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Demon Guardian in the Multiverse
3.74 (28 số lượng người đọc)
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The first novel so don't be too hard on me. Will read the critics.
Just writing this novel for myself. If you enjoy it ??. if not criticism so I can become better.
Our unlucky MC dies accidentally was put to two options.
Option 1 Realm of Warriors
Option 2 Reincarnation in a World the Godking wants him to be with the power the Godking bestows to him.
So no free beans for someone interfering in the work of his wife.
OP from the Start. System only shop and mission. Can't show real power because of society in the first World he is.
Don't own anything of this novel just my OCs and a little plot. Pic isn't mine too.
Warning: Irregular chapter but I will complete at least the first book. It may take some time.
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I will be honest as I didn't understand a thing since i don't know the first world. So it is hard to understand it as there is not much explanation about the world but other wise it is good enough.
Someone will explain to me why a hero is needed here if he does not change the canon? He doesn’t even betray the ENT. ...................... ...................... ......................
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Dude it’s over!!! 😭😭😭 I loved it! From start to finish! This novel was something I craved for everyday!!! Such an awesome story and I hope you continue writing!!! Just gimme a new novel and I’m all for it!”. Huh, I don’t know who to give power stones to now. For such a long time, I have been giving it to a new novel and now....
The story is primarily wish fulfillment. That's not necessarily a bad thing; but you meshed together a seemingly random array of power systems. A good wish fulfillment story should strive to make a unique character; rather then give him a host of random abilities. Given that's usually an issue I can tolerate most of the time. My second issue stems from the writing quality itself. Generally with writing quality I look at spelling, grammer and flow. First while it probably wouldn't hurt to go over everything with a spell checker; nothing particularly sticks out to me. Grammer needs some serious editing. You have some very poor sentence structure. I would highly suggest Grammerly. Now I would normally judge flow separately from Grammer. You can have good Grammer but bad flow. However bad Grammer tends to make for bad flow. My final issues stem from unrealistic character interaction. It's one thing to tell a close friend/family your past world. It's plain stupidity to drop that bomb on a complete stranger. What's worse is that he picked the absolute worst world to drop that bomb. In a modern/futuristic world setting I could understand. The concept of multiple worlds isn't entirely alien in such a setting. However he chose to drop that bomb in a world stuck in medieval times. Worse it's a world where magic and religion are very intimately intertwined. That's a horrifying level of trust and blind stupidity. That's not even mentioning the fact- That the being which sent him there may not want to spread this information; nor catch the attention of other such beings.
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Good story, well written my only issues are that your main character Logan feels more like a side character to which protagonist of the world that he is in
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Writer definitely isnt a native english writer. Lots of grammor and identification errors but Ill give it a five simply because its the only world travel fic with uncommon world choices
