Children of Elisium

LV 4

Elotra

Indeed well-written and an excellent plot. I'm really impressed by the development of the story. Keep it up, author! I am looking forward to more!

LV 5

great_gamer

well written story. it flows like a water. quality of writing is good too. and character development is super. Keep it up the good work! looking forward to more chapters.

LV 4

Jamison_C

Author demonstrates skill in world building as well as character development. The author breathes life into the work, in particular Aria's interactions. Definitely worth a read, all the best!

LV 4

shrishthi

Good works Author. Loved the character design and also the story is very interesting.exactly you deserve 5 stars. Waiting for further chapters.😍 My regards to you😘

LV 5

anne_2

Wow author your story is great,writing quality good, character and world background too is awesome loving it... just added to my lib. And rated you what you deserved. God bless

LV 5

bitterlouise

Gossshhh! I can totally that this is a master piece. The way you use words are on point. This kind of genre is really needed. Keep up the good work! Looking forward for more😊😊

LV 13

MishaK

Love the quality of writing! The story is pretty enthralling! This one deserves more than 5 stars. Keep up the hard work author and wish you all the best!

LV 5

Pgimz

This is great. Most novels I can tell if I'm going to like it after reading the first two chapters and this novel delivered. I enjoyed the intelligence of 373/Aria. At first I was please let her find some to befriend and she did. Good going writer!

LV 4

Nightmare_Taichou

5stars is not enough! The writing is amazing, the story and characters are well developed—I love how Aria is! Her spunkiness kills me! This story is amazing! Awesome work!

LV 4

tara_

Love the story!! It is very smooth and interesting. I love how smart the girl is and how you slowly built up the characters. I'm adding it to my library to read more of it later on! Keep the good work!

LV 12

VL_Knight

Great story! Spell casting and alchemy I like it! It was also very well written and I like 373’s spunkiness. I also really hope that they will kill those bastards in the white lab coats who abuse them. It’s a good story overall and easy to follow. I didn’t feel like I struggled with anything at all. Keep it up!

LV 5

Lizabelle88

Fantastic novel! The author has a very wide imagination. The writing is very good, flawless! The story development is easy to follow and not confusing. I love the way the author describe each character with clarity. The world of Elisium and the talented children imprisoned on it will blow your mind away! It's an amazing experienced to dive into their world. I could almost feel Aria and Michael's presence in my head, alive. Am hooked! Awesome fantasy novel! Keep up the good work author.

LV 4

DraculaMoonlight

This is the first and one of the best stories I have read on WebNovel.A story about an 8-year-old girl discovering the secrets of Elisium, where she lives. She isn’t like all the other female protagonists we’ve seen before.She’s powerful and kind, with a thirst of knowledge.She meets some interesting characters and does some...well...things.Not spoiling anything!I definitely recommend reading this book.

LV 6

gusdefrog

It's dark. The quality of the story is excellent. The writing conveys a lot of the horror, pain, and brief joys of the characters. I only read the first few chapters and then peeked ahead to see that the intensity of the story does indeed continue. It's too grim for me, I feel unhappy when I read it, so I'm going to move on, but if you like this kind of story it has all the technical good points: frequent updates clear writing emotive characters interesting twists May you enjoy this dark fairytale, and may it continue until the end.

LV 4

Book_Keeper

Hello, your novel has been assessed and review by Virtual Bookshelf. A review excerpt is as follows: First chapter of Settings and Characters explanation: One of the goals in storytelling is to be able to convey all this information within the story itself by weaving bits and parts into the plot as a form of development. As a webnovel, this sort of setup information is common, but consider withholding from this. World-building: Not even considering the first setup chapter, you do a good job of this in the beginning of the story in chapter two (which is really chp one). The spells are a nice touch. While there aren’t direct explanations to what each means/does, it can be easily garnered from the actions following the command. Technical, and Writing Style: You employ descriptions clearly and quite generously without detracting form the story or boring readers. Overall punctuation and grammar are correct. This is one of the better written stories I’ve seen so far on Webnovel. Aria/373 and Michael: A bit of a cliche first meeting between a boy and a girl; nonetheless, you wrote their first interaction quite well. It doesn’t quite make sense that Aria is so cognizant for an eight-year old.........(cont.) The full review is linked to your title on: https://virtualbookshelf.home.blog/2019/02/02/webnovel-assessments-10/ After three chapters, you may request to be assessed again. Thank you, and the best of luck on your writing endeavors! :)

LV 10

toblerol

Fresh story! .….......................................................................................................................................................................................................................