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A fan of BTTH reborn with 3 wishes.

I was surprised by the little BTTH fanfic there is so I decided to make one.

I'll try to make it as normal-paced as it could be, no ultra-fast cultivation here, no system.

Harem, polygamy, alchemist

English is not my main so bear with me

I do not own the picture so if the creator doesn't wish to see it there tell me and I'll delete it

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Suriel8224

Nah I'm out. I just don't like cultivation novels with weak Mc. 😂😂 I don't want to be rude so I'll just rate 4 star 😂. I don't really like Mc being treated as a genius but generally weak so he's not really a genius.only special on him is his title as an mc. Hahahaha

5yr
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GGMissFortune

Many self insert wish fulfilment fanfics give MC way too much power from wishes at the start; this fic does the exact opposite. The MC chosen wishes given him almost the exact same "cheats" that the original MC of Btth (Xiao yan) had with the exception of a wise old disembodied teacher. Those who've read btth know that the original MC had pretty crappy cheats and survived by the skin of his teeth due to plot armor. At the same time he was often beaten like a stray dog by stronger enemies and relied on bodyguards to cover his a$$. Not really something that would leave you feeling accomplished.

5yr
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TheGentlemenWorld

Where do I even begin? This novel is literally Cool Anime System all over again, for those of you that remember it. I've only read 2 chapters and I immediately knew it. The hype for this novel is very stupid and I feel like giving an actual review that doesn't make me sound brain dead. Grammar - Holy ****. Why is 'that' spelled 'taht'? You don't even need to be an English major to know 'that'. There aren't any commas, ever. Don't even give me that 'English isn't his primary language'. My Spanish is sub-par at best and you don't see me writing novels in it. This desperately needs an editor ~ 1 Star Story Development - I racked my brains on this and I can't tell how the author thought that these were even decent wishes. Who on Earth would not wish to be overpowered? The point of reincarnating in novels is because you desire something. In this novel, he desires to struggle pointlessly because he is literally mentally challenged. ~ 1 star Character Design - Everyone speaks like a 1st or 2nd grader. I haven't read much but I don't wish to know more. When they speak like they or someone else is talked when they can barely talk right, it just doesn't come off as convincing nor impressive. In the end, this goes back to grammar. ~ 1 Star World Background - Kinda difficult to rate world background for a fan fic. After all, all they are doing is taking the background from another novel and pasting it onto this novel soo... ~ 2 stars The only thing somewhat decent about this novel is the update rate. It's at least daily so that's an easy 4 star. I hope this clarified some things.

5yr
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Williams0306

Finally, I’ve always been waiting for a fan fic about BTTH or Wu Dong Qian Kun Glad to see you are not affecting the main plot and you have not chosen to be Xiao Yan. I’m really looking forward to this fan fic Please please please don’t drop it, finally gotten a good fan fic about BTTH and it’s already awesome👏🏻 Looking forward to more chapters, realease more chapters please 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼

5yr
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ABT_007
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Finally, I’ve always been waiting for a fan fic about BTTH or Wu Dong Qian Kun Glad to see you are not affecting the main plot and you have not chosen to be Xiao Yan. I’m really looking forward to this fan fic Please please please don’t drop it, finally gotten a good fan fic about BTTH and it’s already awesome👏🏻 Looking forward to more chapters, realease more chapters please 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼

5yr
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AsianLadyBoy

I liked it allot when i first started, then i found my self skimming allot. Mainly because the author was making filler chapters that could have been summed up in 3 words like "He killed a beast" not a whole chapter about him killing a beast that does nothing for the story other then allowing the author to complete a chapter. The Mc wished for the knowledge of alchemy, with that knowledge it would allow the MC to become the best alchemist ever. Yet the MC wont take any pills, he is trying to "Strengthening his cultivation" first. But what it feels like is that the Author is using that as an excuse to slow down the cultivation of the MC so that Xiao Yan can catch up to the MC and they can be buddy buddy and hold hands while going on adventures together. I will keep reading it but so far The Author is nurfing the MC so that Xiao Yan can catch up. And that's just fuc king dumb. The author did say the the MC would have a boost in his cultivation soon. I will keep reading it but if it stays the same where the MC is trying to be really buddy buddy with Xiao Yan making it almost seem like hes the actually MC in this story and not Hao Shen. So far I'm not liking the way its turning out, you may but i don't. Again i will keep reading it since it has just started. And pray that the MC stops being a little ***** and get stronger. Instead of trying to wait for Xiao Yan so he can hold his hand.

