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Lin Li accidentally enters another world while playing with his smurf mage account just after he maxes out all kinds of crafting skills, bringing with him various top-grade materials. Although his character is practically powerless, what he gains in return is unprecedented magical talent! Can he survive by himself after being thrown into another world?
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Viết đánh giáHey. Yes, you, who else would I be talking to? Now, this book here has great potential. I'm talking real greatness, like you-think-you-definitely-aced-an-exam greatness.The MC is a eccentric, young man that you'd find that you can relate to. He has no OP weapons yet, that allow him to triumph over any enemy, all he has is his good talent in magic, and mastery in alchemy... and a trashy looking robe, but actually good robe, and a magic space ring aka, INVENTORY. No real OP buff stuff. Add this book to the library. Thank me later, like you thank the deities for allowing you to ace that same exam... maybe even get a gf, or bf....(hahah..ha..ha.. maybe not a gf or bf... heavens knows many people have tried) Yes. This book does have alchemy. Not like other books, who don't have alchemy as their forte. This is a blend of mage craft and alchemy, neither one above the other. It's balanced. As for world building, it's unique. Akin to fresh air in Qidian.... No sign of harem, or of romance, just a girl who developed a school crush, but gave a gift to MC, so she won't be appearing any longer... hopefully. Please give it a try. It's a good read without any drama... yet. Note, when this review*ahem, reader thoughts* was created, there was only 12 chapters out. Milord will take it's leave now.
As usual, I read to chapter 10 to get a feel of the fic before writing a review. Author is at least honest about where this story is heading with the chapter 1 face slapping, I appreciate that, that's why I continued instead of dropping it immediately. Typical mary sue character in a typical trashy xianxia plot; a typical author's self indulgent fic. I also didn't know otakus are so OP irl. Can talk smoothly to girls/people, "manly aura", adapting to new world instantly, can start slaughtering monsters 1 month in, cold calm and collected in intense fight after 3 months. Word choice from either author or translators are weird. Don't use obscure/difficult words if readers have to check dictionaries for their meaning, and stop using words with negative connotations to make characters seem "cool", it just comes off like a 14 year old wannabe edgelord. After the whole psychopath thing, all I can see here is the next coming of Ted Bundy. He gets to talk to a pretty girl a few chapters later, and you know he's going to start collecting those Barbie dolls eventually. There are always morals that are highly suspect with these type of fics, that in turn makes me doubt the author themselves. Main point is usually the way they treat other people, it's ****ty and insidious. Then they create excuses to minimize the consequences, sometimes even forgoing that and just bleaching themselves white. Nothing organic about the interactions at all, no different than robots trying to emulate human. Like all other badly written self indulgent fic that will get you nowhere, it's never going past 2 stars for me.
Yeahhhhh...another game elements type story.. I had my eye lock at u so don't make me disappointed. The wind will come and the sea will have some wave. I will have some surfing to do so blow strong wind for me######
Story is about a crafter but his power doesn't come from crafting but from magic he learns from some master after he wakes up. The crafting isn't exciting or interesting. The author just say "he crafted x,y potion and sold them". He was supposed to come from a game but there is no LITRPG elements, no mana, status or anything. There aren't even levels and no explanation is given on why he can't won't learn higher level spells or why one spell is stronger than the other. Even though his avatar was a low level smurf, aparently he has equiped legendary equipment on it? Who does that? Aren't there level requirements? MC had supreme mage avatar in a game though luck? Makes no sense just like the rest of the story. He is the overpowered biggest dikus major laser supaman hero only because he is the MC and that's it, who cares about logic in storytelling. A crafter that doesn't get stronger with his items but by learning spells and blasting everyone that offends him. The crafting is just an excuse to make money and fame fast. He kills manticores, wyverns and other strong beast in one spell at the first chapters, even though he only has level 1 spells, just because the author said so, and his real enemy when he gets to a city is... you guessed it, a **** for brains YOUNG MASTER! (that later decided to kill him with the whole backing of his family because some girl rejected him) This is a copy and paste wuxia novel, poorly written and with so much faulty and cringy worldbuilding. The author has no idea how games work nor how to properly set a western/game-like magical system. This is terrible!
