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Tortured for months by the closest to you. Described as"cold-hearted and ruthless" and yet the author in his synopsis says that hypocrisy is ok and he's contradictory. Negative IQ author. He reminds me of those slave-like existensies in novels that would do anything to please their enemy but have no will or guts to resist. The English in the novel is horrible too
guys good news, a got a news about the author of these awful novel. he die of covid 2 years ago. my god, god is not dead he answer our prayers, and finally send a justice to get this 3rd rate SIMP male author to his finale destination and that is hell. i hope his family is next thank you god.
The other one with the same name is better than this🥺 I think the story in this one is ruined from the beginning 🥺
Hola, vas a continuar con esta historia?................................................................................................................
Overall the op character is nerfed by his own stupidity and for falling for a girl so soon after his traumatic experience being tortured by his wife.The mc lacks common sense.
this novel started of great but turns into a huge disappointment. the mc is a complete retard and not consistent. he has op abilities but they are completely wasted and not used. who in their right mind would ever think that dark attribute is stronger than void. and there's also lack of action in this. I see more drama and pointless chat than action
I don’t get why this novel is getting so much hate for saving Lucy. I think the MC is a big simp for Lucy because her beauty is possible 10/10 or more. People saying that Lucy have a terrible past so that the MC save her and take care of her, but what about the girls at the bandits camp the MC only kill the bandits and free the girls, he don’t do anything afterwards for thems because they weren’t beautiful enough so they don’t get much help from the MC. I think all this simping did make the MC bit stupid, there are things that he could have done better. Overall I think this novel isn’t as bad as what other reviewers think of it.😒😊😩😏👍
So... Where do I start. I marked it as a Spoiler because I am at Chapter 565 and I am not sure if I might slip some beans I shouldnt ^^ First lets get to the positive parts since I personally like alot about the story. 1. MC: He is just like most reviews claim him to be. Hypocritical! I like that since I meet alot of people thanks to my job and let me assure you, most people are hypocritical without realizing. Makes him human to me, the fact that his soul got tampered with by "X" is something those reviews tend to cut out. Maybe to strengthen their statement. Hypocritical reasoning, right? You get what I mean. 2. Worldbuilding: Some writers will realize it early on. You need a lot of brainpower to build more than one world/ city/etc. Its not easy to keep track of everything you describe once but its doable. I like the fact that we dont skip through one world and actually get a small summary everytime we remain somewhere for a while. Its confusing to read all those Clans. I mix up some of them all the time but thats a lack on my part. Still love that point. 3. Timeplay Its hard to conclude such timetravelbased plots but so far its well done. There were some mix ups which simple do not add up but the Storyline is still enjoyable and 2 of them could actually be parts of a plot so I refrain from pointing them out. Shot: I like it when authors dare to play with the timeline to spice up a plot. Its not easy to keep track of the days etc. Thats why i enjoy such efforts. The Cons are sometimes contradictive since I like some of them eitherway, so I will just point out what I cant even out by normal means. 1. Loreparts The Lorepars seemed like a nice add to me at first but later on we get some story based on it which doesnt add up in multiple ways. I am not done with that arc yet but i dont see why a authorbased Lore is put prior to an lorebased arc. Even if the claims by the Devil end up being wrong or whatever. It just feels like you dropped a "unused material but too good to delete" Chapter on us. So far its just that but who knows... 