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I have played both the dragon age series and mass effect saga ( andromeda doesn’t count) and I’m so happy that they have a novel here on Webnovel you my friend have a fan for life
Âm lượng 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Âm lượng 1
- 1 Prolog 5 years ago
- 2 The Tournament of Highever 5 years ago
- 3 Telling Duncan the Truth and Future Plans 5 years ago
- 4 Wedding Crasher gets punished and Recruiting a City Elf 5 years ago
- 5 Saying Goodbye and Lothering 5 years ago
- 6 Orzammar and Recruiting a Dwarf 5 years ago
- 7 Circle of Magi and the Joining 5 years ago
- 8 Training, Meeting, and Recruiting 5 years ago
- 9 Ostagar 5 years ago
- 10 Lothering Again 5 years ago
- 11 Redcliffe Battle Preparation 5 years ago
- 12 Redcliffe Battle and Recliffe Castle 5 years ago
- 13 Haven and unexpected Company 5 years ago
- 14 Orzammar and their Politics 5 years ago
- 15 Caridin or Branka 5 years ago
- 16 Training, Killing, Scheming and more Training 5 years ago
- 17 Crowning a Dwarf and Recruiting 5 years ago
- 18 Landsmeet 5 years ago
- 19 Battle over Denerim 5 years ago
- 20 Celebrating and saying Goodbyes 5 years ago
- 21 Kirkwall 5 years ago
- 22 Justice's Inside World 5 years ago
- 23 Problem with the Guard Captain. 5 years ago
- 24 Sundermount 5 years ago
- 25 An Elf, a Pirate, a Prince, and a Mage 5 years ago
- 26 A Cave full of Mages and Bone Pit Cave 5 years ago
- 27 Qunari and Expedition problems 5 years ago
- 28 Qunari missing and Serial Killer case 5 years ago
- 29 Meeting old Friends, Helping an Elf and Bertrand's return 5 years ago
- 30 Qunari Invasion 5 years ago
- 31 Visiting Ferelden 5 years ago
- 32 Family time and finding some Mages 5 years ago
- 33 Helping the Mages and Battle against Meredith 5 years ago
- 34 Nathaniel and Velanna, and finding Corypheus and saying Goodbye 5 years ago
- 35 Gifts and Shopping Time 5 years ago
- 36 Logan's training and Family Reunion 5 years ago
- 37 Skyhold, meeting old Friends 5 years ago
- 38 Emerald Graves 5 years ago
- 39 Winter Palace 5 years ago
- 40 Conversation with Morrigan, Crestwood and Visiting Denerim again 5 years ago
- 41 Fortress Adamant 5 years ago
- 42 Arbor Wilds and Sealing Corypheus 5 years ago
- 43 Marriages and Training for the next World 5 years ago
- 44 Summoned Unwillingly, Saying Goodbye and Entering Konoha 5 years ago
- 45 Naruto's Return 5 years ago
- 46 Kakashi's Test 5 years ago
- 47 Rescue Mission 5 years ago
- 48 Sion Usual Morning and Studying with Ino 5 years ago
- 49 Yamato's Teamwork Training and Telling Ino the Truth 5 years ago
- 50 Tenchi Bridge and Capturing Sasuke 5 years ago
- 51 Training time 5 years ago
- 52 Fighting a God 5 years ago
- 53 Annihilation of a Clan and getting another Son 5 years ago
- 54 Shura Visits 5 years ago
- 55 Pain 5 years ago
- 56 Helping Naruto with Kurama and bringing some People back 5 years ago
- 57 Talking between Friends 5 years ago
- 58 Kage Summit 5 years ago
- 59 Preparation for War 5 years ago
- 60 Ino and Sion, Training, and the War begins 5 years ago
- 61 Fourth Shinobi World War part 1 5 years ago
- 62 Fourth Shinobi World War part 2 5 years ago
- 63 End of the War 5 years ago
- 64 Visiting Thedas part 1 5 years ago
- 65 Visiting Thedas part 2 5 years ago
- 66 Visiting Thedas part 3 5 years ago
- 67 Visiting Thedas final 5 years ago
- 68 Logan Training and Naruto's Wedding 5 years ago
- 69 Wedding, Training, And Puppies 5 years ago
- 70 Firearm Training and Farewell 5 years ago
- 71 Meeting David Anderson 5 years ago
- 72 Fighting between Sion and Gabriel 5 years ago
- 73 Being Recruited 5 years ago
- 74 Meeting the Crew 5 years ago
- 75 Horizon 5 years ago
- 76 Saving Colonist and Next Destination Illium 5 years ago
