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this is a start donne well ^^ .............................................................................................................................

you can have r-18 scene i all for it, but put warning before and after the scenne ^^ ........................................................

very good start !!! very good story !!! kep the good work ^^ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

good update ^^ perhaps have him create new warlock path for his females in the future ? ...................................................................

good ^^ perhaps have him keep the girls ? ..................................................................................................................................................

very good ^^ ..........................................................................................................................................................

great start !!! great update rate !!! great potential !!! .............................................................................

good start ^^ perhaps add a yuri tag ? kepp the good work !! ...............................................................................................................................

very good start ^^ good update rate !!! ......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

very good stark ^^ kepp the good work !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ............................................................................................................................

good chapter ^^ perhaps have alisa/dany go aslo well, kepp the good work ...............................................................................

yuri please ^^ .............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

I see well her fall in love with arya stark ^^ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

pandora ? it fit ^^ good chapter !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

you just kill you story with the second world ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

perhaps have a relic that let baldur some of his power to a mortal ? like boost denver per exp ? or a thing that can let baldur become a god of mind ? good chapter ^^

good start !!! you can go up to 30-40 chap easy if you carefull ^^ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!