Another generic boring novel. I forced myself through chapter 1 and 2 - after that my patience ran out. Chapter 1 - totally useless, just setting for "transmigration" thing. Author never played any mmos. Chapter 2 - our "noob" MC wakes in new world with op skills and gear... really?! Migrating from game to other "living" world is total bs and lazy writing. Don't waste time on this "novel". Translation - not bad, but one star couse this novel is trash. (don't blame me - blame scoring method)
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If you have never read a typical Chinese trashy story, this novel might be an eye opener for you. The world background is poor. The characters are one dimensional. Girls are non existent, just pretty trophies that are bound to fall for the MC. Warning about Sexist content. Young masters and their stupid clans will antagonize the MC for lame reasons only to get humiliated and destroyed. The plots are not well planed, instead they revolve around the same bad guy archetype that appear out of nowhere, ask to be slapped in the face then disappear while the MC is depicted as bad-ass. Since this story seems to be built with crafting and game element in mind, you would expect something from it. No. The MC is OP from the start without real need for items to boost his strength so if he ever craft some OP items, it will just go from Easy difficulty setting to super easy. Worse, the ingredients, i mean the super rare type/impossible to find, are now appearing out of thin air in front of the MC. To sum it up, in just 22 chapters this story has already laid solid foundation for a totally garbage story that have no real goal but to use the same boring setting again and again. And, of course, the MC personality is garbage as well but described as super cool by the author. He is a complete moron that never stop to think but is described as a genius. The illusion might work because all the bad guy are dumb to the extreme. The game system part is fake, this is just another typical piece of junk that Chinese seems to love.
The story feels like a summary of what's going on. There's no real description of how magic works and game element tag was bs , it's pretty much clickbait. Long story short I feel like I wasted my vote on this novel.
Not sure how to feel about the story. Even though I had expectations about the story of someone crafting, the MC is a mage. To me it seems that the "versatile crafting master" is to justify the MC having knowledge about what is valuable in ores, plants, etc as well as be Uber OP in crafting things. It seems that the more important identity than crafting master is him being a mage. That said, the story is not terrible, but the MC character is kind of bland. He also seems to accept things too easily, but those are minor issues for myself. The read was enjoyable. I will continue reading it. -NLNL, let the rebellion continue
Starts good. Sadly, it gets bad, and fast. The story in itself isn't bad. But the author keeps making chapters that not only are short, but that have no reason to even be chapters. A lot of them you could do without reading, and it wouldn't matter. They are not exactly complete fillers but...man, it gets close.
I had high hopes for this fiction but it's a copy paste of other bad web novels. You'll find all the bad from other Chinese webnovels here. One dimensional protagonist. Stupid clan based society. Young masters. Zero world building. Reincarnation but with zero story or explanation. Etc. this fiction is repeated thousands of times in this site. Tl;Dr: It's another copy paste fiction with a western skin.
First off I want to give a disclaimer and say that I have only read up to chapter 679. Ok so getting into the story was pretty easy for me. I enjoyed the first 300ish chapters with only minor complaints that were really just me nit picking. However, the more I got into the story the more the story became a chore for me to read. I feel like the author had amnesia when writing this story because the details the author includes are completely forgotten about only a couple of chapters later. what makes this especially frustrating is that these details are key for Lin li to progress. For example he gets a crossbow with his second piece of debris. You would think that the crossbow might play a key role in the story since, I don’t know, maybe rhe most powerful weapon the stars of fury is a crossbow. But the author never mentions it ever again. Another example is his new servant he gets Norfellr. When he first meets him hes a “pure blooded vampire” that means hes at least 18+. This has been established already and there are many examples of this being true in the story. This vampire is actually able to deal the a magical beast that level 17 with his bare hands. YET only a couple chapters later the author seemingly forgets this due to convience sake and converts him into a level 17 vampire that is pretty useless all things considered. The author changes the story without considering the readers perspective and it is absolutely infuriating. There are so many examples of him forgetting plot points he could write another 1000 chapters if he ever followed up on any of them. The main character himself could use some work as well. For a character who has mastery at the very least in literally every profession, he hardly ever uses his skills to actually improve himself. Instead lf doing what the book title suggests and crafts to power himself up, he resorts to dungeon raiding. Why? Because hes lazy. This book was ok but its one of those that you read when you get bored and Are waiting for other books to update new chapters.
