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This is The best fanfic i have ever read. it is well put together and has great pacing. there are some good plot twists. Overall just an amazing story
I was absolutely loving this book until he brought out what I assume is another universe. I wish the author the best of luck and will look out for other works from him... .. ... ... .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. ., .. .. ... .,.... .. .. .. .. ... .. ... .. .... .. .. ... .. .. .. .. ... ... .. .. .. .. .. .. ... ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .... .. .. .. ... ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ...... ... ..
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Warning this is not strictly star wars as i thought it was when i started reading. The author has a beautifully crafted story with characters and then add some other fan-fic into his own. It got very confusing and overall ruined the story for me.
Should check this out for ideas. It's a list of obscure force abilities that are useful or overpowered. Not that overpowered tough since it leaves the user drained and weakened. https://youtu.be/7VpPvw7kYQM
За многократное повторение фраз для раздувания фанфика еденица за качество. Не надо так делать чувак. Не надо. Это как минимум некрасиво, а как максимум неимоверно бесит читателя.
Just binge read all chapters in one sitting. Amazing work, I am sad that it will be a while until more chapters are out, but I will wait for them. I hope that atleast 1 chapter a week is possible with more later on.
Really good story but i would like to read more. So dear author please release new chapters. No offenses. Until there are new chapters i can only hope and wait. Keep on writing. It’s reeeeeeeeeaaaaaally good
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Simply amazing cant wait for more 1111111111111111111111111111111111111111111144444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
overall I'm enjoying this star wars fanfic. there are some glimpses, different perspectives of the galaxy's characters than have been explored else where. the duality of sentient beings with strong mirror reflections showing the results of choices made that for some characters effect millions. thanks, be well and stay safe.
The world background is good but maybe but a tad bit into it more and show the area around mc more...an example would be...if let's this random person has a minimap but it just show like 1km away or something...why not make it more useful and make it at least 1 or 2km more so that we can get more of a view of the universe (or whatever) it is in then just the places he is not the places he is at...like example more what's around him then what's in fount of him...just so you know I'm not that great at explaining things so I try to use a round about way...just take it as you did a good job but dig deeper into your imagination and/the story as if you are in it...to others that want to read this and/or want a good star wars story that goes fast but not too fast that you a lost all the time then this may be for you...I recommend going through two chapters at least just to know that is at least ok if not good for you...or well ok at least in general if not good... **, GOOD JOP AND PLEASE KEEP IT UP AS LONG AS YOU CAN OR AT LEAST DO NOT DELETE IT...YAYA...B
This is great keep up the great work author this is one of the best Novels ive Read het and nr 1 star wars story ive Read yet youre really good dont drop please this had great potential
A really great book I find most starwars fanfic to be good but this one in particular is out of the ball park. ************************************************************************************************
Very interesting I like the variations in story and I look forward to seeing the deviations in the plot line I hope to see some interesting things going on in the story line
The story actually changes the plot, it does it fairly quickly as well. The first 10 or so chapters just reveal his powers and abilities while showing the jedi's thoughts about how he balances the force and their subtle changes in ideology. In the latest chapters though we get to jump into a war that didn't happen in the canon because of the changes in the force due to the mc's appearance.
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for me this is good use of canon with the fanfic creatively weaving throughout. it feels fresh the way most of it flows alongside major events in star wars. the good use of characters add to this fun novel. thanks.
One of the best star wars fan -fics I've read to date well thought out and executed.👍👍😎😎😎 long my it continue . and "may the force be with you" .
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
This is by far one of the most immersive stories on web novel. You can truly visualize and let your imagination bring the story and characters to life. Very very few stories on web novel can match up to this quality
Welp what can i say other then keeping going its awesome.....................................................................................
