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The story is good I think. Everything make sense for me but it is too fast pace. I feel like I Read a summary of the story. I think you can expand the story of every chapter. Add more comedy, interaction every crew, you can bring other pirates thought, add romance, and think about effect to strawhat pirates
Great story overall the female character luna is a little annoying in the beginning but she really comes into her own as the story progresses.
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This is so stupid like really the mc doesn’t feel like one he is like weak as **** compared to Luna like is he even a mc anymore and they are sooooo young but is as strong or stronger than admiral I don’t think so no development just start off strong when I say that I mean Luna because she always has a hand up against mc all the time like da fuq
Anyone who's anyone has read this. It is possible, the best novel I have ever picked up. It is the only novel that has kept me interested even after almost 34 chapters. I just hope the author can continue his pace because this story is going places in the future. I like the progressing of the main character trying to find ways to increase his strength I don't see that in a lot of the fanfics I read a great job wishing this novel the best for its future.
الآن أعرف لماذا هذه القصة رديئة حتى هذه النقطة ... بعبارة صريحة ... إنها بسيطة جدًا ... * تفتقر القصة إلى التطوير ويحدث الحدث دون تراكم على سبيل المثال (-) MC حصلت للتو على مجموعة من ذكريات شخص يعيش في الأرض ... ولكن الشيء الوحيد الذي يذكر حتى الآن هو أن "لديه ذكريات من عالم واحد قطعة". إنه مثل أن شخص ما في ذكريات ليس لديه أي شيء آخر للقيام به جانبا لمشاهدة وقراءة قطعة واحدة ..
I really think this fanfic has potential. It is good read, well it can be bland some time. As for the criticism I would say author has left out few details or forget to address the detail after mentioning it which make the story bland, Like Lyn wanted a weapon but we don't even know what weapon he bought or what weapon he is uses in general. This details may seem irrelevant to some people but this details are what make a story have good foundation and make it enjoyable. Well that's it for now, keep up the good work.peace😁
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Good one piece fan fiction great way of introducing new characters as well as great way of introducing non Canon characters World development is good but it can be better
Story is really interesting. Everything is fyn so far. But feels like he got so op in short time. Anyhow it's a nice novel. Thank you for writing a wonderful novel. Keep up the good work. I gave all stones and ll give in future tooooooo 😋
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The story is good I think. Everything make sense for me but it is too fast pace. I feel like I Read a summary of the story. I think you can expand the story of every chapter. Add more comedy, interaction every crew, you can bring other pirates thought, add romance, and think about effect to strawhat pirates
Great story overall the female character luna is a little annoying in the beginning but she really comes into her own as the story progresses.
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Men.... what the **** are that? I fell my brain burn... hahaha I just can to say, wtf?! And.... WTF?!!! 👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀
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NUKE NII CHAAAAAAN... MY FKING TWIN FUCK THEIR ASSES UP YA GO FKING KID AND ALL THIS SHIT IM TYPING IS JUST CAUSE OF THE DAMN CHARAC REQUIREMENT Y'KNOW THE DAMN 140 CHARACS FML......
Is it dropper??????? Please continue diisssssss its already getting exciting but you just drop it how sadddd.. ..... ............ pleasee moooooooreeeeee more moee more more
Oque aconteceu o cara parou de postar mais, e parou logo na melhor parte pelomenos terminar o arco da guerra né *&%& seu zé &%@#!# fr#sc@ arr@mbad@
This is so stupid like really the mc doesn’t feel like one he is like weak as **** compared to Luna like is he even a mc anymore and they are sooooo young but is as strong or stronger than admiral I don’t think so no development just start off strong when I say that I mean Luna because she always has a hand up against mc all the time like da fuq
Anyone who's anyone has read this. It is possible, the best novel I have ever picked up. It is the only novel that has kept me interested even after almost 34 chapters. I just hope the author can continue his pace because this story is going places in the future. I like the progressing of the main character trying to find ways to increase his strength I don't see that in a lot of the fanfics I read a great job wishing this novel the best for its future.
الآن أعرف لماذا هذه القصة رديئة حتى هذه النقطة ... بعبارة صريحة ... إنها بسيطة جدًا ... * تفتقر القصة إلى التطوير ويحدث الحدث دون تراكم على سبيل المثال (-) MC حصلت للتو على مجموعة من ذكريات شخص يعيش في الأرض ... ولكن الشيء الوحيد الذي يذكر حتى الآن هو أن "لديه ذكريات من عالم واحد قطعة". إنه مثل أن شخص ما في ذكريات ليس لديه أي شيء آخر للقيام به جانبا لمشاهدة وقراءة قطعة واحدة ..
I really think this fanfic has potential. It is good read, well it can be bland some time. As for the criticism I would say author has left out few details or forget to address the detail after mentioning it which make the story bland, Like Lyn wanted a weapon but we don't even know what weapon he bought or what weapon he is uses in general. This details may seem irrelevant to some people but this details are what make a story have good foundation and make it enjoyable. Well that's it for now, keep up the good work.peace😁
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Good one piece fan fiction great way of introducing new characters as well as great way of introducing non Canon characters World development is good but it can be better
Story is really interesting. Everything is fyn so far. But feels like he got so op in short time. Anyhow it's a nice novel. Thank you for writing a wonderful novel. Keep up the good work. I gave all stones and ll give in future tooooooo 😋
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