2. Length The Story itself requires to be lengthy and i totally get/ enjoy it. Some plots get split by hard forced substories and meanwhile we get sidetracked by some other sidestuff and so on... The story could have been a smooth ride, yet it got forced into the plots we had. I like to read a long story but I get why many people drop it since its valuable time they lose by getting sidetracked allday. Its rough knowing that an author is adding stuff on the way just because. Out of the 500+ Chapters I read so far, I positive that you could cut out around 100-130 Chapters without missing the plotline or anything. Its just lengthened by a big chunk. Then again, there are alot of people who are addicted to consuming stories, therefore I would say you simply cant please everybody and it happened to be a downer on my list. 3. Forced plots That point is the worst in my opinion. I am not talking about your writing skills. I fear that all those remarks about Arthurs changed charakter affected it alot since there were many. Arthurs charakter happened to be weird but in my book it added up. Following the story, at later points you will understand some of the "hypocritical" parts... Anyway... I couldnt understand his loss of "tranquility" in the later arcs... He broke through his instabilities and had a much calmer way of thinking... which you simply dropped after 17 chapters if I dont mix things up. He just gave up being calmer and his arrogance resurfaced. Its not just arrogance, he just became quite trashy in a stereotypical way. He stops thinking about reasons for his behaviour towards new characters. It just "happens" to fit the plot. That fuels some other persons arrogance and so on so on... The lucy capture plot is based on that attitude. He ignores someone who he used to listen to just to let another plot happen, no sense. Lucy never asked about her dissapearence.. which could have fitted some characters but not hers or arthurs. It just does not add up with whats has been written. So I came to the conclusion that I wasted my time on this Story around chapter 150... I should have stopped with the timeskip but I had faith and hope. You did not outright failed me in this regard. The story is good but the way you iniate plots is hard to bear with, really. I did enjoy your story and I gave you a lot of my time, therefore I had to be honest with my reasoning. I dont read alot of novels and maybe i took it too far with the length of this review. For me this will be part of my dreams for a very long time. The Worldbuilding allows me to build enjoyable dreams around it. Thanks for this journey and have fun continuing/ concluding it :)
I started reading this a few years ago but stopped but not because I got bored but because I was too hooked into the story and the unlockable chapters I get to read everyday was simply not enough so I went and read some other instead. I'm back cuz gems like this are like finding a rubber needle in a haystack especially in a site like this. Good stuff like this are worth the wait, 3 chapters a day are of course not enough but will do with my busy schedule anyway. As for my ratings, although the writing quality is good, there are still grammatical errors here and there that are usually only noticeable to veteran readers and it doesn't help that barely anyone points them out preventing the author from easily finding and correcting them. The updating quality... Well... It's only natural that readers would never find the chapter releases enough no matter how many are released every week and the same goes for me but I'd say the stability is good enough as it is (don't take my word for it though, I've yet to catch up to the latest chapters). As for the rest, well they're great.
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wandered why am I wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked )
I am not good in writing reviews, mainly due to my english. But I wanted to give you encouragement TheCrow. I love the family dynamic in your novel, the world building and the epic fights! i mean none of the novels i have read have fricking +4 universes with interesting differences and connections. i am hyped to find out what will happen next! I love the three brother thing you have created between the joker, the nameless night and arthur, because it is not like the typical 1 vs the univers and he somehow wins. The lore is also very interessting with the gods and how everything happend. The one thing i kind of dislike is the jumping around between objectivs. it feels like the MCs objektive is being pushed around in the arc and their sub-arc. Another thing i would hope for more often is that the MC and the crew get a break. i know there are some chill parts in the story like the wedding but they are so small. i mean the wedding was like 3 chapters at most. I myself would love to have a bit more description about the characters other than their hair colour (lol). Yes, arthur and lucy have been described quite well. but people like Gutcha, who i quite like, has almost no description about him other than his face looking ugly. I think the story would be even more enjoyable when the enimies would have a deeper description. you can mabye decribe their face more or what they are wearing. All in all I love your story! It has so much potencial! Lots of love Aloe! PS: Don´t be discuraged from those 1 Star "the story is ****"-reviews PSS: I am very sorry about my bad english
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Hey Author. I'm currently on chapter 169 and i wanted to ask if the story is droped ? I like it so far and i would love to see the ending for this chapter.
