WRizz1

WRizz1

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A Guy Who wants to try writing

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WRizz1
WRizz1
5 days ago
Replied to Lucas_Santos_4661

How is an elephant, a Fishman? Please don’t commment before thinking, no hard feelings.

WRizz1
WRizz1
5 days ago
Commented

Took it from my phone as My WN doesn’t want to take it any other way, sorry guys.

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WRizz1
7 days ago
Replied to Danule

You make some points, so let me try to adress as many as I can: If you read the description you would know that he read some of Harry Potter and even watched some of it, though he doesn't remember it all that well. Getting to the Leaky Cauldron, while I hadn't detailed it, he read the inscriptions on the plates above the entrances to stores. As for the Goblins, it was his courage and lack of hesitation that earned him that respect+his fame due to being...well Harry. and yeah it's my bad for the characters actions (I did quite the bad Job with them,huh), but I still hope you'll enjoy it as you read on an keep these things like his knowledge in mind. No hard feelings and thanks for the constructive criticsm.

WRizz1
WRizz1
15 days ago
Replied to Thorlnein

It sure would have been funny if he did fall, wouldn't it?

Toji folded the letter and slipped it back into the envelope, his smirk widening. "Looks like it's official," he said, leaning back in his chair. "I'm on the list."

Harry Potter: Toji Potter

Harry Potter: Toji Potter

Book&Literature · WRizz1

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WRizz1
27 days ago
Replied to Netherios00Zaphire

Thanks for the Review, as for your concerns, I hope it‘ll be better as I go on, I am still sort of new to writing but thanks anyway.

WRizz1
WRizz1
27 days ago
Replied to Netherios00Zaphire

My fault, I‘ll correct it.

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Danmachi: Bell Gojo

Danmachi: Bell Gojo

Anime & Comics · WRizz1

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WRizz1
1 months ago
Replied to Panera_Employee

Firstly, he has the six eyes, secondly, he has trained both physically and magically and so is very attuned to sensing things and presences, lastly, as you read on, things will start to unravel and make more sense as you go (hopefully). This was one of my first stories I wrote and I tried things out, so keep this in mind.

As I entered I saw Syr but I saw with 'Six eyes' That Freya was holding the reins for now. On the surface, Syr appears to be a normal human girl. She has bluish gray hair that she keeps tied with a small knot in a ponytail hairstyle. Her eyes are the same color as her hair, and she has a light peachy colored smooth skin. She wears a white blouse and a leaf-colored knee-length long skirt. She also wears a slightly long half apron around her waist. She wears a pair of brown boots over black stockings. As I finished my appreciation of her and she with me she started the conversation.

Danmachi: Bell Gojo

Danmachi: Bell Gojo

Anime & Comics · WRizz1

WRizz1
WRizz1
1 months ago
Replied to Xander_Paz

Gracias por su comprensión, espero que disfruten de la historia a medida que avance.

WRizz1
WRizz1
1 months ago
Replied to SwordGod007

Sabo is a girl here, her name is Ann.

Another sibling was taken from him, first Ann now Ace.

One Piece: Godlike Luffy [Finished]

One Piece: Godlike Luffy [Finished]

Anime & Comics · WRizz1

WRizz1
WRizz1
1 months ago
Replied to Xander_Paz

Gracias por la crítica, pero soy bastante nuevo en esto de escribir historias, llevo algo más de dos meses en esto y, por supuesto, no soy el mejor. Además he tenido una semana de exámenes diarios, me he sacado aún más de la Práctica, gracias de nuevo, intentaré mejorar mi habilidad escribiendo.