Tiết lộ SpoilerAuthor is stretching the story so much, it's unbearable... Scenarios that could be nicely described with no more than 3 sentences are made into 3 chapters instead... MC is stupidly OP and his heavenly plot armor is gifting him the rarest of treasures whenever there is enough spacing left in the chapters... Otherwise typically chinese trash cultivation novel disguised as some sort of western sword and magic novel... Faceslapping, antagonistic braindead young masters that want to kill Mc for no reason at all, psychopathic MC and all the other copy paste wuxi things... I gave the novel 135 chapters to proof at least some development in quality but alas, there was none... Waste of money to read this novel... There isn't even anything game-related or system-related (except the transmigration from a game) in this novel...
I liked the overall story but the writing is giving me a headache . A situation which can be explained in one chapter takes three chapter like wtf... Its like when you have to write an essay to fullfill minimum word limit so you bull**** your way out. Its like that unnecessary bull**** which the author fills the chapter with. Dropping this due to it
this novel has so much potential. it's really great. unfortunately the mc become one dimensional real quick. i hate that every time he comes to some places the author always use the usual troupe of having everyone despise him. what i can't understand, he already show his capabilities and power, but why people who know about them never inform others how capable the MC is and keep let him being mock by others and invite troubles. I mean he save the children of the castellan in breezy plains, how hard it is for the daughtee to witness everything to inform his father about his capabilities? why keep the MC being overlooked by this stupid reasoning?
Wasted potential! Take me out of this state I'm in Go somewhere I've never been Got something trapped inside Still alive, where's that paradise? I thought by now I'd find Rough justice is a long lifeline Back and forth between the desert and the sea Who I was and I will always be Oh yeah, woo hoo Too bad, woo hoo So sad, woo hoo Get me out of this state I'm in When I spiral down, it's a vile spin Got something I can't hide Still alive, it's an overwhelming drive To prevail and get out of this jail Dust in my eyes and a tear in my sail Back and forth between the desert and the sea Who I was and I will always be Oh yeah, woo hoo Too bad, woo hoo So sad, woo hoo Take me out 'cause I'm all alone Hair undone, despair unknown Got something trapped inside Still alive, it's a momentary ride I've been on a thousand years too long A thousand years too late for everything that's wrong Back and forth between the desert and the sea Who I was and I will always be Oh yeah, woo hoo Too bad, woo hoo So sad, woo hoo Oh yeah, woo hoo Oh yeah, woo hoo Oh yeah, woo hoo
mm. aku suka ini. MC OP tapi tidak keterlaluan. aku akan mengikuti cerita ini. semangat untuk ngelanjutunnya. catatan : Maaf memakai bahasa indonesia, lagi malas memakai bahasa inggris.
The MC is literally the most useless MC I have read so far, and I have read a lot of novels and webnovels. This is even with the knowledge that there is a novel in WebNovel where the MC is a literal wooden stick. He is touted to be the biggest genius since the inception of the universe, and is already at the limit of the universe when it comes to knowledge about crafting(other than a literal god). However, he gets toyed around by literal thugs from some tiny family of a speck of dust of a country that isn't even fully in control of itself. Literally ever one of his enemies progress faster than him. And by this mean while the MC prgressed 1 level, literally everyone else went up at least 3-5 levels. Everyone around the MC has to suffer because of his stupidity, and the only reason the MC is fine is because his plot armor is thicker than the entire WebNovel catalogue.
Website : qidian china Views : 21.10million Rating : 8.9(1218) Chapters : 1300 approx Status : completed Word count : 4.83million author level : lv5 No of works : 2 Disscussion : 2335 Year started : 2009 Chinese title : 异界全职业大师 I'd like to take this opportunity to clear up 2 important things. 1. I AM NOT A BOT! 😭😭. Some really think I'm a bot. Especially a certain foodie 😑 2. I'm not an employee of qidian. And I just do this for fun lol. Alright that's all I wanted to say. See Ya next week guys.