There’s a saying I made… “Let the lovers love, let the writers write, and let the critics criticize, but leave them be, if their a critic, leave them to criticize, if their a writer, let them write, and leave the lovers to their love, I’m not a critic, so I won’t criticize, but I am a lover, so I’ll love and only love” (The moral is that people are people, they do what they do, if their a critic, let them criticize, but I’m a lover for books, so I’m only here as a lover of books, I’m not going to criticize if you make a mistake, I’m only going to be here to enjoy your book) I am only here to enjoy your book, as a lover of books, I would give 5 stars for everything, as a critic who looks favor ably at this book, this is my rating, keep going author, this is *your* story and your the writer, so *write on*
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My first impression; a unique novel with the MC starting as a parasite, how cool is that? I quickly got disapointed becuse of the excessive amount of hypocrisy within this novel. One red flag is already on the synopsis "MC is a hypocrite, deal with it" a poor attempt to justify the bad quality of the novel. The novel itself is the definition of hipocrite. A succesful CEO, a large amount of Intelligence and wisdom stats? Where can I see that? Betrayed by his partner and got tortured resulting to great hatred and distrust to any person, what did he do? Get another partner that he just met. Violeted a rule by interfering in match, yet when he's the one who experience it "shocked pikachu face." I just need to drop this.
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I love first few chapter but after that he became a kind person. After that when it comes to revange on Ma clan the story really become pathetic after that I skip chapters and read Arthur's revange and Claudia died before he can even torture her. Where is hypocrite Mc in this novel. He is more like a masochist character
i really wanted to stop reading when the mc fell for a girl and became a simp. i also wanted to stop when i saw that the leveling system is messed up. now i WILL stop reading. instead of killing his enemies he spares them. then he give precious treasures because he regrets punishing someone that went against him. trash novel, good idea
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout
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Its trash read some othere revews and youl see I dont want to take time and write a revew on this trash novel when theres already others out there.
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I think this book along with Crows other books are excellent stories and I can’t recommence them all enough. Grammatical wise there are some errors but nothing that spoils the story in any way
Tortured for months by the closest to you. Described as"cold-hearted and ruthless" and yet the author in his synopsis says that hypocrisy is ok and he's contradictory. Negative IQ author. He reminds me of those slave-like existensies in novels that would do anything to please their enemy but have no will or guts to resist. The English in the novel is horrible too
guys good news, a got a news about the author of these awful novel. he die of covid 2 years ago. my god, god is not dead he answer our prayers, and finally send a justice to get this 3rd rate SIMP male author to his finale destination and that is hell. i hope his family is next thank you god.
The other one with the same name is better than this🥺 I think the story in this one is ruined from the beginning 🥺
Hola, vas a continuar con esta historia?................................................................................................................
Overall the op character is nerfed by his own stupidity and for falling for a girl so soon after his traumatic experience being tortured by his wife.The mc lacks common sense.
this novel started of great but turns into a huge disappointment. the mc is a complete retard and not consistent. he has op abilities but they are completely wasted and not used. who in their right mind would ever think that dark attribute is stronger than void. and there's also lack of action in this. I see more drama and pointless chat than action
I don’t get why this novel is getting so much hate for saving Lucy. I think the MC is a big simp for Lucy because her beauty is possible 10/10 or more. People saying that Lucy have a terrible past so that the MC save her and take care of her, but what about the girls at the bandits camp the MC only kill the bandits and free the girls, he don’t do anything afterwards for thems because they weren’t beautiful enough so they don’t get much help from the MC. I think all this simping did make the MC bit stupid, there are things that he could have done better. Overall I think this novel isn’t as bad as what other reviewers think of it.😒😊😩😏👍