5yr
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topak
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Got bored reading it, I rather read the original cause it has long word count,story was slow pace , fanfic should be op mc ,not retarded mc /lame wish

5yr
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Endless_Clouds

the protagonist is a person who reincarnated and his mentality regressed to that of a fetus and apparently after reincarnating the protagonist manifested the "Santa Claus syndrome"

5yr
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HentaiVeteran

......... Harem ......... .................. ................. ............................................... _HAREM_ _________________

5yr
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afire190

Grammar is very bad, which makes this quite hard to read. The first chapter is rather bland, telling us about the circumstances of the MC but not displaying any of his emotions or character traits. I'm unsure if this is indicative of the entire novel, but it does indicate that the author has not followed the "show don't tell" principle of literary writing.

5yr
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Enlightened_Being

5 star for the release updates and the story doesn't have any plotholes, different scenario and different plotline, good character design, I don't care if the MC is super op or weak as long as the story is good and doesn't have plotholes it's a good story, for readers it all comes down to preference and opinions, even if it's a golden novel there will always be some haters.

5yr
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Pattou59

more !!! don't give up ^^ !!! good !!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

5yr
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ZenoGardeno

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5yr
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FalgaGS
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It's good but i dont like how the Author is forcing the Mc to stagnate so he can interact more with Xiao Yan. Added Xiao Yan would have gone way past this Mc if Xiao Yan's battle qi wasn't stolen. Not that I'm saying the story's bad. But I'm still giving this a low rating.

5yr
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ManGanu

Nice plot story I hope can go 300+ chapter Vtyrgncrs tcyg8g6h8g7h6g8t8y7y8g7y68g8h7gg7hih7gighihihygyvyvugugugtvgigigyfttfyghuex8udeihsjszejwxvuedhueddeubxejexixwijwijzwixhixhwuxjwizhwojzaijaobziqnzoqzhwiqozhqizbwidwnozbwudhwsowjidnqodqsqjqdnkwsqbqo Dghhrxvthgyvbudedgjyf3seguhdbyucygrgug5gyvyvrd4vubfubyf5d3cygysyg4dyf4fud3dyg6

5yr
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Seeker_
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Cool novel. Finally, a decent BTTH fan-fic with stable updates. Hope the story continues for 500+ chapters. Most chapters have some typos though. Some proofreading would greatly improve the quality.

5yr
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ManGanu

5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 for stability update story 😗😗😗😗😗😙😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗😗🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🤔💯😂😆😣🤔🤔😘😐😆😅👋😎😆😆😣😉👋😐😂😆😅😣😂😆😣🤔😎😆😐🤔🤣🤔😂😆😣👋😅😆😣🤣😆😆😣🤣😅😆😆🤣🤣😆😂😣😂🤣😣🤔🤣😆😆😣😎😆😎🤣😎😆🤣👋👋👍👋😎😙😘😊

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Zertorwing

I like that you have created a new story line while keeping the original, I think that a fan fic that only make small changes to the main line are in my opinion the best, because allí of uso are fans and Just because we have a diferents things that we like and hate of it but we all like the storyas it is

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astral_dragneel

Another idiot fanatic weak mc Another idiot fanatic weak mc Another idiot fanatic weak mc Another idiot fanatic weak mc Another idiot fanatic weak mc Another idiot fanatic weak mc Another idiot fanatic weak mc Another idiot fanatic weak mc Another idiot fanatic weak mc

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frangky
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I really like this novel because I haven't seen the btth fanfic novel. I hope you keep updating this novel until finish. Good luck for the novel... 😊😊😊😊

5yr
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Chapter 75: Information 5 years ago

