Living life in Naruto relaxed. (I am Egotistical though.)

LV 14

Morning_Fragrance

Writing quality is basic, I started to binge read this and after awhile I saw nothing but forced ideas and contradictions of the main character. The grammar is bad but not too bad, there are a lot of misspellings that honestly make me think that the author is an eight year old. An example would be, "Think you." ??? Correction, it would be, "Thank you." Stability of updates, I honestly don't care. You write, you write. You post, you post. Story development is quite slow and shockingly when it's slow, it's still chaotic and all over the place. Reading this honestly seemed promising at first but it became a train wreck fast. Character design, I said earlier the mc is contradicting. A lot of characters are OOC. "Oreo," is honestly a pure question mark and sh*t stain of what the ****. World background? It's from Naruto and all you really have to do is follow the essential parts and not do some crazy sh*t because chances are, you're going to screw up. Very few can pull of crazy sh*t, you are definitely not one of them. Goodluck, hopefully one day you can write something better and I might see it.

LV 6

Kurama_is_tsundere

Had a great start the pace is a bit out of track but the plot is there kinda casual and OP MC but the author needs to flesh out the conversations between the MC and his prospective wives more. Show how he makes them fall for him. Currently the author is doing a good job of making the most of his plot. ** : good fanfic you have here work on it a bit and try to bring in a bit more comedy it would go well with your MC's casual character. Thanks for writing this novel and keep up the great work, i appreciate it. 😁👍

LV 14

The_Lone_Wolf

This seems interesting so I'm gonna try it and it's extra exp so I'm gonna write this review cuz I feel like it .... . . . fillers: . Bla bla ba ba ba ba ba ba ba ba ba ba ba ba na na na na na na na na na na bananaaaaaaaa nanananannanananananann potato po po po po po po po po po po po po po po po po po ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta ta at ta ta ta ta to toto to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to

LV 6

GGMissFortune

terrible writing OP MC tryna be plot armor for Naruto and Konoha village yuck... terrible writing OP MC tryna be plot armor for Naruto and Konoha village yuck... terrible writing OP MC tryna be plot armor for Naruto and Konoha village yuck...

LV 14

HHKing

Thank you for what you're writing. I'm sure the rest of the story will also keep me entertained.******************************************************

LV 13

snotra

goodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgood

LV 11

DaoistEternalDream

Well i want to get xp so why not comment on a new fan-fic and give it a bit of help to get started. Good luck and i will add your story to my library.

LV 13

STPRCOMMENDINGGIRL

Dunno what to day buddy..!!! Can u make Onepiece Fanfic too Buddy??? Hope u make it... (づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ(づ￣ ³￣)づ

LV 13

Lustsifer

Grammar: Safe and Readable. Update: Dunno, I am NEW here. Character: Safe, Not too Bad or too Good Story: It's Great, although I don't like some. But hey, not Anyone like what I like. World Building: So-So so far.

LV 13

Xumit

This is a good fanfic. But it's not the best as well. I always feel its kinda average 😂😅😂😂😂😂 😂😂😂😂 😂😂 😂😂 😂😂 😂 😂 😂😂 😂😂 😂😂 😂😂 😂😂 😂😂 😂😂 😂😂 😂😂 😂😂 😂