 years ago
- 381 Almost 3 years ago
- 382 Last Meeting? 3 years ago
- 383 Taken Care Of 3 years ago
- 384 Sneaking Back 3 years ago
- 385 So Suspicious. 3 years ago
- 386 Surprising News 3 years ago
- 387 The Crap and Good 3 years ago
- 388 Born in the Year of the Rat 3 years ago
- 389 Hot Right Now 3 years ago
- 390 You Guys Are Next 3 years ago
- 391 Damn! 3 years ago
- 392 You're Still Green, Kid. 3 years ago
- 393 Reappearance 3 years ago
- 394 It's you! 3 years ago
- 395 Rooftop 3 years ago
- 396 Mike, Blackskull and the Old Geezer 3 years ago
- 397 Pick up 3 years ago
- 398 Setback 3 years ago
- 399 Wargs 3 years ago
- 400 Planning a visit 3 years ago
- 401 The Serum 3 years ago
- 402 Crack Unit 3 years ago
- 403 Let the FEAST begin! 3 years ago
- 404 Glory to the Empire! 3 years ago
- 405 Isolated 3 years ago
- 406 Stalemate and The Charge 3 years ago
- 407 Holy Knight 3 years ago
- 408 Lonesome 2 years ago
- 409 It Gets Muddier 2 years ago
- 410 Early Morning, Unexpected News 2 years ago
- 411 Rub an itch 2 years ago
- 412 MT, Start! 2 years ago
- 413 Strings of Fate 2 years ago
- 414 Tricked! 2 years ago
- 415 The Island 2 years ago
- 416 The Race 2 years ago
- 417 Humanlike Monster 2 years ago
- 418 The Island 2 years ago
- 419 Lurking Danger 2 years ago
- 420 Meal 2 years ago
- 421 Just an ordinary day at the beach? 2 years ago
- 422 Troublesome Student 2 years ago
- 423 Ghost hunting? 2 years ago
- 424 Pranks are Dangerous 2 years ago
- 425 Danger Lurking 2 years ago
- 426 Trouble Arrives 2 years ago
- 427 Anti climatic 2 years ago
- 428 It Happened Too Fast 2 years ago
- 429 Monk and Genesis 2 years ago
- 430 The Story Behind The M.T 2 years ago
- 431 Kidnapping 2 years ago
- 432 The White Man 2 years ago
- 433 Into the Hood 2 years ago
- 434 The Ghost of the Past 2 years ago
- 435 The Ghost of the Past (2) 2 years ago
- 436 The Ghost of the Past (3) 2 years ago
- 437 The Ghost of the Past (4) 2 years ago
- 438 The Ghost of the Past (5) 2 years ago
- 439 The Ghost of the Past (6) 2 years ago
- 440 A Ruse 2 years ago
- 441 Villains Die 2 years ago
- 442 The End is Nigh 2 years ago
- 443 Last of the Family Tree 2 years ago
- 444 Fight! 2 years ago
- 445 Looking for Clues and Trouble Brewing 2 years ago
- 446 Ancient Gear 1 years ago
- 447 Territories 1 years ago
- 448 Comparison Hurts 1 years ago
- 449 Shaman 1 years ago
- 450 A New Kind of Monsters 1 years ago
- 451 Gyeoul Airport 1 years ago
- 452 EXES 1 years ago
- 453 Ten Seconds 1 years ago
- 454 Old Ghost 1 years ago
- 455 The Three Families Gather 1 years ago
- 456 Surging Undercurrents 1 years ago
- 457 A Good Deed Done 1 years ago
- 458 Two Peas in a Pod 1 years ago
- 459 No One Escapes Our Eyes 1 years ago
- 460 Won't Be Doing The Same Mistake 1 years ago
- 461 So It Begins (1) 1 years ago
- 462 So It Begins (2) 1 years ago
- 463 So It Begins (3) 1 years ago
- 464 Good Evening Sir~ 1 years ago
- 465 An Avenger's Monologue 1 years ago
- 466 It's Over 1 years ago
- 467 He's Gone 1 years ago
- 468 Clean Up, End. 1 years ago
- 469 Keeping it Under Wraps 1 years ago
- 470 Abandoned Mine 1 years ago
- 471 Super Saiyan? 1 years ago
- 472 Dark Fel's End 1 years ago
- 473 Abandoned Cave (1) 1 years ago