So... Where do I start. I marked it as a Spoiler because I am at Chapter 565 and I am not sure if I might slip some beans I shouldnt ^^ First lets get to the positive parts since I personally like alot about the story. 1. MC: He is just like most reviews claim him to be. Hypocritical! I like that since I meet alot of people thanks to my job and let me assure you, most people are hypocritical without realizing. Makes him human to me, the fact that his soul got tampered with by "X" is something those reviews tend to cut out. Maybe to strengthen their statement. Hypocritical reasoning, right? You get what I mean. 2. Worldbuilding: Some writers will realize it early on. You need a lot of brainpower to build more than one world/ city/etc. Its not easy to keep track of everything you describe once but its doable. I like the fact that we dont skip through one world and actually get a small summary everytime we remain somewhere for a while. Its confusing to read all those Clans. I mix up some of them all the time but thats a lack on my part. Still love that point. 3. Timeplay Its hard to conclude such timetravelbased plots but so far its well done. There were some mix ups which simple do not add up but the Storyline is still enjoyable and 2 of them could actually be parts of a plot so I refrain from pointing them out. Shot: I like it when authors dare to play with the timeline to spice up a plot. Its not easy to keep track of the days etc. Thats why i enjoy such efforts. The Cons are sometimes contradictive since I like some of them eitherway, so I will just point out what I cant even out by normal means. 1. Loreparts The Lorepars seemed like a nice add to me at first but later on we get some story based on it which doesnt add up in multiple ways. I am not done with that arc yet but i dont see why a authorbased Lore is put prior to an lorebased arc. Even if the claims by the Devil end up being wrong or whatever. It just feels like you dropped a "unused material but too good to delete" Chapter on us. So far its just that but who knows... 2. Length The Story itself requires to be lengthy and i totally get/ enjoy it. Some plots get split by hard forced substories and meanwhile we get sidetracked by some other sidestuff and so on... The story could have been a smooth ride, yet it got forced into the plots we had. I like to read a long story but I get why many people drop it since its valuable time they lose by getting sidetracked allday. Its rough knowing that an author is adding stuff on the way just because. Out of the 500+ Chapters I read so far, I positive that you could cut out around 100-130 Chapters without missing the plotline or anything. Its just lengthened by a big chunk. Then again, there are alot of people who are addicted to consuming stories, therefore I would say you simply cant please everybody and it happened to be a downer on my list. 3. Forced plots That point is the worst in my opinion. I am not talking about your writing skills. I fear that all those remarks about Arthurs changed charakter affected it alot since there were many. Arthurs charakter happened to be weird but in my book it added up. Following the story, at later points you will understand some of the "hypocritical" parts... Anyway... I couldnt understand his loss of "tranquility" in the later arcs... He broke through his instabilities and had a much calmer way of thinking... which you simply dropped after 17 chapters if I dont mix things up. He just gave up being calmer and his arrogance resurfaced. Its not just arrogance, he just became quite trashy in a stereotypical way. He stops thinking about reasons for his behaviour towards new characters. It just "happens" to fit the plot. That fuels some other persons arrogance and so on so on... The lucy capture plot is based on that attitude. He ignores someone who he used to listen to just to let another plot happen, no sense. Lucy never asked about her dissapearence.. which could have fitted some characters but not hers or arthurs. It just does not add up with whats has been written. So I came to the conclusion that I wasted my time on this Story around chapter 150... I should have stopped with the timeskip but I had faith and hope. You did not outright failed me in this regard. The story is good but the way you iniate plots is hard to bear with, really. I did enjoy your story and I gave you a lot of my time, therefore I had to be honest with my reasoning. I dont read alot of novels and maybe i took it too far with the length of this review. For me this will be part of my dreams for a very long time. The Worldbuilding allows me to build enjoyable dreams around it. Thanks for this journey and have fun continuing/ concluding it :)
I started reading this a few years ago but stopped but not because I got bored but because I was too hooked into the story and the unlockable chapters I get to read everyday was simply not enough so I went and read some other instead. I'm back cuz gems like this are like finding a rubber needle in a haystack especially in a site like this. Good stuff like this are worth the wait, 3 chapters a day are of course not enough but will do with my busy schedule anyway. As for my ratings, although the writing quality is good, there are still grammatical errors here and there that are usually only noticeable to veteran readers and it doesn't help that barely anyone points them out preventing the author from easily finding and correcting them. The updating quality... Well... It's only natural that readers would never find the chapter releases enough no matter how many are released every week and the same goes for me but I'd say the stability is good enough as it is (don't take my word for it though, I've yet to catch up to the latest chapters). As for the rest, well they're great.