A Convoluted Mess. Atrocious Spelling and Grammar. Terrible and I mean TERRIBLE Story Progression. Bad Character Design, they seem like shells rather than actual characters. It's obviously Dropped so 1 Star. The world background is adequate but it's ruined by everything else.
l'histoire est bien mais les dialogues et perso sont gringe [img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle][img=gifle]
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This is The best fanfic i have ever read. it is well put together and has great pacing. there are some good plot twists. Overall just an amazing story
I was absolutely loving this book until he brought out what I assume is another universe. I wish the author the best of luck and will look out for other works from him... .. ... ... .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. ., .. .. ... .,.... .. .. .. .. ... .. ... .. .... .. .. ... .. .. .. .. ... ... .. .. .. .. .. .. ... ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .... .. .. .. ... ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ...... ... ..
Tiết lộ Spoiler ,,...........................................................................................................................................................
EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP EXP
Warning this is not strictly star wars as i thought it was when i started reading. The author has a beautifully crafted story with characters and then add some other fan-fic into his own. It got very confusing and overall ruined the story for me.
Should check this out for ideas. It's a list of obscure force abilities that are useful or overpowered. Not that overpowered tough since it leaves the user drained and weakened. https://youtu.be/7VpPvw7kYQM
За многократное повторение фраз для раздувания фанфика еденица за качество. Не надо так делать чувак. Не надо. Это как минимум некрасиво, а как максимум неимоверно бесит читателя.
Just binge read all chapters in one sitting. Amazing work, I am sad that it will be a while until more chapters are out, but I will wait for them. I hope that atleast 1 chapter a week is possible with more later on.
Really good story but i would like to read more. So dear author please release new chapters. No offenses. Until there are new chapters i can only hope and wait. Keep on writing. It’s reeeeeeeeeaaaaaally good
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem
Simply amazing cant wait for more 1111111111111111111111111111111111111111111144444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444444000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000
overall I'm enjoying this star wars fanfic. there are some glimpses, different perspectives of the galaxy's characters than have been explored else where. the duality of sentient beings with strong mirror reflections showing the results of choices made that for some characters effect millions. thanks, be well and stay safe.
The world background is good but maybe but a tad bit into it more and show the area around mc more...an example would be...if let's this random person has a minimap but it just show like 1km away or something...why not make it more useful and make it at least 1 or 2km more so that we can get more of a view of the universe (or whatever) it is in then just the places he is not the places he is at...like example more what's around him then what's in fount of him...just so you know I'm not that great at explaining things so I try to use a round about way...just take it as you did a good job but dig deeper into your imagination and/the story as if you are in it...to others that want to read this and/or want a good star wars story that goes fast but not too fast that you a lost all the time then this may be for you...I recommend going through two chapters at least just to know that is at least ok if not good for you...or well ok at least in general if not good... **, GOOD JOP AND PLEASE KEEP IT UP AS LONG AS YOU CAN OR AT LEAST DO NOT DELETE IT...YAYA...B
This is great keep up the great work author this is one of the best Novels ive Read het and nr 1 star wars story ive Read yet youre really good dont drop please this had great potential
A really great book I find most starwars fanfic to be good but this one in particular is out of the ball park. ************************************************************************************************
Very interesting I like the variations in story and I look forward to seeing the deviations in the plot line I hope to see some interesting things going on in the story line
The story actually changes the plot, it does it fairly quickly as well. The first 10 or so chapters just reveal his powers and abilities while showing the jedi's thoughts about how he balances the force and their subtle changes in ideology. In the latest chapters though we get to jump into a war that didn't happen in the canon because of the changes in the force due to the mc's appearance.
Tiết lộ Spoiler for me this is good use of canon with the fanfic creatively weaving throughout. it feels fresh the way most of it flows alongside major events in star wars. the good use of characters add to this fun novel. thanks.
One of the best star wars fan -fics I've read to date well thought out and executed.👍👍😎😎😎 long my it continue . and "may the force be with you" .
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
This is by far one of the most immersive stories on web novel. You can truly visualize and let your imagination bring the story and characters to life. Very very few stories on web novel can match up to this quality
Welp what can i say other then keeping going its awesome.....................................................................................
A Convoluted Mess. Atrocious Spelling and Grammar. Terrible and I mean TERRIBLE Story Progression. Bad Character Design, they seem like shells rather than actual characters. It's obviously Dropped so 1 Star. The world background is adequate but it's ruined by everything else.