Âm lượng 0 : Auxiliary Volume

  1. Index 5 years ago
  2. Progress 5 years ago

Âm lượng 1 : Start Of A Journey

  1. 1
    3 Wish And The Start 5 years ago
  2. 2
    Birthday , Start Of The Training 5 years ago
  3. 3
    Breaking Through 2-star Dou Zhi Qi 5 years ago
  4. 4
    Insane Training Speed , Little Spar 5 years ago
  5. 5
    9-Star Dou Zhi Qi , Luck Under The Waterfall 5 years ago
  6. 6
    A Gift To The Clan 5 years ago
  7. 7
    Grandfather Breakthrough , Rise Of The Clan 5 years ago
  8. 8
    Brother And Sister Breakthrough 5 years ago
  9. 9
    Growth Fire Type Dou Qi Method , Star-Fire Revolution Mantra 5 years ago
  10. 10
    Start Of The Trip , Towards The Outer Region Of The Magical Beast Mountain Range 5 years ago
  11. 11
    Second Refining , Extreme Luck 5 years ago
  12. 12
    First Real Fight , Rank 1 Blood Devouring Python 5 years ago
  13. 13
    Training In The Magical Beasts Mountain Range 5 years ago
  14. 14
    Mutated Night Raven , Skill Hidden In The Stone 5 years ago
  15. 15
    Continuous Breakthrough 5 years ago
  16. 16
    Fighting A Peak Rank 1 Magical Beast 5 years ago
  17. 17
    Xiao Hei First Fight 5 years ago
  18. 18
    Xiao Hei's Revenge , Exterminating A Small Mercenary Group(1) 5 years ago
  19. 19
    Xiao Hei's Revenge , Exterminating A Small Mercenary Group(2) 5 years ago
  20. 20
    The Sword Finger , Xiao Hei Small Breakthrough 5 years ago
  21. 21
    Breakthrough 6-Star Dou Zhe Realm Practitioner , Starting The Trip Toward Home 5 years ago
  22. 22
    Reunion , Revelation 5 years ago
  23. 23
    Report , Start Of The Competition 5 years ago
  24. 24
    Yun Lan Sect Arrival , Competition 5 years ago
  25. 25
    Information About The Green Lotus Core Flame 5 years ago
  26. 26
    Some Training With The Disciple Of The Yun Lan Sect 5 years ago
  27. 27
    Top Eight Of The Competition 5 years ago
  28. 28
    Hao Li Story , The Final Winner 5 years ago
  29. 29
    Discussion, Decision 5 years ago
  30. 30
    Broken Alchemy Cauldron 5 years ago
  31. 31
    Grandfather Return, Father's Gifts 5 years ago
  32. 32
    Surprise, Breakthrough 5 years ago
  33. 33
    Training Continue, Another Breakthrough 5 years ago
  34. 34
    Departure 5 years ago
  35. 35
    Fight In The North East 5 years ago
  36. 36
    Fighting A Rank 2 Magical Beast 5 years ago
  37. 37
    Ancient Beast Corpse 5 years ago
  38. 38
    Arriving in Wu Tan City 5 years ago
  39. 39
    Meeting the youths of Wu Tan City 5 years ago
  40. 40
    Meeting the Xiao Clan's Patriarch 5 years ago
  41. 41
    Meeting the Xiao Clan 5 years ago
  42. 42
    Meeting Xiao Yan And Xiao Xun'Er 5 years ago
  43. 43
    Arriving At The Miteer Familly Auction House 5 years ago
  44. 44
    Mister Clonney 5 years ago
  45. 45
    Meeting Ya Fei 5 years ago
  46. 46
    Departing From Wu Tan City, Short Meeting With Xing He 5 years ago
  47. 47
    Three Mysterious Spot 5 years ago
  48. 48
    Mystic Blue Lotus On The Island 5 years ago
  49. 49
    Peak Rank 2 Magical Beast 5 years ago
  50. 50
    Medicinal Garden On The Mountain Peak 5 years ago
  51. 51
    Little Jade Bottle 5 years ago
  52. 52
    The Mysterious Altar, Natural Fire Weapon 5 years ago
  53. 53
    Breakthrough 5 years ago
  54. 54
    Exploration, Cultivation 5 years ago
  55. 55
    New Strength, Meeting A Magical Beast. 5 years ago
  56. 56
    Going Back To The Clan 5 years ago
  57. 57
    Arriving Home 5 years ago
  58. 58
    Hao Clan's Meeting 5 years ago
  59. 59
    Hao Clan's Treasury 5 years ago
  60. 60
    Six Months Later 5 years ago
  61. 61
    Sky Soaring Scripture Nine Stages 5 years ago
  62. 62
    Rank 4 Low Level Alchemist 5 years ago
  63. 63
    Progress, Rumors 5 years ago
  64. 64
    Last Spurt 5 years ago
  65. 65
    Cermony Start 5 years ago
  66. 66
    Shocking The Empire 5 years ago
  67. 67
    Emerald Demonic Flame, Three Lines Green Spirit Pill 5 years ago
  68. 68
    Jia Nan Academy Convoy 5 years ago
  69. 69
    Hao Clan's Story, Promise For The Future. 5 years ago
  70. 70
    Test Of The Jia Nan Academy, Asking For A Leave 5 years ago
  71. 71
    Magical Beast Mountain Range 5 years ago
  72. 72
    Reaching Qingshan Town, Begining Of The Opperation 5 years ago
  73. 73
    Cliff Snake, Mysterious Cave, Trashing 5 years ago
  74. 74
    Going Back To The Inner Region, Start Of The Plan 5 years ago
  75. 75
    Information 5 years ago

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