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wandered why am I wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked )
I am not good in writing reviews, mainly due to my english. But I wanted to give you encouragement TheCrow. I love the family dynamic in your novel, the world building and the epic fights! i mean none of the novels i have read have fricking +4 universes with interesting differences and connections. i am hyped to find out what will happen next! I love the three brother thing you have created between the joker, the nameless night and arthur, because it is not like the typical 1 vs the univers and he somehow wins. The lore is also very interessting with the gods and how everything happend. The one thing i kind of dislike is the jumping around between objectivs. it feels like the MCs objektive is being pushed around in the arc and their sub-arc. Another thing i would hope for more often is that the MC and the crew get a break. i know there are some chill parts in the story like the wedding but they are so small. i mean the wedding was like 3 chapters at most. I myself would love to have a bit more description about the characters other than their hair colour (lol). Yes, arthur and lucy have been described quite well. but people like Gutcha, who i quite like, has almost no description about him other than his face looking ugly. I think the story would be even more enjoyable when the enimies would have a deeper description. you can mabye decribe their face more or what they are wearing. All in all I love your story! It has so much potencial! Lots of love Aloe! PS: Don´t be discuraged from those 1 Star "the story is ****"-reviews PSS: I am very sorry about my bad english
Tiết lộ Spoiler Hey Author. I'm currently on chapter 169 and i wanted to ask if the story is droped ? I like it so far and i would love to see the ending for this chapter.
There’s a saying I made… “Let the lovers love, let the writers write, and let the critics criticize, but leave them be, if their a critic, leave them to criticize, if their a writer, let them write, and leave the lovers to their love, I’m not a critic, so I won’t criticize, but I am a lover, so I’ll love and only love” (The moral is that people are people, they do what they do, if their a critic, let them criticize, but I’m a lover for books, so I’m only here as a lover of books, I’m not going to criticize if you make a mistake, I’m only going to be here to enjoy your book) I am only here to enjoy your book, as a lover of books, I would give 5 stars for everything, as a critic who looks favor ably at this book, this is my rating, keep going author, this is *your* story and your the writer, so *write on*
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Tiết lộ Spoiler My first impression; a unique novel with the MC starting as a parasite, how cool is that? I quickly got disapointed becuse of the excessive amount of hypocrisy within this novel. One red flag is already on the synopsis "MC is a hypocrite, deal with it" a poor attempt to justify the bad quality of the novel. The novel itself is the definition of hipocrite. A succesful CEO, a large amount of Intelligence and wisdom stats? Where can I see that? Betrayed by his partner and got tortured resulting to great hatred and distrust to any person, what did he do? Get another partner that he just met. Violeted a rule by interfering in match, yet when he's the one who experience it "shocked pikachu face." I just need to drop this.
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Tiết lộ Spoiler I love first few chapter but after that he became a kind person. After that when it comes to revange on Ma clan the story really become pathetic after that I skip chapters and read Arthur's revange and Claudia died before he can even torture her. Where is hypocrite Mc in this novel. He is more like a masochist character
i really wanted to stop reading when the mc fell for a girl and became a simp. i also wanted to stop when i saw that the leveling system is messed up. now i WILL stop reading. instead of killing his enemies he spares them. then he give precious treasures because he regrets punishing someone that went against him. trash novel, good idea
Thanks for the Awesome Characters Having Amazing Adventures In an Ongoing Story-line with out plot-holes and with generous amount of funny moments throughout
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Tiết lộ Spoiler Its trash read some othere revews and youl see I dont want to take time and write a revew on this trash novel when theres already others out there.
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I think this book along with Crows other books are excellent stories and I can’t recommence them all enough. Grammatical wise there are some errors but nothing that spoils the story in any way