- 474 Abandoned Cave (2) 1 years ago
- 475 Competition 1 years ago
- 476 Starting Soon 1 years ago
- 477 Discussion (1) 1 years ago
- 478 Discussion (2) 1 years ago
- 479 The Start (1) 1 years ago
- 480 The Start (2) 1 years ago
- 481 The Start (3) 1 years ago
- 482 Monster Horde 1 years ago
- 483 Erebus 1 years ago
- 484 Damn Big Lizard! 1 years ago
- 485 Chaos 1 years ago
- 486 Blackskull Again 1 years ago
- 487 Past Conflict 1 years ago
- 488 Dark Days Ahead 1 years ago
- 489 Reinforcements, Main Quest? 1 years ago
- 490 Enemies Incoming! 12 months ago
- 491 Captain Joshua Gibbs 11 months ago
- 492 Meeting the City Lord 11 months ago
- 493 His Majesty 10 months ago
- 494 One Final Job 10 months ago
- 495 Return to Snow Village 10 months ago
- 496 Dragon Valley Again 9 months ago
- 497 Tied Up! 9 months ago
- 498 The Monster Horde is Here! 9 months ago
- 499 Reaction From All Sides 8 months ago
- 500 Shocking Findings 8 months ago
- 501 We need you 8 months ago
- 502 Guild Raid and Food is Life 8 months ago
- 503 Can I ride it? 8 months ago
- 504 Escape! 7 months ago
- 505 Passionate Kiss 7 months ago
- 506 Gossip?! 7 months ago
- 507 Okhoron and The Red Baron 7 months ago
- 508 Meeting the Red Baron 6 months ago
- 509 XYZ 6 months ago
- 510 Are You Two Going to War? 6 months ago
- 511 Another Terrorists Attack 5 months ago
- 512 Possible TVA? 5 months ago
- 513 The Underground Cavern 5 months ago
- 514 Importance of the Main Storyline 5 months ago
- 515 1% of Company Shares 5 months ago
- 516 Michael's Dirty Secret and Guild Negotiations 5 months ago
- 517 Shocking News! 5 months ago
- 518 Regressing! 4 months ago
- 519 Title Unidentified 4 months ago
- 520 A Knight, Town of Novaria 4 months ago
- 521 Failed Scheme? 4 months ago
- 522 Weird Noble Woman 4 months ago
- 523 The Hidden Ones 4 months ago
- 524 She's Ready to Throw Hands! 3 months ago
- 525 Pipe Down! 3 months ago
- 526 The Terminator? 3 months ago
- 527 A Blood Lion 3 months ago
- 528 Fallen Comrades 3 months ago
- 529 Civil Unrest 3 months ago
- 530 He's Still Hanging 3 months ago
- 531 Tricking The Dragons 2 months ago
- 532 Current Affairs 2 months ago
- 533 Everyone is Silently Making Their Preparations 2 months ago
- 534 Homecoming 2 months ago
- 535 Do Not Test Me! 2 months ago
- 536 Village Plans 2 months ago
- 537 Noble Titles 2 months ago
- 538 A Short Rest 2 months ago
- 539 Spy and Family Dinner 1 months ago
- 540 Discussion and Noble Titles 1 months ago
- 541 Night of Deep Talks 1 months ago
- 542 The First Engagement! 1 months ago
- 543 Blazing Fall! 1 months ago
- 544 Eyes Watching Them 1 months ago
- 545 Apocalypse! 26 days ago
- 546 Monopoly 24 days ago
- 547 Dark Elves 23 days ago
Hey guys! ApocX here! If you didn't start reading this novel, I suggest you start right now. It is definitely something you will enjoy, especially for those VRMMO and Romance novel fans! ;) Don't mind the shameless 5 Star Rating. Update Schedule - Daily. I still have my main novel Stronghold In The Apocalypse to write so I can't write more. Enjoy reading! :) P.S If you leave a bad review for the story, then make sure it's something that would help in the improvement of the story, because I sure as hell would delete it.