- 77 Helping Liara 5 years ago
- 78 Recruiting Samara and Thane 5 years ago
- 79 Recruiting Tali'Zorah 5 years ago
- 80 Training the Squad and Curing Thane and Tali 5 years ago
- 81 Family Time 5 years ago
- 82 Tuchanka part 1 5 years ago
- 83 Tuchanka part 2 5 years ago
- 84 The Derelict 5 years ago
- 85 Talking to Legion and Helping Tali (2 in 1) 5 years ago
- 86 Helping Kasumi 5 years ago
- 87 Omega-4 Relay 5 years ago
- 88 Collector Base 5 years ago
- 89 Logan's Little Adventure 5 years ago
- 90 Family Time 5 years ago
- 91 Mars 5 years ago
- 92 Citadel's Council 5 years ago
- 93 Meane part 1 5 years ago
- 94 Meane part 2 5 years ago
- 95 Grissom Academy 5 years ago
- 96 Bahamuts 5 years ago
- 97 Shroud Tower 5 years ago
- 98 Citadel under attack 5 years ago
- 99 Janette Shepard 5 years ago
- 100 Lesuss 5 years ago
- 101 Angelgard 5 years ago
- 102 Fighting the Old Wall 5 years ago
- 103 The Dawn Arrived 5 years ago
- 104 Rannoch 5 years ago
- 105 Surpassing the Limits 5 years ago
- 106 Satellites 5 years ago
- 107 Destroying All Reapers 5 years ago
- 108 The Only Person A Wyrm Truly Fears 5 years ago
- 109 Wedding of Tali and Aaron 5 years ago
- 110 Logan Breaks In 5 years ago
- 111 Teaching the Masters 5 years ago
- 112 Bringing Kenichi to Ryozanpaku 5 years ago
- 113 First Day of Practice 5 years ago
- 114 Kenichi's First Fight 5 years ago
- 115 Saijo vs Kenichi 5 years ago
- 116 Meeting Kenichi's Mother and Sister 5 years ago
- 117 Amazon Lily 5 years ago
- 118 Luffy vs The Gorgon Sisters 5 years ago
- 119 Breaking into Impel Down 5 years ago
- 120 Breakout of Impel Down 5 years ago
- 121 The Old Team Is Back 5 years ago
- 122 Abigail's Rage 5 years ago
- 123 Training Kenichi 5 years ago
- 124 Kenichi vs. Raichi 5 years ago
- 125 Logan dealing with his crisis 5 years ago
- 126 Informing Ryozanpaku 5 years ago
- 127 The Day before the Battle 5 years ago
- 128 Wyrms vs Yami 5 years ago
- 129 Meeting Zeno 5 years ago
- 130 Killing Goku 5 years ago
- 131 Meeting Dumbledore 5 years ago
- 132 Diagon Alley 5 years ago
- 133 Baby Alduin 5 years ago
- 134 Ciri's First Step in Magic 5 years ago
- 135 Meeting Harry Potter 5 years ago
- 136 First Lesson 5 years ago
- 137 Draco vs Harry 5 years ago
- 138 Return to Hogwarts 5 years ago
- 139 Exam Failure 5 years ago
- 140 Summoned by a Pink-Haired Girl 5 years ago
- 141 Meeting Tiffania 5 years ago
- 142 Tiffania's Familiar 5 years ago
- 143 Preparation for the Training 5 years ago
- 144 Discussion with Karin 5 years ago
- 145 Louise receives a Gift 5 years ago
- 146 Training the Group 5 years ago
- 147 Louise meeting Henrietta again 5 years ago
- 148 Cyrion Wyrm 5 years ago
- 149 Lagdorian Lake 5 years ago
- 150 Meeting between Cyrion and Logan 5 years ago
- 151 Logan in the MCU 5 years ago
- 152 Not Worthy 5 years ago
- 153 Infiltrating Newcastle 5 years ago
- 154 Escaping Newcastle 5 years ago
- 155 Killing Cromwell 5 years ago
- 156 Returning to Tristain 5 years ago
- 157 Returning to Hogwarts 5 years ago
- 158 Planning the Battle 5 years ago
- 159 Voldemort's Death 5 years ago
- 160 Logan Visiting Gabriel 5 years ago
- 161 Final Exam 5 years ago
- 162 Assembling in Kaer Morhen 5 years ago
- 163 The Battle for Ciri 5 years ago
- 164 Necromancy 5 years ago
- 165 The Last Days Before the Conjunction 5 years ago
- 166 The Last Test 5 years ago
- 167 The End 5 years ago
sorry but this is the first time I am giving 1 star to someone because well just no it was good the first chapter and the second but then you decided to tell someone he just met that he is from another world that was just so dumb idk what you did think as you wrote that it just killed and ruined the story for me .
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